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Reviews for Warmth of a Cold Touch

By : ChocolateRedVelvet
  • From bloodshound on March 20, 2012
    damn, this story has seriously progressed since last i checked. do you have mailing list. >>
    I wonder what will induce Kimmi to dump snake tongue.
    It's good that naru being responsible has gotten keshi and sasu off their arses as well. i'm thinking the third stabbed himself in the hand keeping all his secrets from naru. still, naru is getting quite a collection of pretty boys huh. ^^ are tsunade and gaara going to play more of a roll?
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  • From Mjangelsakura on March 16, 2012
    Finally!! A HakuxNaru fiction... I have been looking for one of these for AGES! They are so hard to find and so few are this good plot-wise or well written.

    I will thank you for keeping Haku a guy. It just doesn't sit well with me when people turn him into a girl.

    I eagerly await the next chapter of this story. so I do hope you'll update soon.(^.^)

    Xoxo
    Mj
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  • From ANON - NarutoVixin on February 07, 2012
    im all for Kimi being added to the mix. this is a very well written tale thank you for sharing you talent with those of us with none
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  • From NAnderson on January 21, 2012
    I can't put into words how happy this story makes me :) So true to the Naruto world and yet so different. I'm looking forward to more!
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  • From moodysavage on November 19, 2011
    I think this is such an interesting story. I like the amount of detail you have put in developing the plot. You don't have filler scenes and I definitely get the feeling that all the scenes play a part in the coming storyline. I like that... it's like what they have to do for the movies!!! :)
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  • From bloodshound on November 19, 2011
    i din know this site had watch/fave lists... damn i wish it did. that'd make life so much easier. and you'd so totally be on it.. ^^
    in spite of the alteration in the time line, i hope Naru swill still be there for Tsunade, konohamaru and Gaara.
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  • From angelgirl251 on November 17, 2011
    I really like your story. Especially since Naruto and Haku are together... Or will be lol. They make such a cute couple but not a lot of people write about them, especially with Naruto as the seme. And I think it should be a threesome, I mean doesn't Kimmimaro deserve some love too? Please keep up the good work and update soon. :)
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  • From LadyLaran on November 17, 2011
    I love that you came up with a way for the trio to be together and the clan be able to grow. Knowing Haku as we do, I doubt that girl will ever get close to him due to her desire for fame and power.
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  • From moodysavage on October 01, 2011
    I love how this is going!!! I like how Haku reacted when Naruto told him that someday he would be following what Naruto told him to do :)

    And some readers think of Haku as a girl? Noooo!!! Totally not! And I agree... Kimi is pretty cool how you've introduced him. This is such an interesting twist that includes so much of what's familiar... I really like reading this. And you have the next chapter pretty much done?!? Uh... where?!? Looking forward to reading more :)
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  • From Kortir on September 30, 2011
    Personally, I find that Naru/Haku has a cute undertone in a way that Kimimaro would only spoil. I'm rather interested right now with the single pairing, so for what it's worth I'd vote for no Kimi. thanks...
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  • From ANON - qwerty on September 24, 2011
    Having Kimmi enter the relationship would definitely be interesting to see (he's one of my favorite characters that doesn't get a lot of action in the fandom sadly) ... I'm just curious about how that would happen since Naruto and Haku already are being a solid (platonic at this point) relationship together already. But if it can be done smoothly, which judging from your writing style I think you're more than capable of doing, then feel free to do so!
    Great job! Keep going!
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  • From Mort on September 24, 2011
    this is intriguing the way you turned this looking forward to more-
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  • From moodysavage on September 23, 2011
    This is such a good story. I'm really enjoying how it developes. A threesome... hmm... well normally I prefer when it isn't a threesome because many times it just seems like one of them isn't as important... but in this story I don't think that would be the case. I don't think Naruto or Haku know an awful lot about loving relationships and I think it will be pretty natural for them to become important to each other like that because they DON'T have anyone else. That would also make it very possible for a third person to be added and accepted as just as important because they haven't exactly had normal lives and I think they would WANT to accept the possibility of someone else caring about them. I think just being that important to someone else would be highly valued by them and a third person wouldn't be the 'less loved' person.
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  • From DeviousLilDevil on September 22, 2011
    I think its a good idea for the addition of kimimaru simply because we really didnt get enough screen time with that character and that could give you a lot of free reign with what you could do with him in the story. Besides Naru deserves all the loving he can get, lol. Chuunin exams around its gonna be pretty interesting. So have fun with it. Looking forward to your next update.
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  • From Nescafevh on May 12, 2011
    Naruto really isn't that dumb, people just assume he is. Look at it, his education would have been near-ignored in the orphanage and any he did get was only basic before the academy. Even then I think any teachers OTHER THAN Iruka would have neglected him as well. Also I think he really is quiet smart, look at him in battle. Only it probably got that way that every time he showed any intelligence, people started complainingaccusing the fox of coming out. So he has to act dumb whenever he is smarter in a subject.

    Even if he only learnt from his master, Haku would probably be smarter than Naruto in general knowledge.

    I think Haku and Naruto should train each other. Haku can catch Naruto up on his education and Naruto can not only show him another way of life but even teach him other things-the shadow clone technique included. I can just imagine Naruto going on missions with or without Haku, acting all goofy and dumb but really being the smartest of them, even Sasuke. It would be so fun seeingreading him beat the bad guys easily, the entire time making it seem like an accident or coincidence.

    By the way, is this a yaoi Haku & Naruto story?
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