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By : mannahpierce
  • From ANON - SidonieStarr on June 25, 2011
    Itachi in black nail polish ... that's hot.
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  • From roro237 on June 25, 2011
    Thank you for the trip to Tarrasade:) I have had family issues this morning and I was just now able to go to Tarrasade. I have to tell you I misses you on Wednesday! I know I'm being a spoiled brat:) This chapter was nice and long it allow me to be there as usual! Watching the boys with the cables. Listening to what Shika was trying to do was wOw crazy! I'm glad big brother was able to step in and made him get some sleep. Secretly I have always had a thing for Itachi:) I don't know what to say about Haru-chan!? I only hope To-chan and Kiba will be there by the time he needs them because I believe he's going to do something that will need adult help getting out of. Thank goodness Iruka-sensei is half way back Sasuke needed that:) Space Queen I loved it ^_^
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  • From Dorkchic on June 25, 2011
    I am happy about several things in this chapter. First is that Haru managed to prioritize his brother's happiness and realise that he should not need Ran to point it out to him. Maybe he will be more aware and concerned about this in the future. Haru also managed to recognise some of his physical limitations and, by extention, what someone like Kazuki contributes. It will help him learn to value things other than what is happening in his head or with his plans. Maybe he will also put more effort into his physical training so as not be a hinderance to others should the situation arise. The fact that Haru appreciated the fact that they functioned well as a team is a very good sign for the future in that he sees that it is not just what 'he' can do, but what 'they' can do.

    That last bit at the end with the Ninkin's crew was priceless. I have to wonder whether Kakshi has seen it, or if it something that Iruka is keeping for personal amusement. Itachi and the elite fighters would probably also get an endless supply of joy from it. Still hoping that one day they will get to meet their idol.
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  • From Prism0467 on June 25, 2011
    Day 14 of 105. And so it goes...
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  • From cynaga on June 25, 2011
    "Haru almost said no. He wanted the network so much. He was so pleased about his plan. He knew that including Kazuki made it more likely they would be found out.

    Then it clicked. Kazuki was more important than the network. He should not need Ran to tell him that. He hugged Kazuki and smiled a thank you to Ran."


    {{{Haru-kun}}} ♥

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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on June 24, 2011
    Wow. Kakashi is so sweet and sexy. He kind of teases poor Iruka... but in a good way. So, the kids are back and planning to take care of Sasuke... oh man...
    It's all great but I must say it's sad that there will no more Wednesday's updates. It ruins my agenda.... Tuesday-Bleach, Wednesday-Iteration, Thursday - Naruto Friday-end of work and weekend and Saturday- another Iteration! But one chapter a week is still really great. it's the only fanfic with regular updates.
    Oh and I'm not sure if had already thanked you for not killing Iruka... so THANK YOU!
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  • From Dreamfool on June 23, 2011
    What on earth is Haru planning? Whatever it is it can't be good. That child is on the verge of being an evil genius. Speaking of evil genius's I do believe that Deidra is in a lot of trouble. I'm pretty sure Orochimaru is gonna kill him for almost killing bara's hybrid.
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  • From ANON - SunaoTsuji on June 22, 2011
    Chapter 89-94. Woo i've finally caught up! great work keeping these chapters coming and i'm looking forward to what Haru as up his sleeves in having Ran unpodded. Interesting enough was how smooth you made Udon's responses to the journalist about what his thoughts were. it would have been difficult for me to put the correct words together.

    even though your updates are going to be slow coming due to work and other responsibilities, i'll be looking forward to your updates as your chapters are written. thank you so much for the updates and i hope to read more from you as you write. greatly appreciate it!
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  • From Alleya on June 21, 2011
    Don't stress yourself on chapters, when its ready it will be ready. I'm so glad you posted this story. I look forward to your next chapter. Thanks for the update
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  • From satterb on June 19, 2011
    Tee Hee...How wise of Haru to figure out how to get Ran unpodded! I can't wait to read about Iruka getting to see the ninken video! Also...real life happens, and is much more important than updating. Don't worry about us. I'm sure we'll all survive. You've spoiled us with frequent updates for so long. Just make sure you take good care of yourself. As always, I love the story and I look forward to the next installment.
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  • From bloodshound on June 19, 2011
    take your time... don't feel obliged to put them up if you need to put it aside for a bit. While I'd prefer you kept going (this is great stuff) you need to take care of you and we'll accept our up dates whenever you can give them.
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  • From bloodshound on June 19, 2011
    haru you little terror. What are you up to? Still, if he's anything like his Da serious things are going to happen... and i bet it will involve the zetsues.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 18, 2011
    It's okay Mannah-san. This story is awesome and sometimes life just gets in the way. Authors are peoples too so I understand. I really liked the chapter, can't wait for more! :D
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  • From blugirlami21 on June 18, 2011
    While I am happy to see Iteration updated so frequently it is not a necessity for you to update quite so often if you are not up to it or ready to do so. We won't stop reading if you update just twice a month or once a month. So don't stress yourself out trying to do so. I enjoyed the chapter, it was interesting to see Sasuke with the children. I am very worried about what Haru will be doing in this time of "freedom." I hope he doesn't bring harm to himself or anyone else with his extracirricular activities. He is too smart for his own good sometimes and I can only hope that Shikamaru and or Kakashi is smart enough to curttail his activities. I also hope they catch on to his using Ranmaru to do whatever he wants. I can only see bad things coming our way if Haru is left unsupervised. It was nice to see Iruka and his thoughts, I also like how you manage to keep the losses they have suffered, fresh by letting us see it from different points of view.

    Great chapter as always and once again don't burn yourself out trying to get chapters out. I would rather wait a while and have a great chapter than a rushed one.
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  • From missbri88 on June 18, 2011
    I hope the stress will let up soon. Stressful situations tend to cause authors to abandon writing. Get rest and take care.
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