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Reviews for The Pursuit of Happiness

By : sugar0o
  • From EzriCandy on August 11, 2012
    (OMG I reviewed this in the past?! OLD AND NEW REVIEW STILL APPLY! LOL)
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  • From EzriCandy on August 11, 2012
    -adds to all-time favorites-

    I really don't know what to say. I don't think I've seen such an original plot in a LONG time in the Naruto fandom and I just A D O R E this story! I forgot in my previous review of one your fics to mention that Minato was one of my other favorites. He was totally justified in ALL of his actions during this story and I think you have him characterized to a T for someone that has lost his love and and was forced into something he didn't want.

    I really hope, even though it's been a few years, that you consider making a sequel to this...with Sesshoumaru making an appearance! He would make a powerful ally for Minato for any that even attempt to hurt the pups of his pack sister.

    I know you can create something amazing! (Hell, you already do!!)
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  • From EzriCandy on May 12, 2010
    Sugar0o, Sugar0o, Sugar0o...

    What can I say about this story... *thinks*

    How about...

    I LOVE IT! I never, ever pictured this pairing and I would love to read more. I hope you decide to do lots and lots more for this pairing and expand the whole relationship of this new family. I love the fact that Kakashi and Jiraiya were just like family and the end where Kakashi thought of Kags as a sister. I kept thinking of older Kakashi and had to keep reminding myself that this was in his younger days, lol.

    Have you though about doing a threesome with Minato, Kagome and Sesshoumaru? That would be hotness of epic proportions!

    I always know that when I read something written by ya, that I'm in for great story with a killer lemon. Please, don't stop writing in the Naruto Fandom. People are lazy all over the fiction sites, but know that there are people out there that appreciate your ideas and writing style.

    Thanks for the unique and great read!
    Ezzie
    *gives Minato, Kagome and Sesshoumaru plushies as bribe to keep going!*
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  • From Nescafevh on May 09, 2010
    Very good story, I loved it. I think you SHOULD do a sequel, one where Naruto, Souta and Miroku are in the academy together, along with the others in Iruka's class. (I can see Miroku being the new Sasuke, Ino and Sakura drooling over him.)

    I think while they are, Kagome gives birth to a daughter. I can just see her, black hair with blond streaks through it, eyes so deep blue they are almost sapphire, she is literally an combination of both mother and father.

    I want to see Sesshomaru's reaction to meeting Minato, if he now sees himself as Kagome's big brother, I think he will NOT be amused with him. I think it would be funny if she contacted Sesshomaru and he arrived before she had a chance to tell Minato. I can just imagine the two facing off, Minato thinking he's protecting his love from some stranger and Sesshomaru just doing it for amusement (and to test him).

    (Did you know Sesshomaru means either killing circle or perfect circle? And, get this, Inu Yasha means FEMALE DOG DEMON!!!)Maybe as a joke Sesshomaru can ask Kagome to name the daughter after him, it could be his own private laugh.
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  • From mrk33 on May 08, 2010
    Nice and refreshing. A sequel with Seesshomaru being called back
    for their daughters birth, and have the council s*** themselves
    learning or seeing who he is, The Lord King of all Bijuii and Demons.
    Would be awesome.
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