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By : mannahpierce
  • From missbri88 on September 03, 2011
    I loved the chapter! :)
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  • From ANON - Tati on September 03, 2011
    As always, this was a great chapter. The way you convey Iruka's recuperation and Ran's growth give great insight not only to the characters but the others as well. I am so thrilled about these insightful chapters. But I am so selfish, I would love a chapter on Tatsuji and his insight of where he is and about Zetsu. He is such a quiet character but I'm just so curious.

    Thanks for another wonderful character.
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  • From Dorkchic on September 02, 2011
    Awesome! Iruka can walk again- maybe not well or very far yet, but he is (pardon the pun) standing on his own two feet again. I am also thrilled with the progress that Ran has been making. It is nice that he trusts Iruka and Kakashi well enough to just be comfortable around them and that he is starting to consider uses for his abilities instead of just hiding from everyone because of them. And Shika is absolutly right! Kakashi should be the measurement for all that is sexy!
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  • From ANON - smauigirl on September 01, 2011
    Wow! Everytinme I think I can't like this story more you put up a chapter like this. Thanks for all the work you put into this it really is a great story.
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  • From ANON - TanuKyle on September 01, 2011
    I need to remember to review instead of just reading otl;

    New simulator? oooh~ What for?
    I like how Ran is motivated by helping people.
    Feeeet~

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  • From satterb on September 01, 2011
    While I love the story when it moves forward, and issues are resolved, I also love these types of chapters that give us those very realistic glimpses into the daily lives of some of the characters. Thanks for all you do with this story.
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  • From ANON - SunaoTsuji on August 31, 2011
    Chapter 112. Woot! Children do see and understand much with the adults concentrating so hard on each other. I am still greatly anticipating Darent's (I think i spelled it correctly XD) climatic demise. A very challenging one-shot of Neji and Darent sharing Shikamaru? Now that would be interesting. Thank so much for the update! Greatly appreciated. ^^ Thanks for the heads up on your progress. I hope to read an update from you soon.
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  • From Prism0467 on August 31, 2011
    Mannah Pierce, you are light and love. I absolutely adore you.
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  • From blugirlami21 on August 31, 2011
    That was a really nice soothing chapter, I think. I am happy that Iruka is getting back on his feet literally. Also that Ran is growing and adapting much faster than I thought he would. Love that he is really starting to feel like he is Kakashi and Iruka's son and that his relationship with Kakashi is leaps better than it was before. I find his relationship with Haru very interesting. I wonder if that is the basis for a romantic relationship later?

    I hope we get to see more of the triplets as time goes on, I can see that Tsuneo is a terror already. I still am waiting for Naruto to be Naruto again. I'm glad that Shika's attraction and weakness for Klenneth was sort of addressed and I like that Iruka was a shocked and surprised by Shika's weakness there. I do wish that someone would push him to face his feelings and truly decide what he wants. If it's really Neji then great and if it's Klenneth I think that would be fine too. I just don't want his indecision to became an instability in his current relationship or afterwards when Klenneth dies. I can already see the guilt and the what ifs when that day comes to pass. Maybe Shika spending this little bit of time left with Klenneth would not be the worse thing in the world.
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  • From bloodshound on August 31, 2011
    a very good day indeed. Now all we gotta do is get Naru fixed, get the sub level up and running and get rid of Oro for good... good luck with that one though. :P
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  • From roro237 on August 31, 2011
    Oh Queenie I was in heaven:) That was fantastic! I enjoyed every word!! I laughed when Ran-chan said no to watching Kakashi give Ir-chan the message. Yes their son knows them:) It was so sweet when Ran-chan called for Kakashi to help Iruka get out of the tub. You know I loved how Naruto showed up with the triple and then two more of the litter show up then Sasuke and their hold wonderful bunch comes for mid-day meal. It just seem so right for To-chan and Papa to have a litter:) I smiled when Iruka though yea I'm glad their gone to eat:) I just love Tsuneo-chan he's little Naruto. He put a smile on my face every time he's around:) Space Queen I'm serious I really loved this chapter!!! It was everything and I enjoyed it to the max 'Believe it' ^_^
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  • From cynaga on August 31, 2011
    [ch 112] A Kakashi is indeed the perfect unit for measuring desirability! :D
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  • From ANON - Aflyingmonkey123 on August 31, 2011
    *sigh* A very good day indeed...

    I love Ran!!
    And Yes Iruka has movement! WOOHOO!
    Nuu~
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  • From ANON - richon on August 31, 2011
    ran made a lot of progress, he is more social and understand people better. iruka is fine, he has recover and can walk now... it's naru turn to be better !! love this story , see you soon
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on August 31, 2011
    No update on Saturday.... bad news....
    This chapter was wonderful. I love KakaxIru moments. Does Ran's sitting between Kakashi and Iruka counts as letting Kakashi touch him? Was it this breakthrough that Kakashi had been waited for so long? It kind of was, right? Even if it wasn't a direct 'touch'...
    Shikamaru shocked me with what he said about Klenn. I was as shocked as Iruka (or more!!!) with two of three parts of his statement!
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