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  • From roro237 on July 30, 2011
    I have tears in my eyes:) That was wonderful! I'm so happy! Ran is a very good friend. The ass is turning out to be a good father for Ran:) OK he's not an ass but old school Uchiha. It was so cute the way Ka-chan yip to his brother with the message. I loved that part. I have to give the title all my thumps up:) It was dead on ^_^
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  • From ANON - liby318 on July 30, 2011
    Very sweet chapter. Thanks again for a great story.
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  • From satterb on July 30, 2011
    This was a wonderful chapter. I love Ran and Haru. I was happy to see Haru's siblings pulling for his safe return. Thanks for all your hard work. I look forward to more!
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  • From Prism0467 on July 30, 2011
    That was beautiful! Now are the Zetsus going to be offered the opportunity to swear to Uchiha?
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  • From Prism0467 on July 29, 2011
    OMG I feel so bad for everyone! Naruto, Shikamaru, Haku...please get better!
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  • From Dorkchic on July 28, 2011
    It is never pleasant finding out how very wrong you have been so long after the fact... especially if you are finding out because of all the damage that has been caused by those mistakes. Sasuke is going to feel guilty forever over this - even if he knows that he always had the best of intentions.
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  • From Dreamfool on July 28, 2011
    Poor Haru, there's just no one who understands him. I have a sneaky suspicion where he'll turn up, but I ain't sayin' nothin'. I also have to wonder what's going on with Orochimaru. We all know he's going to get his but I'd like to see what's going on in his sick head.
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  • From ANON - v on July 27, 2011
    oh! Poor Haru!! How frightening for him to have his papa behave like that!! I'm so glad Kakashi and Iruka and the rest of the family are no longer in the dark, I'm sure they'll set everything to rights. Obviously Sasuke's knowledge of how vulnerable Shika is doesn't seem to extend to his son, so he definitely deserves a talking too, along with everyone else who missed the signs that something was bothering him, although the litter is doing a good job of that :) I'm very happy that ran is growing into such a wonderful friend, I hope we get to see more interaction with his "parents" , I love how Kakashi stood up for ran's privacy too. All I can hope is they find Haru and are able to help him and all the hurt he's feeling right now. I miss Haku too :)
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  • From ANON - Lonelylulaby on July 27, 2011
    WHERE OH WHERE has Haru gone??? Were in the ducts is he hiding? Could he have gone to the Zetsus or would they know he was there? Goodness NOW the adults start paying attention. Sasuke should have consulted Iruka sooner and some of this mess could have been avoided. Sasuke being lectured by his kids was precious. How is Sasuke going to explain his IMMESURABLE fury that must be contained a.k.a the stranger to Haru?

    Ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
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  • From missbri88 on July 27, 2011
    Sasuke defiantly needs a hug...
    I love this story and I can not praise you enough for writing it.
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  • From roro237 on July 27, 2011
    Now I understand what Ha-chan was thinking. Not want to get anyone else in troulbe. But to break the tablet on Papa's mothers desk! Plus all the other stuff on his mind with To-chan and his miss understanding of the triples. I still agree with Sasuke about not telling the kids about Naruto. Why worry them thier kids. But now with all this Ha-chan stuff he has to tell the other kids everthing. When it's a litter I think news from the horses mouth is better:) Ha-chan has set that in stone with what happens if you don't know all the facts. It was cute how they all were lectureing Sasuke:) I loved it! You always give me that get away I need ^_^
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  • From satterb on July 27, 2011
    There are tears in my eyes!!!!! Thank you for updating this. I can't wait to see what happens next. This story is so good that it's hard to comment without sounding like a complete blathering fool. I just want to thank you for such wonderful entertainment.
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  • From ANON - richon on July 27, 2011
    oho haru runaway, he is difficult to cath, sasu start to realise his mistakes and haru is just a clever child, he is not an adult and he know things. love the way you made the children lectured sasu, it's funny. I had a great time reading this chapter, thanks !!!
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on July 27, 2011
    This is killing me. I cried... The real life sucks enough and now even the fanfic world is sad... V_V,
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  • From ss_dragon_lady on July 27, 2011
    This chapter is great just like all the rest of them. I love the multi-level line, it always keeps you guessing what's going to happen next, but most importamtly it keeps a reader very interested in the story! I Love the chapter! I hope Haru doesn't stay hidding for to long. Please keep up the awesome work. :D
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