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By : EvilAnge1
  • From ANON - animelover on October 16, 2010
    this chapt was awesome! i kinda like it when sasuke gets all emotional. ;-) can wait to see the punsihment for the evildoers.
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  • From smint45 on October 14, 2010
    That was wonderful!!!! Thank you so much for finally updating!!! I can't wait for Naruto to wake up and for Sasuke to start mending his mental wounds!!!!! Hope to hear from you again soon!!!
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  • From runoutofaname on October 14, 2010
    Aww, how cute. I love it! Can't wait for the next one. =)
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  • From JtheChosen1 on October 14, 2010
    Excellent work! Cannot wait until the ANBU and Council members are punished haha!
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  • From ANON - Tyrahnon on September 11, 2010
    OMG OMG OMG! This story is amazing!!! When i read the forced bj chapter i was so angry. I was like, " Let me into the story so Sasuke can go to the hospital and i can kick that ANBU's sorry ass into the next eternity!" PLEASE update soon!
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  • From YukiKuran on September 02, 2010
    Aww, Sasuke's so sweet when it comes to Naruto... good job. ^^
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  • From YukiKuran on September 02, 2010
    I just made an account on here so yeah. (sorry for that unrelated note...) Your fanfic is good. I like how it started off and you're keeping me on edge with that cliffhanger. Well, good job! ^_^
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  • From smint45 on August 25, 2010
    That was absoloutly fantastic!!! I love you for saving him!!!! Thank you sooo much!!!!! I hope he is going to be ok when he wakes up!!! But with Sasuke caring for him I think all will be fine in time!!! See you again soon!!!
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  • From JtheChosen1 on August 25, 2010
    I can't wait for the traitor ANBU and Elder Council to get punished by Gaara and Sasuke >:) Excellent work!
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  • From ANON - Timber on August 25, 2010
    Chap. 5
    CRY!!!! That was heartbreaking and such a tear jerker!! Plus the frustration of wanting to see that guy get the hell beat out of him and see him get tortured slowly over time!!! Each of Naruto's friends should get a crack at each of the ones responsible for Naruto's treatment and use their own special skills on them!!! Ya...deep in thought....that would be great....:) ...hehe
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  • From Nescafevh on August 25, 2010
    I wrote this last night but my computer wiped it.

    I have a way Tsunade and Gaara can get back at the council.

    They can reveal what they know and say that they are going to get them for their crimes. When the council deny anything Tsunade can say they are accused of treason.

    How you say, point 1-Gaara has adopted Naruto as his brother, therefore by abusing and torturing Naruto they have attacked an citizen of Suna-therefore treason and they are, according to the treaty with Leaf, handed over for punishment to Gaara. One look at Gaara they cringe.

    Point 2-as an citizen of Suna living in Leaf, Naruto is considered an Emissary of Suna, therefore punishable by Leaf,or Suna.

    Point 3-as members of Leaf abusing fellow members they are also punishable.

    They have the choice, they can go with Gaara and take HIS punishment or if they take Leaf's punishment willingly then Tsunade WILL BE MERCIFUL.

    Looking at Gaara's look get what they choose?

    Tsunade says the condition of not handing them over to Suna is they have to reveal ALL ANBU spies and working for them and formally announce their retirement and crimes to the entire village during an live trial in the village.

    They do this (this is necessary to show the village what happens when they 'go behind the Hokage's back'. Also to show that if you move against Naruto, Gaara and Suna will be your punishment)to put 'the fear of god' into the villagers but when Tsunade passes judgment is the real revenge. "I sentence you to suffer the exact same torture you visited on my Gaka. Every cut that was his, will now be yours. Every bruise is yours to enjoy, Ibiki, take them away."

    Knowing they will never live through what they've done to Naruto, the council protest, scream and curse while faithful ANBU and Ibiki drag them away and when one cries out that Tsunade said she'd be merciful she answers with "I am and will. This IS me being Merciful. Do you think Gaara and Suna-who love the boy-would be any more merciful?"

    One look at Gaara and they shut up.

    This way when Naruto comes out of his coma (they can save his life, but because of all the damage, Kyuubi has to send him into an temporary coma so he can fully concentrate on healing him without any distraction) Sasuke can tell him that the council will never harm or threaten him again, because one by one they are being tortured to death.
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  • From smint45 on August 25, 2010
    Ok so the torture was really terribel!!! Poor naruto I really pitty him!!!! But the rescue I loved it!!! I'm really going to kill you if you kill Naruto off just like that after they finally found eachother!!!! I hope some med is near by to help him!!!!! Wonderful Chappie see you soon!!!
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  • From ANON - Timber on August 24, 2010
    Chap. 2
    I can't wait till Sasuke finds him!!! Heads are going to roll.....on pins and needles on how he will locate Naruto seeing as everyone else has been clueless and totally in the dark!! OH the SUSPENSE!!!!!
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  • From serenagold on August 23, 2010
    Your use of the present tense in writing is weird. It makes for a poor story telling device. You should really try to write in either first person perspective or third person perspective. Otherwise what ends up happening is a written story that comes off like you're writing down things that are happening as they happen.

    Also, its a small irk, but really, ANBU don't make great bad guys. They work directly under the Hokage with loyalty to the Hokage and the Hokage alone. They are like the Hokage's secret police whose identities are only known by the Hokage. You can't just have them working for the council with no regard for anyone else.

    I hate to say this, but when I read this story I can't help but think "ugh...gay." And I don't mean that in a derogatory anti-homosexual way, but in that "this is way to sappy and ridiculous" way. And is there a reason Naruto has such a vagina in this? He's so weak and neutered in this story that you might as well have just made up a new character because there is no way the person I'm reading about is the same strong, stubborn-minded character that shares the same name as the series.

    Blah, now I'm just ranting. Overall I think you've got a good idea, but you need to work on it and work on developing your ideas and characters. Its fine if you want to change up the characters but you have to establish and develop your changes before they become acceptable to the readers.


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  • From ANON - animelover on August 23, 2010
    whoa, what a cliffie! oh please people, find naruto and let the payback begin! gaara, do your thing, bro!
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