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By : mannahpierce
  • From ANON - angelj232000 on August 26, 2011
    Poor Shika. He is loosing so many people. I can't wait until to see what you do with Deidara now that he is caught. Keep up the awesome work.
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  • From bloodshound on August 25, 2011
    well, that was interesting. I guess some memories are really deeply imbedded.
    Now that Die is technically in hand, will they still keep hunting Oro. oh, i do hope so. I shudder at the thought of that bastard grabbing one of the kids.
    Poor Klen. I wonder if he'll make Shika his heir or something similar.
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  • From ANON - Aflyingmonkey123 on August 25, 2011
    Plot development=AWESOME!
    ...I'm saddened because of Klennethon Darrent... :(
    Yes Kidney function is amazing!
    Oh ho ho ho Deidara's got no chance!
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  • From satterb on August 25, 2011
    Please don't let Klennethon take Shika!!!! For some reason, I still don't trust him. Sure he's helping Uchiha out, but he's so obsessed with Shika that he might just be willing to do anything. LOL I trust you, and I appreciate all your hard work on this story.
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  • From Prism0467 on August 25, 2011
    Wow! Five standards. That's like what -- five months?

    How is Neji going to take Shikamaru spending more time with a man he knows is after him?

    Drama...
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  • From ANON - richon on August 25, 2011
    hoho naru you are a genious, it's a way to relax ... and to wake up.., poor shika he will lost klen too!!! what will choose he to do ?? love this story, see you soon
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  • From Dorkchic on August 25, 2011
    That is so sad. I never even considered Klenn's age retard- which is odd because you made specific mention of his probable age and the fact that his age retard was still holding earlier in the timeline. It would damage Shika to know that he is going to loose Klenn- especially in the light of all the recent events. Maybe they could clone him and if they figure out a way to maintain reprint Ranmaru's memories they can copy Klenn's memories over. This is of course assuming that he did not decide that he was tired of being lonely and was ready to pass on. But personally, I do not believe he is that way. He strikes me as someone who would cling to life (and whatever new idea, friend, lover, expansion of humanity) fiercely and would fight to continue on and see the beauty of the universe as it unfolds.

    What he needs is a family to humanize him so more and help relieve some of his loneliness.
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  • From roro237 on August 24, 2011
    WoW! You cover a lot!! I loved every bit of it!!! This chapter had a sad-ness to it for me. Which made the title perfect:) What made the title really click was Klen thinking of his past. But before that Ranmaru in his state of mind. Naruto getting better but slowly and then the news of Klen. I think it will hit Shika hard. There has been a lot of lost going on for our genius. I smile when Klen asked about Tsuneo-chan and the kids:) That was a very memorable time he spend with the family:) I had hoped he would get to do it again but he may not have enought time left. Naruto knows his Sasuke he rolled right in and knew what he had been thinking in the shower. I really loved that part:) That part also included the 'button pushing' to:) Thank you Space Queen for the trip today! I love this story ^_^
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on August 24, 2011
    This is horrible! Klenn is really THAT old? Can't he figure out something... He can't, I know... Life is a fatal disease after all...
    I hope he will spent more time not only with Shika but maybe with the Uchiha's too? He probably wouldn't like it though....
    I also hope he won't have too big influence on Shikamaru's sanity... ( I have a hunch that it would be a bad influence more than a good one....)
    And finally: OMFG! I had totally forgotten about Sasori! How do you do this? How do you manage to hold all the strings and pull them all with such acuracy, not forgetting about some shorter ends? How? you must have some amazing Shika-styled system of diagrams and schemes....
    You're amazing!
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  • From ANON - SidonieStarr on August 24, 2011
    Finally! You never did let us forget about Ranmaru; he had to reappear sometime. (And you made us care about him, so I imagine all you readers share my delight.) The Klennethon Darrent development is a surprise -very interesting.
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  • From ANON - The_Horseman_Of_Death on August 23, 2011
    hey mannah did you miss me? i'm back from the long time gone distance of no internet land. YAY hail the conquering hero!!! i love whats happened in this story and i'm glad that naruto is getting better i was so scared mannah. oh and how is sai? i saw him the other day but it was so busy i doubt he saw me but then he was always very perceptive love the horseman of death. ps can you believe i was gone for 42 chapters?
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  • From ANON - richon on August 23, 2011
    hoho en-san and in-san swore to sasu, naru you are amazing !! love the way you think and the way you understand people !! this story is awesome!! I have been one week in holiday and so much happen!!! see you soon with more !!
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  • From satterb on August 22, 2011
    This chapter was so sweet, I wanted to cry...I did tear up a little! LOL Thanks for all your wonderful hard work!
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  • From ANON - SunaoTsuji on August 22, 2011
    chapter 109. woot! now they're getting it on. and finally a glimpse at this Karin character that's the supposed spy from Orochimaru. which brings to mind, i want to see a hot steaming love romping between this Orochimaru and Kabuto. i'm wondering how each different copy of Orochimaru will treat Kabuto with all the memories tat are returned to him.
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  • From ANON - v on August 21, 2011
    I really feel that my opinion of Moegi has changed quite a bit since the bombing..she seemed very much a side character that wasn't really offering anything to the storyline, that she was just there..her name would pop up once and a while and most of the family seemed to just deal with her presence but not enjoy it, so she surprised me alot with how much she handled during the bombing and how she helped and participated after it also. I liked Udon right away when he was introduced, but I really couldn't see his attraction to Moegi and didn't think about it that much..I have to say that I'm really beginning to root for them, I think the way you've tied Moegi's growth as a family member, Medico, and women to Udon finally finding a place in the world where he is needed, respected, and confident in his work..plus the added humor of them both being so shy around each other, its great:) Kamatari's character is getting interesting to ...plus who knew he'd be such a great friend to Moe-chan..but I guess he's growing up too. I wonder how much Hybrids mature emotionally faster then purebreads? Great chapter :)
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