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By : mannahpierce
  • From ANON - angelj232000 on July 27, 2011
    I was almost crying at the end of this chapter. I am glad Iruka was there to help Sasuke. Sasuke is finally learning a bit about how Haru thinks. I wish him luck telling his children about Naruto. I love this fic it is so well thought out. Keep up the awesome work.
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  • From ANON - angelj232000 on July 25, 2011
    I hope Sasuke gets to Haru quickly, Haru needs a hug. I hope Sasuke figures everything put soon. I can't wait until Sasuke figures out what else Haru might have read in the medical files, Naruto!!!! You are so good at keeping me hanging at the end of each chapter. Your chapters are now my crack, I can't live without them. Can't wait to read the next chapter. Keep up the awesome work.
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  • From missbri88 on July 24, 2011
    I'm so happy to be catching up with the last 6 chapters that I have missed. I'm looking forward to more as always.
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  • From ANON - Darling425 on July 24, 2011
    Aaah, insanely powerful chapters, the latest have been.
    Too bad that I read that before going to sleep :D it kicks my brain in overdrive.
    Ah, I always felt sensitive towards Haru.
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  • From ANON - richon on July 24, 2011
    sasu lost his temper, poor haru he must be so scare, what happen in his head, he made a mistake because he could'nt express himself. Love this story, craving for more !!
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  • From satterb on July 24, 2011
    Oh please make it better. I love Haru sooo much, and everyone is still too wrapped up in all their pain to notice that they are creating more pain for others. Thanks for all your hard work on this story, and I meant to congratulate you on your 100th chapter last time, but I forgot. Sorry. I look forward to the next update!
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  • From ANON - Lonelylulaby on July 23, 2011
    Oh my GOSH, NNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! How could this happen to Haru? What the hell is going on with this family. I don't even know where to begin. Sasuke how could you let your fathers rage out. Poor Haru no one understands the life of a genius. Will Haru b able to make a new tablet after this one? In-chan and En-chan seem to like Haru's notes hopefully he can keep it up, I hope nothing happened to Ran. Maybe he just fell asleep in the void. Its not Haru's fault Hikaru needs to leave him alone and Kiba should have separated them. This whole no caretakers thing is not working very well for the family. I hope Haku wakes up soon he would be able to recognize the signs and do something about Suzuki (sp?).

    Well that is all I have to say rite now my mind is just a jumble, DANG! I really can't wait till wednesday.

    Ja ne till next time and keep up the awesomeness
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  • From ss_dragon_lady on July 23, 2011
    Ah, I am just so in love with this story!! I Have ready the whole thing in three days. all the stories in the arc. This story is just so awesome, I don't know where to begin. So I'm just gonna say keep up the fabulous work. Here's hoping for another 101 chapters and another 1000 + reviews ! XD
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  • From Dorkchic on July 23, 2011
    Wow. I think it is both a good and a bad thing that things have finally reached a breaking point. This last chapter is a prime example of why that it can be bad. On the other hand - people generally are forced to confront and deal with whatever issues they are having after something like this happens. So maybe some good will come out of it. It is probably even better that it was Sasuke that snapped like he did. With the exception of Shikamaru he is the one that needed to push the reset button the most. Due to his grief he has been unable to really see and deal with what has been going on around him effectively. And closing himself off like he has been has not only been limiting him in his function as the head of Uchiha, but also in really connecting and dealing with his children. Because I sincerely doubt he would have passed off Haru's observations about Sumiko as selfish without at least discussing it with him first or trying to find out why he would feel the need to act that way when it is not normal for him.

    Once again it is a brilliant chapter. looking foward to the next!
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  • From ANON - v on July 23, 2011
    My computer is finally up and running again!! The first thing I did was get caught up on all the chapters i have missed....many I had to reread because I just couldn't believe everything that has happened..I'm so worried about many of the characters..it seems like their family is slowly falling apart and the most emotionally vulnerable of them is suffering the most since the bombing...as always your writing draws me into the storyline and I'm incredibly stressed out by the fact that no one but Ran knows whats happening to Haru!!!I really feel like Kakashi and Iruka need to spank the hell out of Sasuke....as for In-chan and En-chan ..I can't believe how concerned I am that they're wasting away!! They definitely need someone to care for them. I just don't know what to think and I can hardly wait for the next chapter....I'm not going to let myself think of Naruto not getting better...look how his family is behaving without him...I'm sorry I couldn't review each chapter but I did want to say that the most horrible part of no computer was not being able to read your fiction :)
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  • From roro237 on July 23, 2011
    This morning I couldn't access this web site! You know I was in a panic:) My world goes all crazy when I can't read you:) Thank goodness it finally let me in. Sasuke is a very good Papa. I wouldn't have been so understanding:) Haru is such a handful! I want to spank his behind myself:) I know that's not the way with a genius but good god I would feel better:) I can't wait to see how Papa will handle this?! En-san and In-san have a new friend. I'm glad:) Now that Shika-san will need more rest maybe he and Haru can spend some time with them?! I've been trying not to worry about Naruto but with this new rejection. I'm worried! Everyone needs him to start getting better soon! Thank you for my get away today ^_^
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  • From cynaga on July 23, 2011
    [ch 101] Naruto isn't going to make it, is he? Poor, poor Sasuke.
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  • From ANON - V-anon on July 22, 2011
    Definitely have no excuse for not reviewing the last 5-10 chapters immediately after reading them but I loved them. Everything you do with the Zetsus, and now the friendship between Haru and Ran, makes me glad to read this and glad that you are able to update whenever. In this last chapter there was an instance where Hoshi's name is said twice outside of speech and if the repeat is intentional, the H on the repeat is repeated like 3 times and if I'm late on letting you know, you can ignore this, and actually, since it is rather small and likely not worth the hassle of going back to the editing system (I've seen a lot of complaints), you can also just nod and say okay for future reference I guess, unless it's intentional. I hope I don't only review to point that stuff out, I really do enjoy your work. I also liked the way that you handled the children's reprimand and I totally understood Haru's point of view with him feeling really bad and then people not listening to him. That whole chapter kind of made me teary. Thank you again!
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  • From ANON - liby318 on July 21, 2011
    I have read all 100 chapters and am shamed that I do not review every chapter of this great story that you have worked very hard to create.
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  • From bloodshound on July 21, 2011
    ut oh... this is beyond sibling rivalry. Soooooooooooooo not good. Maybe the zetsues can help cause they could use a distraction and Haru could use some support beyond Ran.
    maybe haru and ran could come up with a way to help distract Konan as well.
    Just based on Haru's thoughts shika's younger sib is quite the manipulative little bitch. There's gotta be something they can do.
    Wow, 100 chappies. Mannah sama, you are beyond rock! You are arse kicking awesome. Congrats and pls keep it up.
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