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By : GudenMulle
  • From ANON - Daga on November 18, 2013
    Great story! I can't belive that you never finished :( Hope you'll update someday...
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  • From Carousel on March 12, 2012
    I really like this story. Is Naruto going to end up with Sasuke?
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  • From Epilepsy on March 08, 2012
    I think you did a really good job =) I've had many friends when they were coming out, some were even exactly like naruto, self hating and did everything to cover it up. I'm glad you took the harder route because I never see this side of coming out
    can't wait for more!
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  • From foxkitsune300 on March 08, 2012
    Its hard for me to find a story I really get into, It really is for me.
    I am a truely picky person, but I absolutly LOVE this story! I hope you update soon! like REALLY soon!
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 07, 2012
    he should just stand up on the caf table and say this....." i have something important to tell everybody! *takes deep breath* im gay. i no back then ive said a lot of fucked up ans shitty stuff bck than about gays, but i was scared i was also stupid and foolish to think that me hurting my three preciouses (haku, iruka, and kakashi) would help me feel normal. if i have any true friends in here ,not that i really deserve them, then you wouldnt treat me any diffrent. but if you push me in the hallway I WILL push you back, if you call me a dirty name I WILL call you one back, if you try and jump me before, durinig, and/or after school I WILL get you back, and IT WILL 10X's harder than you got me." and with that he should walk out and go to the roof and think of a way to apologize to iruka and kakashi. me personaly think that he should do it publily like in the news paper on the news channel, oh and i also think that he should get in his first fight, let him b out numbered but hold his own really fucking good. that way ppl will b like oh shit dude even tho he lost he still beat dat shit out of those 4 dudes, thats wats up, i give him his props 4 that. or something along those lines. but you know add the cold shoulders and disgused looks b4 we get into the really good stuff.............thats just my ideas, totally not expecting you to use this cuz u most likly have the next chappy planned out. lol thats just wat it would do if i were in his spot. update soon plzz!!!!!!!
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  • From vernajast on November 01, 2011
    Aw, so far, so good! jerk!Naruto is a little disconcerting, but he IS brash, rude, and a bit uncultured, so in a normal high school, I can see him turning out this way with the right setting. Besides, Naruto and Kiba are total bros who would hug and then yell "Hey, no homo!" I feel like your writing style changed slightly from the first chapter to the second one, like you became a little more confident in your writing, which is great! And I'm happy your story is doing so well! I am secretly reading it with the hope that it turns out to be Naruto and Sasuke as a pairing (I got a little giddy when he finally started thinking Sasuke was hot, and IIRC, that's the most recent guy he was checking out). I can't wait to see where it goes. :) Can I be added to the list?

    As for coming out, hm. I grew up with parents who believed that gay people should be exterminated, so...yeah. I didn't come out until I was 28, a few weeks after my divorce. I had spent my entire life trying to be straight because it was normal and it never really occurred to me that I "could" be anything else, really. My secret obsessions with certain girls in high school were just...me being me. I didn't know they were crushes. I didn't...enjoy being with boys, but I thought there was just something wrong with me, a hormonal imbalance, maybe? Looking back on it, it's all ridiculous, but I did grow up in a very homophobic environment. It took my dad a month to even speak to me again, but luckily, things are much better now! I now live in San Francisco with my fiancee and our three cats.
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  • From ANON - rfawf on September 08, 2010
    I want MOOOOOREE! haha, I love this it's agreat tale
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  • From Graypheonix on August 24, 2010
    an unusual idea for a story, but one a lot more people should see. I mean, hey, not an easy thing to deal with, harder in some ways when you're older, but easier as well. In any case, continue to update, ja ne.
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  • From ANON - Greyspell on August 24, 2010
    This story is amazing. Its not one of those fake "I'm gay, I'm great now me and my boyfriend are the most popular people in school" stories. Its real and it addresses real issues. Fantastic job and I hope to read more soon.
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  • From ANON - morlana on August 23, 2010
    wow really have me in tears.
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  • From Usuratonkachi on August 23, 2010
    Well, what can I say? Besides "fraises" should be "phrases". xD Lol, I love your second chapter. It made me practically squeal in delight! Also, Thank you SO much for the notification. It made me all warm and fuzzy inside. xD Also, being secretly gay isn't easy. I've "come out" to my friends and they accept me and love me just the same. As for my family, it's so incredibly painful for them to hate homosexuality so much. I can't come out to them. EVER. And it hurts amazingly much. It's horrible and it's eating me from the inside out. And every day, it's like I die a little more inside. But life is much better when I have my friends to support me. I consider Naruto incredibly lucky to have such an understanding father. (Kudos to you for making him so.) Again, I commend you for a second great chapter. You are a great writer, even if you make spelling errors. I could only hope to write as well and fluently smooth as you. :D
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  • From BabyInACorner on August 23, 2010
    woot woot Finally updated! I have been waiting for this for so long chika. I'm such a spaz, I forgot the name of the fic and since there is no alert button I was just hoping and waiting for you to update. Please don't let us wait that long for the next one??!!*hugs into submission*
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  • From Usuratonkachi on August 10, 2010
    Ah, that was pretty intense. And it all flowed pretty nicely. And apart from misspelling the word "phase" and a couple of others, I believe you did a GREAT job with this first chapter. I'm a bit put out about the slight hint of Narusasu, seeing as I'm a Sasunaru fan, but all in all, excellent job. I wish I had Naruto's courage to tell my family, but my parents would most likely grab a hot skillet and flay me alive if I so much as mentioned finding the same sex good-looking. :| It sucks. I admire the guts Naruto had. :D Please send me a notification of an update for this story. My e-mail is in my profile. Thank you.
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  • From Sheemashelin on July 28, 2010
    Okay you must continue this story like I'm not even kidding. I'm even willing not to continue The Beast and The Dog if you d not continue this. And who's Naruto's someone?(hopefully not Sasuke tho it doesn' sound like it.) Gaara maybe? That would be awesome(even tho Naruto has already been with Temari. that would make it even more amusing.) Anyway whatever you choose just keep updating.

    Poor Iruka-sensei and Kakashi-sensei. I can be cool about the Haku thing but not the teacher thing. Naruto dropped to a new low. Not cool at all.

    I'm serious UPDATE!!!
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  • From thelostogg on May 11, 2010
    Wow. I was surprised by how you worked in Naruto's desire to fit in and expanded his characterization. Naruto is a character that I have a hard time picturing as a jerk. But having him cover up being gay to fit in put me in mind of the facial expressions from the Shippuden series, where Naruto is trying to ignore other people talking about the nine taled fox, and made your characterization of him fit really well.

    So often in fiction, there's an obvious division between scenes and narration, but your use of specific details (the paragraph where Naruto transitions to high school) made the transition really smooth and kept it in scene nicely.

    Overall, I really like it. You should add another chapter! If Haku forgives him, after sufficient groveling, maybe Haku could give him tips for sounding out whether or not Sauske is gay? Pretty please?

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