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By : mannahpierce
  • From ladybird425 on August 31, 2011
    Reading this chapter left me highly satisfied!
    Ah, I love reading your stories so, so much!
    I also loved the badass-ness of Neji towards Klenn last chapter as well, but aff somehow didn't add my review last time, so I mention it here.
    In all honesty, I wouldn't be surprised if Naruto's recovery didn't go smooth >.> I'm not sure why I'm almost expecting it, however, it would be relieving not to make Sasuke go through extra "Naruto's well being" drama :D
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on August 30, 2011
    I refuse to thhink about anything sad so I'll just ask the question that bugs me for some time. Is Shika's little sister also a genius or is she just smart? Nara's genes seems to be really amazing. They should have store some of Shikaku's DNA or something like that...

    Naruto was sweet.
    Thank you for the story, as always.
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  • From bloodshound on August 30, 2011
    Sniffles.
    that last line was a killer. honor and a privilege indeed.
    I'm glad that en and in's relationship with their guy is going well.
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  • From missbri88 on August 30, 2011
    I was amazing to catch up with the last seven or eight chapters that I had missed. I'm saddened, excited, happy, and in desperate need of a good cry all at once. I'm so grateful that you put so much work into posting every week and thank you for sharing.
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  • From ANON - angelj232000 on August 29, 2011
    Hey, sorry I am so late reviewing. I read the latest chapter on Saturday right after you posted it but I have been very busy. I felt for Shika in the chapter. I love how Neji was all protective about Shika. I love that couple. Keep up the awesome work.
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  • From satterb on August 28, 2011
    Thank you for putting him (Klenn) in his place! LOL I was also glad that Shika reacted the way he did. Thanks for all your hard work on this story. I love it soooo much!
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  • From ANON - SunaoTsuji on August 28, 2011
    Chapter 110-111. woot! i love how Darrent is still doing his best to seduce Shikamaru to the very end. i am sad tat his pursuit in Shikamaru has come to an end with their confirmation of friendship. thnaks so much for you and your beta's hard work putting this together. greatly appreciated!
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  • From cynaga on August 27, 2011
    [ch 111] Yummy chapter. Thanks!!!
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  • From ANON - Aflyingmonkey123 on August 27, 2011
    Awesome chapter!... Can not wait for the next update!
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  • From ANON - smauigirl on August 27, 2011
    Wow! Love the whole interaction with Klenn, Shika and Neji. Can't wait to see where it all goes.
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  • From Prism0467 on August 27, 2011
    I love you, Neji!
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  • From blugirlami21 on August 27, 2011
    It's weird to think that Neji and Shikamaru are not as in love as I thought they were. I think they care deeply for one another but I think if someone more compatible came along that they would part and I never thought that about them before the last few chapters. Shikamaru especially since he worked so hard to get Neji seems to view him as more of someone he needs to help with Sumiko than someone he personally couldn't live without and I don't know if that is because he's Shika or because of something else. Neji's comments to Klenneth were very telling as well. It kind of makes me sad tbh. I thought that their love was rings and forever as Sumiko put it. You have really made Sumiko grow on me considering how much you made me hate her to start. I'm glad that we didn't go there with Klenneth and Shika, I just wish that Shikamaru had been strong enough to stand his ground or sure enough to tell Klenneth no. I hope that Shikamaru gets stronger, I think he along with Naruto are the heart of this story and I need him to be able to withstand whatever comes at him both physically and most importantly emotionally.
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  • From ANON - richon on August 27, 2011
    yes keln you did the right thing !! shika has a lover but he has not many friend to discuss and who can follow him, don't break his friendship !! love this story so much !!
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  • From Dorkchic on August 27, 2011
    I once again feel sorry for Klenn. I understand that his personality is such that he needs to possess completely, and in doing so manages to smother and destroy that which he possesses. That does not remove the fact that such a nature has kept him alone for the larger part of his life and, most likely, will keep him alone for the rest of it.
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  • From roro237 on August 27, 2011
    I had to reread before I wrote you. That was very intense Shikamaru! I think I had been taking Neji for granted and I didn't mean to! Shika is the type 7 genius but Neji is a genius in his own right. I loved his talk with Klen:) You know who is the real type genius is? You! That was a great chapter! I always leave feeling like I was there and I was with family. Loved it!!! ^_^
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