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Reviews for Hiss and Kiss

By : Jelp
  • From ANON - moodysavage on July 10, 2010
    This is SOOO good! At first I thought Sasuke might be some kind of succubus demon and he couldn't actually have sex with Naruto. But he gave hostile looks since the beginning and seems to just attack Naruto because he can't help himself. I think they knew each other from a LONG time ago and Naruto & Sasuke probably made some childhood promises to each other that Naruto totally forgot. Naruto probably moved away & didn't keep in touch. Airhead. But about the clothes & getting in his room... stalker yes but makes me think Sasuke isn't quite what he seems to be. Arrrggg... I want to know!!!!
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  • From Prism0467 on July 10, 2010
    Come on, Jelp. What the hell?
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  • From ANON - Kurisu on July 09, 2010
    Soooo hott! Your writing is superb! It creates the most delightful imagery..beautiful! And the dialogue is so true to the characters. I'm a big fan. I cant wait until the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - venus on July 09, 2010
    omg i love this!!!!! good story i love it when a story takes on this type of flow.... its very desperate on Narutos part and i hope it takes forever for him to get whats going on..... hell i want it to drag out for my own sake!!! anticipation is a good thing!!!!!! i hope u update soon!!!!
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  • From missbri88 on July 09, 2010
    OH HELL!!! I love this! This mystery is so exciting! Lol. I can't wait to see more. Thanx
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  • From Prism0467 on July 09, 2010
    I think I'm about as frustrated as Naruto is at this point.
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  • From Oneide on July 09, 2010
    I really envy you you know... you write really well. I love your stories and this one i had already read the first chapter thinking that I liked it and was well onto chapter two before I even realised it was one of your stories. love it!
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  • From Carousel on July 09, 2010
    This is hot and brilliant and yes. =] More please. And I love how creepy Sasuke is.It's pretty hot.
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  • From kitsuko999 on July 09, 2010
    God this is getting steamy! More please! ^_^
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  • From Prism0467 on July 07, 2010
    I love it! Sasuke's long on sexy mystique and short on bastardish assholery in this. It's a refreshing change.
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  • From loveusender on July 07, 2010
    I had read the first part over on FF.NET and couldn't wait, wondering 'when is jelp doing the second part?' and here it is! naruto get's too caught up to even get a name? lol that's really sad! can't wait for the continuation.
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  • From ANON - kinkou on July 07, 2010
    This is promising to be a very entertaining and delightful piece. I can't wait to see more.
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  • From lovel3ssangel on July 07, 2010
    Hell yes! i love it! damn. keep goin'! :) very nicely written.
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  • From Carousel on July 06, 2010
    This is absolutely brilliant. XD A blow job and run incident lol. Can't wait for mooooorreeee.
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