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Reviews for Being a Yazkuza's Bride

By : Namet
  • From ANON - shisuta on April 19, 2010
    I just stumbled on this story and decided to give it a look. I'm so glad I did. This is great so far. When I finally got to the end of chapter 5 I was like "Where's the next chapter button." You've got to update soon. I love it.
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  • From Jelp on April 17, 2010
    Hmm. I'm guessing since the name is Akai Me - red eyes - that Sasuke owns the club. I wouldn't be too surprised if Sasuke was stalking Naruto or if he happened to have in some way influenced the person who gave the club VIP entrance tickets to Shikamaru. Sasuke's sneaky like that. XD

    Looking forward to seeing them together again! ~ Jelp
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  • From dhur on April 17, 2010
    I really do love this story, tehehe a stalked naruto by sasuke is sooo cute!!! I can't wait until the next chapter!! you have definitely made my week!! Thanks!
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  • From Yuutousei on April 17, 2010
    Rawr.
    I've been lurking around and I like your fic.

    FYI - "Red Eye" should probably be "Aka Me" and not 'mei'. You have to conjugate 'akai' to use correctly.
    But, Sharingan is closer to like, crimson or blood red, right? "Hiiro no Me" translates to Eyes of Brilliant Red/Scarlet might be better. "Ake no Mei" translates to Eyes of Blood.

    Just randomness to share
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  • From auronsgirlfriend on April 16, 2010
    cool story so far!
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  • From ANON - Oni on April 16, 2010
    This is such an awesome story, but what happenedc to the next chapter? I know that the next chapter was loaded and I read it. Are you re writing it? I thought chapter six was really good, also. I hope that you put it back in.
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  • From maegerakawaii on April 16, 2010
    Could this be another club owned by Sasuke? Possibly. Naruto has nowhere to run. He should just give up and give in to Sasuke. That would really get steamy. Thank you for the update! I look forward to more.
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  • From ANON - kanazerosukenaru on April 16, 2010
    sorry to lazy to sign in today....anyway...Poor Naruto, he doesn't even know what he has allowed himself to be caught up in. I guess since the club seems to belong to Sasuke or one of the Uchiha's I'm assuming he is not "stalking", but he sure made his claim on the stupified blonde...haha...At first I thought you were going to have the Redhead be Gaara....and I thought all hell is about to get loose! I can't wait to see how Sasuke works his magic on Naruto....Great Stuff..Thanks for the update.
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  • From BumbleBee435 on April 04, 2010
    *Welcome to the light side, we have stolen cookies from the dark side* (always wanted to do that :D)
    I just have to say: smexy!!
    And I like Sasuke being aggressive^^
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  • From maegerakawaii on April 03, 2010
    Definitely aggressive lover. So much HOTTER. Compared to Viewfinder, this really is tame. If it was Asami, Naruto would have been "raped" multiple times already. The way Sasuke is all confused about his own actions and feelings is kind of cute. I can't wait to see what Sasuke will do to that bastard, Gato. Maybe Haku and the cook will be gone even longer taking care of the perverted pest.
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  • From Jelp on April 03, 2010
    Poor Naruto! I hope those guys get what's coming to them!

    I also hope Sasuke and Naruto have a bit more time together in the shower - when Naruto's more willing. ;) ~ Jelp
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  • From ANON - qwerty on April 03, 2010
    Sasuke's aggressive all the way. Don't make him passive or gentle because that wouldn't suit his personality at all.
    Great chapter! Keep going!
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  • From missbri88 on April 03, 2010
    All I have to say is woooooooooooooooow. I CANT WAIT TO SEE MORE!
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  • From Dorkchic on April 03, 2010
    Actually tomatoes are both. I saw it on food network. When they are hanging on the vine they are considered a fruit, but when cut up on your plate they are considered vegetables.
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on April 03, 2010
    I didn't finish it yet but it's great! "My love prize in viewfinder" is my obsession and I love Naruto! It's just perfect combination! And you actually used those characters from... so long ago like this Gatou guy (which I hardly even remember) and Haku... It's great! And Sai and Deidara!!! People normally underestimate them as a fanfic characters! Good work!
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