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By : mannahpierce
  • From Prism0467 on July 13, 2011
    Chapter 98 broke my heart.

    We need to get Naruto right again.
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  • From ANON - Aflyingmonkey123 on July 13, 2011
    awww! Poor shika and Haru.. So sad... >.
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  • From roro237 on July 13, 2011
    That was so real! Haru not telling everything because he wasn't asked the right question:) Yes that is real parenthood! Sasuke handle the hold thing well:) Just maybe this will reach one of his sons and a right chose will be made. Thank you for putting my world back in the right orbit by posting today:) Now I know what day of the week it is:) The title said a mouth full. It's cute and sad the way Shika and Haru are setting together. Great Queen of the Naruto Space Universe I loved ^_^
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  • From ANON - TanuKyle on July 13, 2011
    FFfff
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  • From ANON - richon on July 13, 2011
    hoho poor haru and shika, genius can't predict futur, new things happen all the time. It's hard but you must accept it !! love this story , see you soon
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  • From bloodshound on July 13, 2011
    hopefully the bonding moment between them will help. Both of them are stretched right now... and damn, I hope Naru recovers, it's just not the same without him. They need him.
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  • From ANON - angelj232000 on July 13, 2011
    You had me crying at the end. Someone needs to comfort Shika. Someone needs to remind Shika that he is only human and can't anticipate everything. I am glad that you are back to updating twice a week but don't over do it. Keep up the awesome writing.
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  • From Dorkchic on July 13, 2011
    I feel so bad for Shika. Even if he had linked Deidara with Orochimaru there was no way he could predict that they would bomb Terrasade. Everything about Pein's group was staunchly against hurting purebreds and Orochimaru would rather cut off his arm than damage Naruto. And the truth is that it does not matter how tight you have your security. If someone is determined enough, has enough time and resources, and (most importantly) isn't super concerned about collateral damage then there is no security that is unbreakable or cannot be circumvented. Now Shika is going to feel all guilty and tear himself to pieces.

    Hopefully it can be caught in time because that could have a ripple effect on the rest of the crew in morale and efficiency. Of all the times that Shika could really use a Naru hug this is it. Maybe Itachi would be able to give him some perspective. If there is anyone who is well versed in taking things in stride and using them to power his focus it is Itachi.
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  • From ANON - Lonelylulaby on July 10, 2011
    I think Naruto would be completely devastated to have implants. He would never say it but the feelings would be there. The running and fighting would never be the same. Any who back to the kits we finally see some more personality from them. Kuuya has some planning ability. Kazuki is a gamer, they are just growing up so fast. I wanna kno what papa is going to do to them and how he found out. Was it the yips?

    Ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - Aflyingmonkey123 on July 09, 2011
    Caught! Sasuke is probably gonna be mad. I hope Naruto and the others get better soon!
    I'm excited about 2 days a week but no need to rush Mannah-san, We're spoiled already XD
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  • From ANON - richon on July 09, 2011
    hohoho children you are in trouble !!!sasu will be furious!! hopefuly sasu will not discover haru business... love this story !! see you next week
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  • From ANON - angelj232000 on July 09, 2011
    I am glad that Sasuke found them. He needs to scolded them for what they are doing. I hope Sasuke also found the network. I like how smart Haru ia but he gets way to carried away. I can't wait for Haku to be de-tanked. I liked that Itachi smiled while he was with Sasuke, they need more of that together. Keep up the awesome work.
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  • From Prism0467 on July 09, 2011
    LOL the kids are trying to take over!

    Everyone in New Uchiha seems to love working for Sasuke.

    I hope Naruto and Haku get better soon!
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  • From roro237 on July 09, 2011
    I'm so happy you're going back to Wednesdays to! Yea Baby!!! Queenie I hope you're feeling good about doing two again? I misses you like crazy! But I want you to be 100% sure ok?! You have me spoiled not selfish:) The boys playing seem so fun the first time down but the second time was so intense that I didn't realize I was at the end of the chapter till Sasuke's voice was heard. WoW! I can't wait to fine out why he showed up?! The way they all stuck together and everyone new what to do and say in case they got caught. Was so sweet and brotherly. Day 22 has turned out to be interesting fun and scary. I loved it! ^_^
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  • From ANON - cynaga on July 09, 2011
    [ch 97] papa to the rescue! :D
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