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By : EvilAnge1
  • From ANON - yumenohime-sama on June 21, 2014
    Please continue this soon! I wonder what will happen next. I hope to see the council and ANBU being punished severely. heheh...
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  • From ANON - kayci on May 24, 2014
    I love this story and the way that you brought sasuke home. I cant wait to see how granny, sasuke, and gaara deal with the council. Or what sasukes punishment from naruto will be. Please update soon
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  • From Sleepy_Young on May 04, 2014
    I have really enjoyed reading this story, and I can't wait to read what Sasuke's punishment well be:)
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  • From ANON - Miichu on August 22, 2013
    This is such a awesome story I hope you keep going!, maybe he could be tied to naruto for 2 weeks :p haha
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  • From ANON - NightStar on May 12, 2013
    Great story i love it it was sad what naruto went through but all his friends are there for him with kyuubi and sasuke i cant want to find what happens to the councils :)
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  • From ANON - Freak joy spastic on November 05, 2012
    Oooh, it needs to be a good punishment... >|3 hehehe He should make Sasuke suffer, but the whole punishment* through the denial of sex is just not right for this fic. Besides Sasuke already knows he has to tread carefully and wait patiently in regards to that. So, the punishment* should be more productive and goal oriented. Perhaps a series of challenges or difficult tasks that he must accomplish that are given to him by each of Naruto's friends. Honestly, Sasuke has kinda gotten off easy with them thus far. The tasks/challenges could be as simple as helping catalog items at a storage building, helping out with arranging flowers or making deliveries at Ino's families flower shop, or difficult in the sense that he has to build something from scratch or make a special gift for Naruto. The tasks/challenges should be something that make him work hard and learn some type of lesson about responsibility and the consideration of others. Utlimately, the tasks/challenges should take a few months to complete and in the mean time Naruto can make some hadway with his issues so that he feels more comfortable and confident in sharing his body with Sasuke again. The reward for completing these tasks/challenges should be something like Sasuke finally being allowed to make love to Naruto, not before. Sorry for not being very specific, but hopefully this helps! X)
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  • From smint45 on October 20, 2012
    Oh my that last chappy was just amazing!!! I really like the way the story is going!!! About the punishment... narutos idea of life long Ramen would be really funny or something like sasuke only going on missions with him^^ altough that wouldn't be a real punishment in Sasukes opinion^^Otherwise I have no idea^^ I'm interestet in what you come up with^^see you again soon!!!
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  • From Pitch-dark-sky on July 22, 2012
    love it!!
    cried when I thought Naruto had died :(

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  • From ANON - Shannon on July 20, 2012
    Well, I don't really have that much advice for the punishment other than house arrest. I don't know if you should add on more than that (I probably think so...), but that's basically the only idea I have. Maybe an amount of time with chakra restraints? Or a guard - that guard being Naruto ;)

    Anyways - great job with this! I really, really, REALLY like it! :D
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  • From ANON - ash on July 17, 2012
    welll punisment could be making him carry the child since it is mpreg lol or um servent though hed do it anyway umm oh clean out a dog house like 17 of them lol cause he make naruto feel shity lol hope that helps
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  • From ANON - wowgoshdarnit on June 22, 2012
    It's very creative but also seems amateur. Your writing technique involves pointing out the obvious or ommitting facts. Like character facts. It's OOC so you should label that.
    Sasuke would never act like that. He's a self-righteous ass hole with two things on his mind and one of them he tries to fight, FOREVER.
    Tsunade knows who he is and he is an outlaw. He's a criminal. She wouldn't be cordial with him, unless it was for Naruto's sake.
    The chakra supressing chains can't handle the Kyuubi's power. He can easily over power them if he is angry enough.
    IDK it's the little things, and big, that really stick out and bug readers who are familiar with the storyline/characters.
    Just research a bit next time when writing with a widely known ship and show. :)
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  • From ANON - Kristin on May 15, 2012
    I like Nefra's idea of Naruto's punishment for Sasuke being that Sasuke has to teach at the academy for a year. That can take place after the judgement and punishment is anounced to the village and then carried out by everyone. I can't wait to see the punishments that Gaara and Sasuke dish out, as well as the punishments from everyone else. This is a great story and I can't wait untill you update!
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  • From Jan on March 14, 2012
    Wow, this story is great, I can't wait to see whats going to happen next, please update chapter 11 soon ^_^
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  • From ANON - Nefra (not logged in) on March 11, 2012
    First I want to say that I absolutely love this story. I've been following it since you started and was happy to see this latest chapter; I've fallen a bit behind on my reading as you can tell. LOL! You said you were stuck as to what Naruto's punishment for Sasuke would be and I came up with an idea that I think would not only annoy Sasuke but give Naruto a bit of amusement as well. Why don't you have Naruto's punishment be for Sasuke to teach a year at the academy? While Sasuke has patience with Naruto that probably would not extend to children, especially unruly ones that can't throw a kunai to save their lives *insert evil grin here*. It would not only keep Sasuke in the village for a longer period, Naruto could probably get the kids to prank Sasuke on a regular basis; all in good fun of course. Anyway, it's an idea that you may or may not want to use but it would sure be fun to read. Keep writing and I will eagerly await your update.

    Ja ne!

    Nefra
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  • From FuraMara on December 27, 2011
    this is a really good story and i would love to be able to read more (P.S. if i've already reveiwed sorry but i love to reread my favorite stories)
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