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By : Savagehunger47
  • From ANON - Linku on July 14, 2010
    Cock blocked by my inner demon. Priceless.
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  • From ANON - Ivy on July 14, 2010
    Great chapter! Chase scene was exciting and like that Hinata accepts Naruto and is a friend to him. Can't wait to read what happens next ;-)
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  • From serenagold on July 09, 2010
    Great story! Keep up the good work!
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  • From arcticfox on July 06, 2010
    Imma looooooove you if you update quick! And you better make naruto be happy!

    Love tha storie so update and be quick about it!
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  • From Jelp on July 04, 2010
    LOL! Interesting so far. Love how Naruto's pretending to be a damsel in distress, and Sasuke's eating it all up. :) Looking forward to the next chapter! ~ Jelp
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  • From ANON - qwerty on July 02, 2010
    Good chapter! Keep going!
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  • From ANON - dar on July 02, 2010
    i definitely didn't know what to expect! BUT i like where this is going and cannot WAIT until the next chapter is out!! I love sasuke's obsession and naruto's naiveness. Makes for a good story!! YAY!
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  • From ANON - blasterblurby on June 30, 2010
    I was laughing my head off when naruto started playing damsel in distress! XD

    can't wait for more
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  • From Kerrisa on June 30, 2010
    I really like this story but I must caution you to make sure you proofread and edit your chapters before you post them =O Missing words, spelling/grammatical mistakes (like tense changes) can be really distracting and kill the mood you're creating with you're characters. Like the last line of chapter 2: I'm screwed, Naruto thought watching as the guard was bragged away. I don't usually review (bad habit, I know, I'm trying to change) but I did enjoy your story and want to continue reading future updates and I know I'm not the only reader out there that's turned off because of errors in the text. The last bit (why Naruto thinks he's screwed) confused me some, it's not clear whose blood red eyes he's looking at, i thought they were already watching Sasuke... but then a guard starts clutching his head, and then they see red eyes? =/ I'll re-read it though and see if I just missed something.

    I'm looking forward to seeing how this story progresses and I hope you update soon. I like your Naruto and I like his relationship with Kyuubi, lol I even like how you made Sasuke a chump and am very curious how he's going to react when he finds out he's been played =)
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  • From maegerakawaii on June 30, 2010
    I am loving this fic so far. I wonder if Sasuke will figure it out soon that Naruto is the fox. I hope so. Please update soon. I love your story.
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  • From on June 29, 2010
    I think its a good story so far. please continue
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  • From serenagold on June 22, 2010
    This is a great start! Seems interesting, keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Zeph on June 21, 2010
    Interesting story so far. I liked how you managed to put Naruto's history in this chapter without making it look to rushed. Oh, and the beginning with the fairy tail book was great! Please continue this story.
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  • From smint45 on June 20, 2010
    Nice start!!!! I like it very much!!! Can't wait for more!!! See you again!!!
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  • From ANON - blasterblurby on June 20, 2010
    I really like this story and can't wait for more.
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