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By : mannahpierce
  • From ANON - angelj232000 on June 18, 2011
    YAY!!!!!! I got my Iruka chapter. I hope things calm down for you sooner rather then later. I will miss the 2 postings a week but your sanity is far more important. I need you to be able to write if I want amazing fic. So relax & keep up the good work.
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  • From roro237 on June 18, 2011
    Space Queen don't stress ok. We've been spoiled with two chapter a week. And just like To-chan and Papa's kids ok not like Haru we will just look forward to Saturday's with you! With big smiles ok?! I would like for you to be happy with what you post. The title did speak to me. I thought it was Sasuke's plans for unpoding the kids. But at the end I think it is Haru plans. What the heck that boy could be planing I'm afraid to guess! He was thinking to devil est! The sexy movements of Kakashi for Iruka-sensei was nice:) I loved Hoshi's idea of them taken care of Papa and Papa's reaction ^_^
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  • From Prism0467 on June 18, 2011
    Publish when you are ready. We will wait.

    Iruka would have preferred more kisses but being fed pieces of fruit by a naked Kakashi had its good points. So did being gently washed, stroked dry with a towel and having his hair brushed.

    OMFG!!!!!
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  • From ANON - cynaga on June 18, 2011
    [ch 94] delightful!
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  • From Dorkchic on June 18, 2011
    Which begs the immediate question of what did Haru do to Ran's pod to make it appear that it was malfunctioning. It is bizarre that I feel proud of Haru for taking initiative to get things done while everyone is distracted while at the same time being ashamed of him for using everyone's grief as a cover. I guess we can only wait to see how far he carries it before we determine if it is really good or bad. At some point he has to learn some limits and the ability to self-impose some rules (be they moral, societal, or familial). In effect, to learn right from wrong. And if he never is given the opportunity to exercise judgement then he will never develop any.
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  • From ANON - richon on June 18, 2011
    thank for the warning, hope your job situation will be less stresfull soon!!! hooh haru what did you do to ran ??? you are not a good boy !! see you next week
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  • From missbri88 on June 17, 2011
    Oh I loved crew Ninken! I'm wondering about what out kind of crews(and who may be in them) that there are allied with Uchiha.
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on June 17, 2011
    Hi! Sorry for not being there! Those assholes cut down my internet access and somehow I can't go to AFF from work. It's fine with FF.net but AFF seems too dangerous for the firewall of our company software... it sucks really.

    But NOW I'm BACK! reading and reviewing! I just discovered that I don't like Inari... and it's not about his str8 relationship. I didn't like him even when he was with Kono and I thought that he doesn't deserve Konohamaru....

    It's amazing that they all are coping so well with everything that had happened. Especially Sasuke... and Shika. I thought he would miss Naruto more... But maybe 'Uchiha' is just that strong.....

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  • From ANON - smauigirl on June 16, 2011
    Wow! I just love how you introduced Pakkun and the other ninken. Can't wait to see how that develops. I guess one of the reasons this story is so good, is because it doesn't just focus on one or two couples. Like all good stories, it has an entire world of charcters, whose individual stories, weave the fabric of the tale. Well done :) as always :)
    Aloha
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  • From Satoshichan on June 16, 2011
    Yay another chapter! Can't get enough of your writing. This latest chapter is giving me something to think about. How will it all proceed?
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  • From bloodshound on June 16, 2011
    I'm glad more help has arrived. Theey could use it.
    It's nice to hear from them again... even under such crappy circumstances.
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  • From Alleya on June 16, 2011
    Woohooo the hunt for Orochimaru is ON!! This story gets better every time I read it. I can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - lonelylulaby on June 15, 2011
    It must totally suck for the maple crew to go out on a mission then get a message that half the crew has died and that they are needed back. I'm starting to wonder if Inari is made to be with anyone, maybe he's just suppose to be a loyal member of new Uchiha without any lovers. I liked gettin an inside look into Inari's head. I was starting to forget about them, they have been gone for so long. And then, PAKKUN! didn't know he was goin to be in here. Cant wait for Saturday.

    ps I'M STILL HERE ENJOYING YOUR AWESOME WORK ^__^

    ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
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  • From roro237 on June 15, 2011
    Queenie you had me going with the title but it all became clear:) Perfect! When I seen the title I didn't know what to expect! You know me I was nervous thinking something with Naruto went wrong:) (sorry) I know better than to second guess you:) I just love the new editions! Pakkun and the crew!! The kicker that made me laugh was that Kakashi is their hero:) Inari breaking down instead of Tayuya was so sweet. C-san will be misses in a lot of ways mind and body. I'm glad Iruka-sensei is getting better. Thank you for my trip to Tarrasade! I have my ticket for the next departure ^_^
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  • From ANON - richon on June 15, 2011
    love the idear of the group of canine hydrid who prefer kakashi!! i image myself what they look like and it's funny. love the story !!!
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