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By : CheerfulRegression
  • From ANON - dicigalice on June 11, 2010
    this is certainly something else! cant say much after just one chapter i fear, but im curious to know how things will work out.
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  • From ANON - Macy on June 09, 2010
    I am afraid. The way it was written is so mechanical and cold and I think that works well with the atmosphere of the chapter. Naruto is so young and I fear for what lies ahead. It was a well-written chapter and I couldn't stop reading as much as it disturbs me. Intersting so far. Good job :)
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  • From satterb on June 08, 2010
    Sounds really interesting so far. I look forward to more.
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  • From Dorkchic on June 08, 2010
    Oh my God! Have these people no souls?! Did they ever have to do what they are about Naruto through? Does Naruto have no say at all? Is there a radical group out there that would be willing to burn the place down?

    Sorry, I have a tendancy to over empathize with the characters (especially if it is well written) and the very detached clinical demeanor covered with a spinkling of nice that everyone has adopted when speaking with or about Naruto just seems to make it more horrible. It does a very good job of showing that it is just another day/another dollar for these people. And it also places further emphasis on the fact that they do not see Naruto as a person, but as a commodity. I can see myself really loving and loathing this story at the same time. Loathing it because of what is going to happen to the little ball of sunshine. Loving it because it is so compelling. Please update soon.
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  • From bob665 on June 08, 2010
    I used a similar idea in one of my stories however significantly different in many aspects. As for first chapter I guess it was okay. I didn't get a sense of any real feeling from any of the particular characters. Well, mostly Naruto who even though he was five should have stood out a little more. As for if you should continue the story that's really up to you. A question you should ask yourself is do you really want to write this stuff? Anyway sorry for not being too helpful, but if I can be of any particular help even in comparing notes because I did do research into the subject myself my e-mails on my profile. Take care and best of luck with whatever you decide.
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  • From cynaga on June 08, 2010
    Terrifying and well written.
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