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Reviews for Black Sand

By : Sheemashelin
  • From Bluerose92 on October 08, 2011
    ugh!
    ive never considered this pair before
    and i love it.
    so update soon.
    and you should make this into porn.
    thats the main thin thats on this site.
    porn.
    lol.
    but yea.
    you missed some words at the end but your forgiven.
    love the plot.
    i think you captured both characters well.

    ~Golden Kitsune~
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  • From tawanawelch on August 17, 2010
    Oh yeah! I also enjoyed when Kankurou could just, what did he say? '...feel the change in atmosphere...' when Gaara came in That just made it all the more real.
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  • From tawanawelch on August 17, 2010
    Gaara seems like the kind of guy that would create such detailed artwork for relaxation,etc. I love that tender moment when Gaara just studied Sai marveling over the detailed work. You really captured the spark felt by both in subtle glances and other observances. I really enjoy reading the dynamic you created between the two. It makes me feel good.^^
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  • From tawanawelch on August 17, 2010
    Oh, how I loved when Sai just looked at the kids when they were arguing and how Mairen only feels comfortable talking to Sai. When Gaara and Sai had their silent moment, I thought I would just melt, that really makes me squee.XD
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  • From tawanawelch on August 17, 2010
    I also like how sweet you made the children, and they're so funny with giving Sai the rundown on what he is to do as an uncle. That was adorably cute.
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  • From tawanawelch on August 17, 2010
    I'm really gonna like Sai being an uncle. It was also endearing to see Gaara be warm and loving with kids.
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  • From tawanawelch on August 16, 2010
    I already like how you started at the ending, I also like the pairing. I can picture them saying everthing you wrote so well. I love how Gaara is so tender with his lover. I so look forward to reading this.^^
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  • From cynaga on July 30, 2010
    yum ; delicious~!
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  • From kagekitty on June 08, 2010
    do keep writing. Sai makes me laugh. They're a cute couple :3
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  • From ANON - TheIceMan on June 06, 2010
    Another good chapter. Looking forward to the next.
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  • From ANON - TheIceMan on June 01, 2010
    This is good. Can't wait to see how it ends.
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  • From therar on May 18, 2010
    *EMOTIONAL DORK ENDUCED TEARS*


    Oh the drama-rama but I adore it soooo much. You really captured the warmth between these two in such a romantic yet kind of subtle way. It's adorable, teh touching, the sounds, the smells; it all collected into such a tender and heartwarming piece.
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  • From ANON - Conjuring A Dome on May 05, 2010
    Nice job. No honestly I'm impressed. When I first saw what pairing it was, I really did not think it was possible to write it and keep them in character. But here you are proving me wrong.
    You've keept them as much in character as possible, and yet managed too make them interact romanticly in a rather touching way.
    Can't wait for the next chapter! You've officaly gotten me hooked! c:
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  • From greeneyes40988 on May 05, 2010
    I....I can't really think of anything.lol I loved this chapter as always. Sai being called Kitty tickled me cause thats my nickname has been since I was little. When Gaara was standing watching Sai and the little one sleep you could totally feel the...want he has for Sai, or at least I could. The kiss was simple but perfect, it was tender and new to them at least, nothing like others I've read when their shoving tongues down each others throats. The way they fell asleep was touchingly beautiful.... *sigh* I wish someone would fall asleep like that with me.lol. But anyways it was great so worth the wait. Can't wait for the next. Keep up with the mad awesome writing skills.
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  • From arabuzumaki on May 04, 2010
    A kitty ANBU mask is perfect for Sai imo. Sai has such an innocent quizzical look sometimes it's just so cute. Snuggles between Sai and Gaara can melt any frozen heart.
    I still like the fact that the baby only talks to Sai XD And he's spoiling her silly without even knowing it. How will she react when he dies?? O.O Will she ever speak to anyone? O.O


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