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Reviews for Black Sand

By : Sheemashelin
  • From therar on April 28, 2010
    first of all, you know how much I depise a cliff-hanger!!!! but seeing Sai cry, that deserves forgiveness. I could truly feel the tenderness and sorrow in that moment and my heart was ready to burst. I felt the 'baby' part from Gaara was a little weird but considering his love is about to die, anything can be said and done lol.

    The image of Gaara being with his nephew and nieces is very adorable and must have been difficult, even for him, to hand them over. I remember you saying how tricky it can be to personify Sai and Gaara together because they lack a lot of the features writers often need to create a sotry and even more frustration when you put these two in particular together but you have done a marvellous job of it. The kids have most likely filled in the blanks that would occur when writing these two and they add to Sai's natural curiosity and Gaara's ability to adapt to new things.

    OH! Uncle Sai! too sweet!

    The seeds of love are sprouting! In Sai's belly too ^_^ When naruto popped in, I imagine little Mairen inwardly saying "you ruined the moment you idiot!". well done to Sai by the way, he pulls nasty little pranks quite well. Such a devil child.

    I'm glad to see the relationship between Gaara and Sai building up and the directness from Gaara is finally bringing it together. I lok forward to seeing more touching moments hidden in Black Sand ^_^




    see what i did there?
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  • From greeneyes40988 on April 25, 2010
    Oh I love it. Like Always lol. Sai was very in character, he switched from serious ninja to caring uncle flawlessly . And Awww Sai blushed that was sooo cute. Made me fangirl everywhere. Gaara finally admits that he thinks Sai is attractive heck yeah. But anyways keep up the great work, I can't wait for the next chapter. :)
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  • From cynaga on April 23, 2010
    nice pacing~! I like the sand art.
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  • From arabuzumaki on April 23, 2010
    lol you're getting Sai great. He really becoming his own person the way you write him. Keep it up :)
    Gaara is so direct it's sexy hahaha
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  • From greeneyes40988 on April 01, 2010
    Oh haha I love Sai's prank thats great. Heh. Sai makes such a great uncle! Though I kinda feel bad how he's not getting his smiles right, makes sit back and say "Awww" lol. But I still think your doing a great job keeping in character as much as you can. It's not like you can make it perfect. Sides if you did then he wouldn't be good for the story, you gotta bend em' just a little. But anyways your doing wonderful I can't wait for the next chapter. ^.^
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  • From cynaga on March 30, 2010
    This is a lovely story - full of emotions and family bonds. I can't wait to read more~!
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  • From arabuzumaki on March 30, 2010
    I like how you portray Sai going through his emotions. It's really amazing to see, really heart felt. It's like you're painting a great picture on a blank slate(and we all know how blank Sai is >.
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  • From greeneyes40988 on March 23, 2010
    Great. A very good base to start from. I love how Gaara is with the kids, makes me giggle. Uncle Sai that was a great one. Sai is a hard charactor to right but I think you got his awkward speaking pattern and his over all uniqueness down. But I loved it. I can't wait for the next chapter. *huggles back*
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  • From HavocTellenoi on March 13, 2010
    I've never seen a Sai/Gaara fic and this one seems to be rather amazing for such a small beginning. Looking forward to seeing it come together and where it all leads, what with that emotionally charged prologue and first chapter. And those Temari-Shikamaru kiddos were absolutely adorable!
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  • From arabuzumaki on March 11, 2010
    It really takes children to help you find your heart. Especially in Sai's case, that little girl is just chipping away at his barrier :) She really has a Temari attitude lol
    You write a perfect Sai, very perfect imo (do you know him personally rofl jk ^_^)
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  • From greeneyes40988 on March 10, 2010
    OH WOW! So beautiful. I could feel the pain coming off of Gaara. I can't wait for the next chapter, hope you update soon. :)
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  • From arabuzumaki on March 10, 2010
    That was really sad. Never seen the pair before. Interesting beginning, I'll until forever to see the next chapter :)
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