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Reviews for The Hinata Harem

By : mippydesu
  • From PnKnG on July 03, 2010
    Very nice and well written. The SasuHina bit and the ending in it is very in character.
    My only complain is that the sex scene itself between Sasuke and Hinata is a bit short. It could be more detailed and discibtive.
    Also love how Sasuke is rubbing it into Naruto's face.
    Maybe you could do another SasuHina or SasuHinaKiba chapter but this the boys know Naruto is watching and is Jerking himself off while they have their way with her. So basically make Naruto into a cuckold, who loves to watch Hinata getting taken by other man and getting off on it.
    Hinata of course doesn't knows that ;)
    Would be awesome if you could do that, and don't forgot to go into more of the details when writing the sex scene.
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  • From Trandoshan on May 31, 2010
    It's a great story! I hope you'll think of something to get Naruto and Hinata together, I know it's awkward because of Hinata's infatuation with Naruto, but you can do it! Hmm, and for other pairings... *cough cough* is it too much to hope Hinata will have some time with another girl? Even though she seems to like a hot, quick, rough sex, it could be nice to have a change once in a while and "torture" her with some slow, kind, gentle erotic foreplay. If you would need to name some girl, it should be either Sakura (I think of her because she did like Sasuke, and maybe still does) or it could be Tenten (with her I would be curious if her "weapon specialization" would bring up some new, interesting toys :) ). Anyway, thanks for a great story, and please, update soon!
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  • From ANON - Zionide on May 31, 2010
    You know, I actually liked he whole Naruto-chickens-out thing. It made the situation seem more... Real? Anyways, good going on an awesome story. I'd actually like to see Naruto joining that little threesome sometime in the future, though it's your story.
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  • From noban123 on May 25, 2010
    Are the chapters connected to each other, or is each chapter supposed to stand alone?
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  • From ANON - dion on May 23, 2010
    I love both chapters, I espically enjoyed the second chapter. I can't wait for more, as for a pairing suggestions GaaraxHinata or KibaxHinata would be great.
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