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Reviews for Shallow Grave

By : VRon8899
  • From ANON - Laurel Runes on May 21, 2010
    I really enjoyed this. It was evocative and deep with a true understanding of the harsh realities they have to face with their decisions. You were very correct with the line of them having squandered their chance. But...there are always second chances, rare as they are. And I have to say, either path picked for a continuation would be nice. I think the idea of writing both and allowing us to decide the one we like best is perfect! Just a thought...you understand. ;)
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  • From kinai26 on May 19, 2010
    Please continue this. I liked the 2nd solution best, but would love the 1st one as well
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  • From ANON - shadow on May 18, 2010
    Either ending would be awesome actually! I like the idea where you post a chapter from both and then we can see which we like better!
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  • From ANON - foxykasumi on May 17, 2010
    I really like this. You should do the option where he figures out its a fake.
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  • From ANON - tamingriki on May 17, 2010
    Just this one chapter had me wanting more. To be a leader is sometimes doing things you don't want to. Is it too callous to think that one should die so that thousands may live? That the needs of the many outweight the needs of the one? I believe it was Queen Elizabeth I that stated "Uneasy is the head that wears the crown."

    I feel for Naruto. To have to kill your best friend because they were a threat to the safety of the village is a lot to shoulder. No matter what Naruto decided it was a case of "damned if you do, damned if don't."

    I, for one, would definately like to have this continue. I opt for #2.
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