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By : Sheemashelin
  • From ANON - anonymous on May 24, 2010
    The story is great so far. I would love to see Hinata get togather with Temari
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  • From ANON - DaBerrila on May 20, 2010
    Oh yeah will kabuto-maru make an appearance or is he dead? If he's alive will mugen tsukuyomi affect his Edo-Tensi?
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  • From ANON - DaBerrila on May 20, 2010
    no need to worry about the name i'm used to it but thanks. Love the story, can't wait for the next chapter. Wonder if isaribi is included, love to see her sane or insane. She'd be great for surprise attacks or scouting new areas along thier way to the volcano, probably die before or at the volcano due to the heat. How are the other akatsuki are safe from madra?
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  • From ANON - weskerism on May 19, 2010
    HEY LONG TIME NO SEE!!! Karen huh.?...interesting...very interesting. Wasn't expecting her, she's not my favorite but the way you wrote her I started rooting for her. I'm glad to see her using her mind instead of hoping for Sasuke to save her or something of that nature. Short chapter but as always pretty damn good! As for the pairings, hm...let me think...I like Gaara/Hinata, I don't know if you are going to put Genma in this fic, but, if so Genma/Hinata, Kakashi/Tenten (yeah I know but for some reason they jive well for me), I hate Sakura so if you decide to kill her off she doesn't need a pairing (PLEASE KILL HER OFF, PRETTY PLEASE?) ^_^ if not pair her with Karen, of course Shika/Temari, Ino/Shino, Neji needs a man, I don't know who though, and my hero SAI (he's just too awesome to be paired with one chick, maybe he should get action on both sides if you know what I mean). Those are my opinions on the pairing matter. I hope this helps you decide. Still a true fan of your work!!! TA TA FOR NOW!!!
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  • From DaBerrila on April 20, 2010
    excellent work as usual, and thanks you very much for dedicating this chapter to me. Ilook forward to more of your greatness. P.S. my name is supposedto be DaBearila but thanks to a typo it's stuck as is, and I'm a guy. sorry for the confusion
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  • From ANON - Propaganda! on April 12, 2010
    Hmm, well first I thought maybe he was having a split personality disorder but that made no sense at all xD. I'm not really sure, it sounds like Madara is relying on the power of all the demons combined, but it's counteracting against him. My puzzlement aside, great chapter! Can't wait for the next :D
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  • From Overlordofnobodies on April 11, 2010
    Ok I hate to say this but I what to tell the true. I really dont have any thing to say about this chapter.
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  • From ANON - weskerism on April 04, 2010
    Hey! I'm glad to see someone that updates so fast! I can't believe Chouji turned; that was awesome and sad at the same time. I also liked that you gave so much thought about the days ahead. It will get colder and the conditions harsher because of the sun not rising. This gives alot of credence toward your attention to detail. With that said, will we see any of the Akatsuki members anytime soon? Will the bad guys have any doubts about the Moon Eyes jutsu? I can't see Zetsu liking the dark all the time since he is part plant; I think he needs a little sunlight and Kisame just doesn't seem all around evil to me. Anyway, keep up the good work and see you next time around. Take Care!
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  • From Overlordofnobodies on April 04, 2010
    Nnnnnnnoooooooooo!!!!! You killed Chouji!
    I'm some what happy how he die. He did a lt better then the rest and you had Inochou in it. You have to let Karin live now as she was the only other one I what to live!Now if you dont mind. I'm going to my hind hole and cry now. WWAAAA CHOUJI!!!
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  • From ANON - weskerism on March 31, 2010
    Hey, I'm glad Tenten makes it out alive! She is totally cool even though she doesn't get much attention in the manga. I hope she is kick ass in this story. Glad that Lee is here! You can't keep a good Lee down! LOL! But what about Gai? This story would be soooo dark if Gai is a crazed zombie! Can't wait until the next installment! When does Madara make an appearance? Yeah, I know...so many questions I guess I should shut up and be patient like the rest of your readers; but, I truly love this fic! Take care and I will see you at the next update!
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  • From Overlordofnobodies on March 30, 2010
    All right another chapter[clab hands rogather}
    So Kakashi is alive. Sad I wa hope he was crazy. I now I'm a sadistic. I just like the kids over the adults. Iruka was good to see and how he turn healing was very in charter. Nothing really dark in this chapter. I now Shino burning down his house and the thing with the Inuzuka is pretty dark but I did not feel the same.Most like because I did not now any one. You just name clan and people. That said I did like it more because the way you had Lee come in.No idea why but that made me chuckle a little. Thou I have a bad fleeing for Guy.


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  • From ANON - ryan on March 25, 2010
    i would like to see haku,tenten,
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  • From ANON - weskerism on March 24, 2010
    Good to know Gaara and Neji made it out alive! I'm glad to see that most of the babes of Naruto are still alive and kicking (but what about Tenten?) I know I am getting ahead of the story, but that just means it's a damn good story! I hope you get back to Sai soon! He's my new hero! I don't have any critism for you just mad love! Keep up the good work! See you at the next update!
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  • From ANON - Propaganda! on March 23, 2010
    :D Your thinking is correct, great chapter! Sucks that Kankuro had to kick the bucket though =/. Ah well, everything comes with a sacrifice. Well, like I said before, great story and can't wait for the next chapter. ^^
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  • From Overlordofnobodies on March 23, 2010
    Oh I plan on reading more.^_^
    At first I was not to happy about reading about Sand but that changa fast.I have to clab my hand for your Gaara. You hit his charter right on the spot and not many people can do that. You did good with Matsuri. I ten to hate her as she nothing more then filler girl for Gaara but you made her into some one I can like.I now it's a little late but I like how you are doing Madara's plan so far. You are makeing it into a really evil plan. Unlike it is in the manga where my first thought was {Are you jokeing?}
    I have to ask this. Besides Neji all of Team Gai is dead or was he with another group of people?I dont really care if there die or not. You just did not make it very clear who he was with. I still have only Chouji and Karin for my vote. How much longer are you going to let people vote for who lives?
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