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By : mannahpierce
  • From ANON - angelj232000 on August 21, 2011
    Not my 2 favorite characters but you write them in a way that I still want to care about them, something that both the anime & manga don't do for me. I can't wait for the next chapter, you are doing such an awesome job with this fic keep it up.
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  • From Prism0467 on August 21, 2011
    Alright Moegi! Finally she gets some action!
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  • From Dorkchic on August 20, 2011
    How incredibly sweet! Maybe when they do the security analysis they will stumble across that psyco Karin and follow the trail back to the chief loathesome slug. Here's hoping! Once again it was a great chapter and looking foward to the next.
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  • From ANON - Aflyingmonkey123 on August 20, 2011
    Nuuuu~ Love is in the air! With Inryoku and Enerugi! annnnnd also with Moegi and Udon.... Oh how lovely.
    Great chapter as always. Can not wait for more Mannah-san!
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on August 20, 2011
    No 'buts' only 'how'! I wish I had in me to try it.........
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  • From ahmenet on August 20, 2011
    This chapter was spectacular and inspirational. I'm please to have found such an excellent writer and story. You make people think. You make them feel. I will continue to read your stories and look forward to more.
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  • From bloodshound on August 20, 2011
    Kamitari the matchmaker. :)
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  • From roro237 on August 20, 2011
    Oh so sweet:) What makes it so sweet for me is their shyness. They might be forty and still holding hands:) That was a total joy and new challenge ahead to have a relationship out side of the crew. Plus Karin is in the mix! I see interesting development on the horizon! The title fit perfect:)
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  • From cynaga on August 20, 2011
    [ch 109] Thank you for your sci-fi author recs and this lovely chapter on Moegi and Udon!!! *hug*
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  • From ANON - SidonieStarr on August 19, 2011
    I have to comment on Chapter 107, too: it is so aptly named. Making the kits objects of Orochimaru's obsession puts a whole new spin on things; after all, Pein thought they were disposable. One wonders how Uchiha will try to protect them when it is time for them to cat (or otherwise gain experience in the world. Or galaxy.} The anonymity that worked, for a time, for Sasuke seems unlikely to succeed given how distinctive the kits are. The price of fame seems to be one of your big themes - just how constraining and dangerous it is.

    You seem to be telling us that the craftsman who repaired Sasuke's mother's desk was an agent of Orochimaru. Did he get anything other than a picture?

    The Zetsus' makeover was fun. (Haku was hilarious, as usual.) But it all goes to another of your major themes - redemption and its limits. Also the critical contributions that can be made by those who have been redeemed. As always, I can't wait to find out what happens next!
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  • From bloodshound on August 19, 2011
    so much happening in just 2 chappies.
    shivers. Oro is just so damned creepy. i pity anything that has his attention.
    I'm glad shika's sitch is improving, en and in's as well.
    And naru, well i shoulda had more faith that u'd fix him. I really shoulda.
    snickers. Poor 'keshi.
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  • From ANON - SunaoTsuji on August 18, 2011
    chapter 106-108. woot! loved how the chapters went! unexpected as always with you and your beta plotting away. lol. kakashi giving sasuke a good shaking in chapter 106 was marvelously hilarious with sasuke's embarrassed thoughts and possible questions. the unexpected and new found information of fixing naurto up was exhilarating considering that it will fit into the story line somehow considering the divs that it will take for him to completely heal. and not to mention your creative way of having haku pretty up the zetsu so he was ready for chapter 108. loved how sumiko defended shikamaru and the swearing in of the zetsu riled kakashi to for a comfort drink. briliantily written and i hope to read more soon as well since i'm doing lots of catching up. ^^ thanks very much for the updates and hard work you and your beta put into writing this. greatly appreciated!
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  • From ANON - angelj232000 on August 18, 2011
    I loved Haku in this chapter. I loved how he set Zetsu up at the end, so cute. I alson for the first time liked Sumiko. I liked that she was protecting her nii-san. Kakasji totally deserved being hit by a cup. Iruka was to cute too. Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the awesome work.
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  • From ANON - v on August 18, 2011
    OH! *hands clapping* There is so much about this chapter I enjoyed:) Naruto and Sasuke discussing things, Naruto getting back kidney function!! Hooray!! Haku meeting with En-chan & In-chan (who are still adorable to me), Sumiko standing up for her Ni-chan (very smart for 3 to pick up on the undercurrents between him and Kakashi and act accordingly..lol) I just know that as soon as Shika left the room Neji gave her a big hug :)This chapter gave me such a good feeling about how everyone is together and slowly healing...but the most exciting,(besides Naruto of course) is the possibility of a relationship for Tatsuji...I'm so curious about him..I hope we learn more about him and who he is and please, please, please...I hope we get to be witnesses to any relationship developing for In-chan and En-chan..new romance is always lovely :) your devoted fan...V :)
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  • From ANON - TanuKyle on August 17, 2011
    Oh god the last line was hilarious. xD

    It had me in absolute STITCHES.
    Which is kind of bad at 5am when you're trying to be sneaky. u3u;;;;

    But this chapter was AMAZING.

    I....confess, I have just re-read the whole saga, and it's really noticeable, having re-read the whole way through, how much thought and development you've put into everything, and how much you've improved as a writer.

    PS. I finally write a decent review, yay! 8D
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