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By : CheerfulRegression
  • From bob665 on June 17, 2010
    You lost me. I had held out hope, but I don't think you'll accomplish your goal if your goal is what I think it is.
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  • From bob665 on June 17, 2010
    I've read three chapters and will probably give it four before giving up on it completely, but right now there is a dullness to it. I think I understand what you're doing, but you keep on such a basic level.
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  • From ANON - zimmrie kanoah on June 16, 2010
    so i dont know where you are going with this or how long the boys will be there but maybe neji or gaara maybe both. possibly kiba but when they are older perhaps. *shrug*
    anyway you still have my interest even tho you have my stomach in sickly knots just to think about it. as for who the woman is duh Tsunade. i knew it was her the moment the dr. mentioned needing to bring in the gov lady to fix naruto. Tom is a dick and i dislike him. who naru reminded her of. could be his father minato or it could be her lil bro who died. i remember quite distinctly naru reminded her of both in the anime. ^^
    hm... thats all i have to say currently. hope the next chapter is in the near future.
    later zimm


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  • From cynaga on June 16, 2010
    The story reminds me in a way of one I read where people were cloned for spare parts; they were treated "well" because they were a product. A very uncomfortable but feasible situation. I would like to see the boys with some kind of power (other than their friendship) to get them through. I know Tsunade will help Naruto but maybe there could be an underground organization fighting against the government and the running of these "institutions".

    I can't stop reading; even though I want to.
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  • From ANON - Lil_lo on June 16, 2010
    It should probably amuse to to know that Tom still disturbs me a lot. Just the ideal that he could be happy doing what he does with Naruto, and in his mind they probably have a relationship is making me flashback to a fan video of Osaka from (I forgot the show) creepily stabbing her teacher while this happy whistling tune plays in the background.

    Then again it's scary that instead of trying to treat the mental problems in society there has been an extreme version of a brothel where the customers are basically allowed to commit what would be considered crimes because the victims receive excellent care. Granted that didn't help that little girl.

    Tsunade is here! Sadly she could be thinking of either Naruto's father or her own little brother in this situation-granted clues have been dropped that maybe Naruto shouldn't be there at all. Sherry's conversation with Tsunade is definitely a shining example of why I'm reading this. I'm glad that I took the plunge and began reading and I hope you are encouraged to update soon. Honestly I would normally throw a measly it's good update when someone demands reviews, but this makes me think to much to stay silent and I didn't have to have a account to review.
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  • From ANON - Lil_lo on June 16, 2010
    I'm so scared right now. I think that a lot of fan fiction treats rape like some passionate excuse for love and unfortunately it's mostly from authors not understanding the full scope of the offense. I think my fear comes from you really nailing down the nature of the act. It's supposed to evoke terror, and surprisingly Tom was the scariest thing here. I'm torn between the customer who saw Naruto crying in the hall and requesting him for what was probably the violent use without the mouth piece or Tom's seemingly nice manner causing me to shudder at his actions. Then there's the scary knowledge of being able to recover quickly and suffer more bodily damage while your soul dies slowly inside or you lie to yourself to survive. I'm questioning myself for delving into this like I am so don't worry.
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  • From ANON - Lil_lo on June 16, 2010
    This seems like a very interesting setting. I'm so far struck by the different adults used to get Naruto into the system and watching how they're subtly tying him to what they need for business. I love how we are getting a glimpse of what horrible things will come, but each adult is by omission setting Naruto up for this. For all I know, he lived such a horrible life that he may welcome this new change on some level. I wonder about the methods of getting fulfillers-it seemed important for Naruto not to have his father's last name.
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  • From missbri88 on June 14, 2010
    Man... I just started this story and I'm breaking already... I was trying to read with dinner but I quickly lost my appetite. Ima try to stick with you to see where we go, but it looks like this'll be hard on me.
    Oh and you should take off the 'add a chapter' button. I hit it by mistake and had to back track.
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  • From ANON - Tricia1224(loggedoff) on June 14, 2010
    Wow! This is well written and I like that you are writing this from the victims point of view. I am not sure if I will keep reading this, becausei am not sure I can handle it. But I do give you much cudoes for not glorifying it and making it pleasurable when there is no possibility of that. I also like that you are writing this about a very touchy subject that pushes a lot of squick buttons. And yes I skipped the authors note in the first chapter did not make that mistake for the second one.
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  • From cynaga on June 14, 2010
    you're creeping me out here - just saying
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  • From ANON - Macy on June 14, 2010
    Ugh. I want to see sasuke already so he can work on saving naruto. He is going to get him out eventually right? Right? Uhh I am confused myself why I keep reading this since it's so disturbing. However it intrigues me somehow. Hard to explain --must be the way you present it.
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  • From Sheemashelin on June 14, 2010
    alright subject matter aside this appears to be a well thought out story. i appreciate tha you didnt go into detail but you have enough that it hits you where it counts. i will continue to read as long as it stays this endearing.
    good job and good luck
    ~zimm
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  • From LadyVorlana on June 13, 2010
    ...interesting.

    Definitely not my usual read. But...I will give it a chance for a bit longer
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  • From satterb on June 13, 2010
    You've painted a picture that makes the reader want things to get better. I really like this story, and don't see myself as a freak for doing so. Lot's of terrible things happen in the world. And you are truly demonizing these pedophiles. Keep up the good work, it's a really interesting story.
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  • From ANON - hollow on June 12, 2010
    i kind of like it not bad but i do have to say poor naruto poor poor naruto i hope he gets saves
    please update soon
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