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Reviews for Bye Bye Beautiful

By : AntiquityDolls
  • From ANON - 10232310 on July 17, 2010
    Really good story =]
    The main reason I'm dropping this review is because another reviewer suggested you make Sasuke more "Sasuke-ish." I need to say that I don't think you should change him. You don't have to. He's perfect the way he is ^_^
    That's the beauty of a fictional story; You can make the characters act any way or do anything you want.
    Keep posting =D
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  • From ANON - biteme on July 15, 2010
    Totally great fanfiction! I love the way Naruto and Sasuke interact with each other! And the preists? ....creeeppppyyy! Watching them in the showers >.> Ha! That's funny. I will be following this fic so keep up the wonderful work!
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  • From ANON - Venerate on July 15, 2010
    It's a nice story you've got here. I've read one other story before about anti-gay camps, but this is much better :)
    I enjoy Naruto's character, while Sasuke could be made a little more... Sasukeish.
    The descriptions of the surroundings are really nice, as the character description in the beginning of this chapter (2nd) and in the end of the first.
    Keep up the good work, ne? I look forward to read more - you've created a really nice ground for a promising storyline. I'm really curious :3
    ~Venerate
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  • From Carousel on July 13, 2010
    This is such a fantastic story. It has a great flow and the plot is unique. It kind of reminds me of But I'm a Cheerleader.=] I love it. Update soooooon.
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  • From ANON - SamuraiSaaya on July 13, 2010
    I ditto you on a religious cause being pretty much the source of most of the world's past conflicts. Poor Sakura, it seems everyone in this place is brainwashed into thinking they're less than human beings. It's very very sad. Although, this just makes the plot all the more exciting. I really want to see what happens next.

    Please update soon ^^
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  • From ANON - qwerty on July 12, 2010
    So sad. And to think this actually happens in certain places...
    Keep going!
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  • From ANON - Insanity's Angel on July 11, 2010
    This was a great beginning. I can't believe there are actual places like Path to Heaven out there. Sasuke is going to be in for some torture between Path to Heaven and Naruto. ^^ Can't wait to read the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - SamuraiSaaya on July 11, 2010
    Nice intro! Sasuke's parents were mega-strict Catholic. I'm really glad that my parents are no where near like that and were Catholic too. Sasuke should not be afraid to be himself, and I hope Naruto can show him that hehe.

    Please update soon! ^^
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