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By : mannahpierce
  • From ahmenet on August 03, 2011
    Your story telling still amazes me. I have never been more enthralled with anything I've read. I look forward to every update and share what you have written with a good friend who loves to listen to me tell it. It reminds me of story tellers before words were written by more than scholars and bards traveled from village to village singing the stories to the next set of avid listeners. It's amazing how much I've grown to love the characters you've created. Keep it up, please! You will always have a fan in me.
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  • From ANON - v on August 03, 2011
    I'm so happy that Sasuke has figured out what is happening to his family and that he and Haru spent time together talking. I loved his conversation with Ka-chan, Ya-chan, and Yo-chan..that was perfect :) As the children get older and we see more of them I think it makes the storyline that much more fuller and involved, wondering what they'll do next is so much fun:) Haku is awake!!!!! He is going to have his hands full getting the household in order and dealing with the many upsetting things that are going on..but I think we all know he is more than up to the task...especially Sumiko, (bleh). I have to acknowledge that I'm very worried about Naruto's recovery, its like this horrible cliffhanger that seeps its way into every chapter and even though we smile, laugh , and cry at the antics of our beloved crew...its just there...sucking all the joy and flooding us with worry, stress, and heartache...and obviously I'm gonna have to remind myself one again not to be crazy fan girl! :)LOL
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  • From Gaia77 on August 03, 2011
    Thank the almighty GODS for HAKU..OMFG!!!!!!

    *sighs contently* Finally.....

    And I'm so happy Haru and Sasuke and Hikaru patched things up...I dont like issues like that in my own family much less this one. Although I understand such things are needed it doesnt make them any harder to swallow. *cheers Mannah*
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  • From ANON - angelj232000 on August 03, 2011
    YAYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!! Haku is up!!!!!! I loved how Haku came to Shika's aid. It is very good to have him back. I am also glad that Sasuke and Haru had a good talk. I hope you have a chapter coming up that has more of a reunion for Haku, Itachi and Kisame, I love those 3 together.Keep up the awesome work.
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  • From cynaga on August 03, 2011
    [ch 104] Hurray Haku!
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  • From ANON - SunaoTsuji on August 03, 2011
    chapter 87-103 woot! got the internet back and now i'm caught up! yay! loved how the chapter at 103 ended. it was cute how the children scolded Sasuke with their innocent way of stating facts. glad that In-chan and En-chan got a visit from Haru and the other kits. unexpectedly fun. thanks for the hard work and i hope to read more soon!
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  • From Dorkchic on July 31, 2011
    Way to go Ran! I am glad he is making progress when it comes to establishing connections with others and acting in their best interests.
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on July 31, 2011
    So we must wait for 'the talk' until Wednesday then... I'm glad that Haru had been found and that there was no tragedy like him being sick or hurt or kidnapped....
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  • From missbri88 on July 31, 2011
    I am so proud of Ran! And I hope Kakashi will settle down and learn to trust, but I guess tht isn't his personality though. I'm happy to read your works and I'm always looking for more. Thank you for sharing.
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  • From ANON - richon on July 30, 2011
    oh they found haru, he was in ensan and in sna house- they are haru's friends, hopefuly it will help them to be part of the crew. this story is awesome, i love it
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  • From ANON - v on July 30, 2011
    I am so happy with this chapter, we got to see how Ran is developing into a wonderful friend...also learning more about Kazuki and who he is becoming is such a plus, I love any chapter that includes the children :) To have Yo-chan and Ya-chan follow was a welcome surpise also :) I love how close all of the children are. I really hope this changes how In-chan and En-chan are treated...they could be such a help to the family and to Shika especially...and I find them and their personalities adorable....*whisper* they need a boyfriend..just saying..lol, I really cannot wait until the next chapter to find out how Sasuke handles what happened between him and Haru and how he allowed his heartache over Naruto to ultimately hurt his very emotionally sensitive child, and yeah for Kiba and how he has become confident enough to stand up to Kakashi. Also on a side note.....I absolutely refuse to think of a time when you feel the universe you have created and moved me too is drawing to a close...sequels are wonderful...sequels that go on forever are perfect!!!LOL
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  • From ANON - TanuKyle on July 30, 2011
    I am back from Holidays! 8D

    ....And the three new chapters were AMAZING.
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  • From ANON - SidonieStarr on July 30, 2011
    A very sweet story about the children. They are developing (or, rather, you are giving them) interesting personalities and abilities. Of course, Haru has been interesting from the start. If the adults ever succeed in limiting Haru to the information they want him to have, Haru would probably develop real behavior problems due to frustration and boredom.
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  • From ANON - angelj232000 on July 30, 2011
    I can't wait to see how Sasuke handles this. I hope he isn't to mad with Haru. Zetsu was really funny in this chapter. I hope he gets to pledge to Uchiha. I hope Sasuke & Haru will get better. I wonder how Sasuke will handle telling the children about Naruto. This was a great chapter I cried when Sasuke was holding Haru & when Kakashi asked Ran if he wanted to hold his hand. Ran may have said no but it was very touching. Keep up the AWESOME work.
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  • From cynaga on July 30, 2011
    [ch 103] I adore how Kashi trusted Ran to do the right thing. It's really the only way to teach children responsibility. The chapter was so well written! I felt like I had watched an episode of anime when I was done - I could see and feel everyone so clearly.

    Arigatou gozaimasu for this lovely chapter, Mannah-sensei.
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