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Reviews for The Inner's Desire

By : JJindiana
  • From RykOakwine on May 29, 2016
    This is actually awesome. Way way too many Naruto Sakura stories transform Naruto into a seriously ooc dominant, all so the author can act out their fantasies of domineering Sakura. It makes for terrible fanfic and boring erotica. Butnthis is at least the start of a Naruto Sakura story where they act appropriately, where she's the one pushing the agenda just like she always has in canon.

    Has potential, would read more.
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  • From ANON - midnightscar17 on January 10, 2015
    This was a bit overboard pleas repair it and bring them together

    Update
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  • From ANON - Magi on April 08, 2014
    Wow this is AWESOME please do more!
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  • From ahmadaziz on May 17, 2013
    oye wtf ????? All that buildup and thats that ????? I mean come on give us a better ending.... or is it still in the works ???? I mean it would really suck if it all ended right there. The story was amazingly awesome and awesomely amazing and it was very original but the ending didn't do justice to it at all. Hope you are working on the ending.
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  • From scriptease on August 03, 2012
    Oh man, really loved this story!

    Was hoping more for the ending! One of the best pieces of writing I've seen on this site!

    I hope you continue this tale, although all signs seem negative ):
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  • From ClumsyPinkTiger on June 26, 2012
    O man! Such a cliffhanger. I would love to know where you were planning on taking this story. It needs some sort of resolution. Man I hate seeing Naruto suffer. But, from the looks of it, it seems like you might have abandoned this story. . .maybe?
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  • From KdaAnimefan on March 22, 2012
    it's a good read, not many fan fics like this, and its a good twist on what is known on sakura's inner, though it is similar to what others have come up with. It be nice to see this story have an ending
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  • From Kdragonfire on July 03, 2010
    This is a great start for a fanfiction.Now it leaves me with more questions? Like who will find out what has Sakura
    has done to Naruto? Will it be Tsuande? Or Shizune? Or Ino? Or Hinata? Will Sakura be punished for her actions?
    Now you know that Hinata would like a little chat with Sakura's Inner. When she finds out what Sakura's Inner has done.Will Sakura be able to tell Tsuande herself? Will Ino suggest that Sakura needs psychiatric help. Until such time Sakura recovers Ino would personally see to Naruto's recovery.Or would Sakura's mother demand that Sakura must be allow to make it right by moving Naruto into the her home for his recovery. Where Sakura will be most professionally by wearing a uniform for when she is helping Naruto recovery.
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  • From venia on May 15, 2010
    Very sexy and hot, the beginning. As the story evolved it turned into more soft/emotional, but that's fine too, since Naruto was very in character, enough to make me enjoy his reactions. I kept thinking 'yes, that's what he would say, it's so like him' so congrats for nailing his character down to detail. The ending was hopeful even if it was left open... but I want to hope that now that things were cleared up Sakura will be given a nother chance, affter all she was forgiven wasn't she? All in all, very good writing.
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  • From KaelHyun on April 23, 2010
    Oh, dear lord. You ether need to continue this or make a sequel to continue this because really you shouldn't leave us hanging like this! Basically what I'm trying to say is this is a great story please continue it.
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  • From jupmod on April 01, 2010
    Interesting story here that made the guy be the rape victim and the girl the aggressor. Even though it was not Sakura's fault per se, given she was controlled by her Inner, Naruto would not likely heal emotionally soon over the incident, no matter how well he knows about being controlled by an inner being (he is a Jinchuuriki). Yet feeling sad that a huge wedge was between the two, I hope that Naruto will eventually heal emotionally and be able to trust Sakura again. It is obvious she's falling in love with him but just keeps denying it.

    A very emotional and good start to this story. I'm looking foward to reading more. :)
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  • From wind797 on March 29, 2010
    that was great one of the best that i've seen on this sight i just wish that i coould see more of this story like having naruto and sakura or at least sakura confront her inner about what she did to naruto and her feelings
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