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By : mannahpierce
  • From bloodshound on July 09, 2011
    heh, busted! but you gotta give credit wher it's due. Inovative little things.
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  • From ANON - richon on July 03, 2011
    ooh poor udon it must difficult to be back to level c !!! without all the facilities ... Hopefuly moegi will be back soon- she seems quite attach to him.. love this story, love the change of point of view .. see you next week
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  • From ANON - angelj232000 on July 03, 2011
    This one was cute. I hope Udon & Moegi get together. I want more ITACH!!!!! I miss him with his to guys. I know, Haku inn still tanked but I miss my fave threesome. I hope you are feeling less stressed. Your writing is still awesome keep it up.
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  • From Dorkchic on July 02, 2011
    You have to feel a little bad for Udon. He now has the conflict between what he feels is his home and the home he might make for himself. Also between what he feels are his duties and the life he now wishes he could have. What is incredibly sad is that he is being seduced by the most basic of needs- food and cleanliness. I hope that he realizes that he does not and should not have to choose. That is not wrong to want to better your situation and if he somehow did manage to join Uchiha then he most likely would still be able to take care of his people in sublevel C or work with the hospice (maybe as a liason) or he could realize that there are so many more people he could help should he decide to broaden his horizons a bit. He is exactly the sort of person that belongs in Uchiha and Kakashi (having learned his lesson wiht Iruka) would say that he is glue rather than another tool.
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  • From ANON - Aflyingmonkey123 on July 02, 2011
    Its really interesting to have Moegi's perspective of things. Poor Udon. XD
    Can't wait for the nest chapter. :D
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  • From bloodshound on July 02, 2011
    talk about having your eyes opened. Udon may be simple but he's not stupid. Now all he's gotta do is sell the benifits that they could bring to the rest of the scavangers.
    I like how Moegi has grown.
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  • From roro237 on July 02, 2011
    Oh Space Queen I misses you so much! I understand the reasons but we've been spoiled for so long it's just hard not reading you on Wednesday. I felt like something was missing and it was YOU!!!! I get such a kick out of Udon calling it his rod:) I love that! I never thought that Moegi had went to see C-san. C-san was special. I laughed when Moegi realize even Haru hadn't mess with the tank buttons:) That boy is something else:) The second lunch was very interesting! I bet you know what little thing touched me the most?! Sasuke and the litter!! I loved it!!! He's being such a good Papa. To-chan will be so happy when he fines out:) Oh Great Queen of the Naruto Space Universe that was fantastic! Getting to know more about Moegi and maybe the start of her relationship with Udon. They are both hero's to me in the ways they helped the family in their time of need. ^_^
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  • From ANON - cynaga on July 02, 2011
    [ch 96] delightful! Udon and Moegi are fascinating.
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  • From satterb on July 02, 2011
    I wish I could picture a less-dorky Udon. I can't! LOL I loved this update. Thanks for all your hard work.
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on June 30, 2011
    OMG I wonder if Haru's doings will result in something extremely good or some tragedy? I love his relationship with Kazu-chan. It screams to be 'romantic' in the future. Technically they are not related so it should be ok... right?
    Thank you for every moment with Iruka in it.
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  • From ANON - SunaoTsuji on June 30, 2011
    chapter 95. hahahahahah! i would love to read exactly what the kits and children were singing. thanks so much for the update even though you are busy with little time. it's greatly appreciated. hope to read more from you soon!
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  • From ANON - angelj232000 on June 26, 2011
    Another awesome chapter. I can't wait until Haku is un-tanked. How is Itach handling Haku being injured? I am so glad that Iruka is doing so well. I hope that Huaru gets caught, he really should not be making his own network. Keep up the awesome work
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  • From ANON - richon on June 26, 2011
    ohoo itachi is marvelous, love the way he treat shika ... haru wha are you doing?? Love this story, see you next week
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  • From missbri88 on June 26, 2011
    This reminds me of all the things I did that I wasn't suppose to as a child(all because I was curious). And poor Sasuke. I just want to hug him and tell him everything will be alright.
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  • From bloodshound on June 25, 2011
    That sneaky little trio. I wonder if they'll be able to keep it up when attention is focused on them one more.
    It's good for Sas to laugh cause he's so tired and so is Shika. In fact, all the adults are so exhausted and caring for the kids as well is going to make them more so. At the same time, i understand why they need the kids around.
    It's a delicate balancing act...
    lol, he might have to actually pay attention to credit affairs for a while and sell off a few planets... that's sooooo Shika.
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