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By : mannahpierce
  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on August 10, 2011
    Oh! And I almost forgot! I loved the vision of Sasuke jumping into the bathtub in his shoes and clothes and!!! He doesn't do much spontaneously sexy things.... And Naruto ripping them like in some gay porno was... just perfect. I thought that Naruto will just suck him off and finger but this was much better! Thank you for the chapter. Was great! I love Naru.
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on August 10, 2011
    Sasuke was really lucky. I thought that Naruto would somehow be in his own bedroom by the time he comes back and that he would have a lot to fix.... But Naruto is always the best! On every level. Now, maybe Klenn has some new and absolutely incredible and expensive and (maybe even illegal) finding that would help Naruto...Did they even ask... Well Shika probably did....I think they should take a male as a courtesan (did I spell it right? probably not) because it's been awhile since some new sexy meat appeared. Sai would be perfect! He's kind of girly...
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  • From ANON - angelj232000 on August 10, 2011
    I was having a bad day then I got the email that there is a new chapter. Read the new chapter & I am now offically in a great mood. I loved seeing how in love Naruto & Sasuke are. I was worried when Sasuke left Naruto crying in the bath, he can be such an ASS sometimes. Haku was awesome this chapter, I love how he scares some of the children. Keep up the AWESOME work!!!!!
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  • From cynaga on August 10, 2011
    [ch 106] The love making scene between Naruto and Sasuke was so beautiful!
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  • From ANON - TanuKyle on August 10, 2011
    TwT
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  • From ANON - v on August 08, 2011
    I'm so torn by this chapter, on one side i'm so happy Naruto was able to be detanked but on the other side I feel so bad that his injuries are so severe. I keep telling myself that one of the many things I love about this story is that the characters evolve with everything they go thru good or bad, but I don't believe that his physical disabilities will be something that even Naruto easily triumphs over. He's body's capabilities have always been a huge part of who he is and how he expresses himself to his loved ones. I think we're in for a bit of an emotional rollercoaster ride in the coming chapters...also, his foxiness is so protective over Sasuke...how hard it will be relying on others to protect him. so many things to worry about *sigh*, I can't wait until the next chapter :)
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  • From ANON - richon on August 08, 2011
    naru is back, he is not good but he is alive and the medic did a great job for him to live and see everybody. Naru is a goood friend it will help shika . Sasu must did the happy dance . This story is so great, I love it !!!
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  • From ANON - Aflyingmonkey123 on August 07, 2011
    Oh I too forgot to mention this but I would absolutely love a sequel! :D
    I wouldn't want you to feel that you had to do one though, Mannah-san.
    Great chapter can't wait for the next update!
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  • From ANON - SunaoTsuji on August 07, 2011
    chapter 105. woo! Naruto's back! i am deeply intrigued as to how Naruto will be able to walk and fight again. the whole process is going to be stimulating. i can't wait to read more. thanks for the update! greatly appreciate you're hard work and your beta's hard work helping you put these chapters together.
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  • From ANON - SunaoTsuji on August 07, 2011
    Chapter 104. Wooo! How i missed Haku and his swift iron fist and quick steel tongue. loved how he handled Sumiko at the end of the chapter.
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  • From blugirlami21 on August 07, 2011
    I'm so glad that we have Naruto back. I feel like we can't go back to somewhat normal until everyone that can be back with the family is in whatever capacity. I do feel bad for Naruto because so much of him is about his body and his movement and it will be strange to see him unable to move or do what he could do so easily before. I have no doubt that his spine will be repaired and maybe this will be a good learning experience for everyone. I am happy that Shika is being reprimanded for taking on too much responsibility for the bombing and also that Haku took care of Sumiko quick. I had forgotten and missed that about Haku in his absence. Good stuff, I look forward to every new chapter.
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  • From bloodshound on August 06, 2011
    Oh Haku and Naru, you have been missed soooooooooo very badly. I'm glad Sas and Haru made up and that Sumi chan is being reigned in. And that in and en got a chance to have visit. Maybe they'll be allowed to do more. Konan too. There's still such a mess to manage. I truely, turely hope there's a way for sas and naru to get it on because they need that connection, that love, to confirm and strengthen each other... and cause it's seriously hot. >>
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  • From ANON - liby318 on August 06, 2011
    Thank you for bring Naruto back. I missed your version of him.
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  • From Dorkchic on August 06, 2011
    So sad and so sweet at the same time. It is good that everyone got to see Naruto even if they had to see him incapacitated like that. I wonder how long it will take before someone asks about why he placed the restrictions that he did on his treatment options? Or how long it will be before someone tries to talk him into lifting those restrictions--- maybe some emotional blackmail concerning Sasuke or the children would be involved? I would have to wonder if he would allow one of his children the same restrictions if they were in a similar situation- because I doubt he could stand seeing one of the children in that kind of condition if there was anything he could do about it.
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  • From ANON - Aflyingmonkey123 on August 06, 2011
    You had me crying very hard... Oh man
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