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By : mannahpierce
  • From cynaga on August 13, 2011
    [ch 107] OMG! Sorry for the valley girl-like exclamation but OMG! The plot thickens deliciously... I loved how the Zetsus helped Shika and the interactions amongst Neji, Shika and Sumiko are precious. I had a chill at Orochimaru's thoughts at the end of the chapter.

    I am really curious to know who your favorite Sci-Fi books and authors are. Can you list a few for us?

    THANK YOU FOR YOUR MASTERUFL HARD WORK, MANNAH-SAMA!
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  • From roro237 on August 13, 2011
    The title had my eyes bucketed wide open:) You had me when it started with Deidara. But then In-san and En-san gave Shik some information that he could use! Yes there's hope again to get Naruto back like new! That was the development I was hoping for:) I laughed at poor Shik for his new early routine. A child has away of making those changes happen:) Now for what cause a shiver to run down my spine Orochimaru. The real one not a print or clone! He's the most evil of all villains to me. And he wants one of the Uchiha kids for pleasure? My blood pressure is going to be on a roll coaster huh?! I can't wait:) Oh Great Queen of the Naruto Space Universe this is why you are her ^_^
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on August 13, 2011
    Everything picks up some pace again! I'm glad. I love it when they all start to really DO something. Now that Shika is 'searching mode' things should move forward! He thinks and they do. I hated it when he was so distracted. And Klenn impressed me once again. I missed him! I was afraid that he had been so devastated by the humiliation with 'meeting the litter' that he was trying to stay away... LOL ^_^
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  • From satterb on August 13, 2011
    Ewwww! Orochimaru is such a nasty maggot! It's thrilling to see you mesh all the characters together like this. I love to see how well you put the story together. I look forward to more!
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  • From Prism0467 on August 13, 2011
    Gross, Orochimaru!
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  • From roro237 on August 11, 2011
    My compute freaked out and the 'anon' one is me. I think you know probably guessed it was ^_^
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 11, 2011
    Queeny this chapter had so much I enjoyed I needed to write you again:) Naruto's super pants I love them and in his favorite color to! The way they work is brilliant! Now scents Iruka thought they were inappropriate I'm thinking sexy!:) One of my favorite parts was cutey pie Tsuneo pushing his To-chan:) I'm telling you I love Naruto more all the time! How can you not with the way he is with all children. I laughed at Sasuke at meal time his hair was looking pretty glossy Yuki had gave him the hook-up with a hair treatment:) You know I would love to listen to Sasuke read bedtime stories! His voice on the anime is wonderful. Now that I'm reading today Sasuke jumping into the tub with his boots on is pretty dam sexy:) I almost forgive him totally for making Naruto and I cry:) I misses Naruto more than I knew! Spending the day with him was wonderful! You're the best Queeny ^_^
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  • From Dorkchic on August 10, 2011
    This chapter was so sweet and so sad at the same time. It is sweet that Naruto and Sasuke have reached an understanding and it is sweet (and funny) the way Kakashi got him to see the light. But it is so sad that Naruto has just accepted that he will be crippled for the rest of his life and is trying to plan around it. I think it shows a great strength of character to accept how things are and adapt so that he can move on, but it almost feels like he is giving up.
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  • From Prism0467 on August 10, 2011
    Finally Sasuke gave up and resorted to eyelashes. “Please, dobe, I’ll be sore.”

    LOL that's dirty pool!

    Good to see Naruto back in action. I've missed him SO MUCH!
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  • From roro237 on August 10, 2011
    YEA BABY!!!!! You know I was prepared to cry when I seen the title:) I just stopped and went and got the box of tissue. I cracked up when Sumiko ran the other way when Haku came in:) I do so adore Haku he's so sexy without trying and he knows when to put his foot down. The three dad's needed that talking to. Then it came time for the tissues! When Naruto was talking about C-san and that stuff I was getting watery eyed. BamB Sasuke jumps out of the tub! Naruto is left crying and so was I! Why Sasuke?!:) Ok he was told by the number one ass how wrong he was:) I love Kakashi done get me wrong even in the anime but the man is still an ass on so many levels:) Anyways he got Papa back to To-chan:) I loved spending the day with Naruto. I'm still sad that Naruto is being a goat head and not doing the clone thing. But that is so his character:) Oh Great Queen of the Naruto Space Universer this was fantastic I loved every word ^_^
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  • From Telynaayuri on August 10, 2011
    i dont know how they did it. maybe i havent been in love to a level where i can be with my mate when there is only half of them there.
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  • From ANON - richon on August 10, 2011
    ohoho sasu you nearly made a big mistake, hopefuly kakashi was here to make you realise!! naru pardon you !!
    this story is awesome, i am sure shik and rin will find a way to heal naru the way he was. I have a very good timle reading your story, i check evrey day to see if you have post a new chapter, I am addict !!! thank you for this wonderful story !!!
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  • From bloodshound on August 10, 2011
    Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon no losing fluffy soft and growly. noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo.
    Still, naru seems to be adjusting with his usual flare. Naru is just to epically awesome for words.
    I'm glad the Zetsue's are getting more personal contact. Now if only we could do something for Konan her maid and her kid. Can't be good for it to be isolated like that.
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  • From ANON - TanuKyle on August 10, 2011
    I like how Kakashi is still Sasuke's figure to look to.
    And how Naruto is so positive, but then Sasuke does a tiny thing and he gets really upset - it shows what they mean to each other.
    And how Naruto wants to fix Haru and knows he can't and just all the little things you put in that show all the depth.

    And also a look at Hamaki/Terai/Fu!
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  • From ANON - Aflyingmonkey123 on August 10, 2011
    Its so amazing seeing Naruto being Naruto. Oh I missed him.
    Stupid Sasuke, thinking stupid things, Sure I can see it from his point, But you love Naruto and he loves you.
    Excellent chapter as always Mannah-san! :D
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