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By : mannahpierce
  • From ANON - Tati on August 17, 2011
    Oh yeah. Zetsu and Tatsuji... what a great idea! Can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - smauigirl on August 17, 2011
    Fantastic! I laughed my ass off!
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  • From Prism0467 on August 17, 2011
    Alright! The Zetsus are now Uchiha! Celebration!
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  • From roro237 on August 17, 2011
    OMG brilliant!!!! I loved it:) You know I cracked up when the milk was pitched:) I tip my hat to Kakashi for knowing a good pitch when he feels it! I'm so glad that In-san and En-san are not prisoner anymore. I think they will be valued crew members. They have shown that already. But of course what has my blood warming up is the new device Shik made for Naruto to give to Sasuke wOw! That device gets a 'Hell Yea Baby'! With left thump activation wOw! You out did yourself with that invention:) I'm going into kid mode "Can I see it huh, huh can I see it?! Can I see Sasuke when Naruto turns it on huh, huh:)" Ok that's my silly-ness for the day! I got so caught up in the device I almost forgot about Haku:) I love how he made over the Zeus. The Zeus was very taken with Haku and his partner:) I really enjoyed this chapter! ~Bowing~ Thank you for all your hard work ^_^
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  • From ANON - Aflyingmonkey123 on August 17, 2011
    Yosh! Things are looking up! With Enerugi and Inryoku sworn to Sasuke it's going to be interesting. I'm so glad Naruto's getting better Nuu~ So the triplets can experiance dancing with To-chan Dooooh~ Can not wait for the next chapter Mannah-san!
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on August 17, 2011
    This was just great! Especially Kakashi.... just great. Thank you!
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  • From ANON - cynaga on August 17, 2011
    [ch 108] It was delicious seeing Sumiko support Shika for a change!!!
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  • From ANON - liby318 on August 17, 2011

    “I think the Zetsus have been Haku-ed,” Iruka observed." Best line ever! This was a very sweet and funny (how Kakashi reacted to the situation)chapter.
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  • From satterb on August 17, 2011
    This chapter was frickin awesome! I love these chapters that give us an in depth view of daily life in Uchiha! I loved Kakashi's reaction to the Zetsus. I was also shocked and elated that Naruto can be healed. I had begun to get used to the idea that he was going to be handicapped permanently. I think you did all that on purpose! LOL! Thanks for all your hard work. I look forward to more.
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  • From ANON - angelj232000 on August 15, 2011
    I felt so bad for Neji in this chapter. I like that Neji did things for Shika & I loved gettting a closer look at their relation ship. Keep up the awesome work.
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  • From ANON - richon on August 14, 2011
    hhahah naru and saus you must find orochimaru soon and kill him, he is a pervert !! en san and in san gave a wonderful idear to shika, hope it will work !! this story is great see you soon!! love the way you change of point of view in very chapter !!
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  • From Dorkchic on August 14, 2011
    Just reading about the way Orochimaru was thinking about the children gave me a nasty case of the squickies. I even verbalised a long and loud 'ewwwwwww'. One hopes that Uchiha is able to put him out of everyone else's misery... and maybe save Pein (if there is enough left) while they are at it. Maybe by then he would have changed some of his views on some things.
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  • From ANON - Aflyingmonkey123 on August 13, 2011
    IF OROCHIMARU TOUCHES ANY OF THE KITS IM GONNA EXPLODE!... Good chapter as always Mannah-san can't wait to see how you handle this.
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  • From ANON - Tati on August 13, 2011
    Amazing as always... but Orichimaru **shudders** creepy.
    I haven't reviewed for a while but I've kept up with the story. The losses and the aftermath were so well
    handled. This continues to be an amazing story. Lets just hope those babies/clones are saved by Uchiha before
    Orochimaru gets more interested in them. **shudders**
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  • From ANON - v on August 13, 2011
    Alright...I was prepared for pyscho-sicko Orochimaru to be a nut case that deserved to die and maybe thinking he's probably after Sasuke, Naruto, and maybe since he's lived so long a thing for Itachi (cause that would be a weird twist)...HOWEVER...to think he was even looking at a picture of the children and using words like "delicious" and "pleasure" in his sick twisted little brain...dudes gotta die...torture, severe pain, skin him alive slowly with a rusty spoon....die, die , die!!!!...on another note..yeah for In-chan and En-chan helping Shikamaru on Naruto issues..I knew they would have good ideas for the family :)..I can definitely see where the bombing and all thats happened has changed Shika, he seems less in some ways but more in others...:)
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