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Reviews for My Dobe

By : vodoodollz
  • From Netsubo on August 19, 2013
    Yo...where's the rest of this story???? I WANTS TO READ IT!!
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  • From Gaaras_Only on March 02, 2013
    I really like this and hope you update soon
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  • From ANON - Dark_Blue_Princess on July 10, 2012
    Hokage= Fire Shadow
    Raikage= Lighting Shadow
    Mizukage= Water Shadow
    Tsuchikage= Earth Shadow
    Kazekage= Wind Shadow
    Oh and when are you going to update?
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  • From Dorkchic on March 10, 2010
    I disagree with bookworm. You have him running around on his own, he recognizes his loved ones, and he recognizes the behavior of the villagers as hatred. He understood when Sasuke asked him a question and responded and he knew what Sasuke was threatening him with during the bath incident. Not only was he smart enough to attempt to hide, but also smart enough to run and protect Mr. Ducky (who I vote gets renamed into Sir Squeaks-A-Lot lol). He could be considered behind developmentally because he does not speak but that you explianed during the story. As someone who comes from a large family, used to work as a nanny, and currently works with children from newborn to 6 year olds I will say that you are doing an excellent job of depicting Naruto's age in his behavior and that you should not listen to Bookworm since it is apparent that he/she either did not pay attention to what they were reading or has no clue about small children.
    On a seperate note... I hope Naruto manages to continually irritate Sakura in front of Sasuke (making her look even worse) and that Ino thinks that it is halarious.
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  • From Bookworm51485 on March 09, 2010
    Is Naruto supposed to be 3 years old or 3 months old? Because you said years, but you're writing him as if he's 3 months old. I think you're showing your lack of knowledge of child development. Because if a child was behaving like Naruto, they'd call him developmentally challenged.
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  • From Dorkchic on March 09, 2010
    (4)Yes, you spelled it correctly. (2)The most common weapons that would fit on a bookshelf in the Naruto universe would be kunai (a sort of dagger) and senbon needles (what Genma always has in his mouth). (3)The TM symbol is used in reference to copyrighted material (I think that is what you were referring to).
    You did incorrectly spell 'entrance' when listing the locations of things within the village. (5 and 6)Also (and this is just a suggestion) in the future you might want to just say what the item is instead of using a brand name because as you have already noted some things are not available in other countries. Vegemite is an exception to this rule because Vegemite is the only brand that I am aware of that makes such a product. I was more referring to things like the rat poison. It will same you lots of extra effort in having to explain what you meant in author's notes at the end.
    Having said all of that- I love this story! Please update soon! I cannot wait to see more of Sasuke and Naruto's home life with Sasuke taking care of him and Naruto wearing his old clothes with the Uchiha fan all over them (hopefully that would drive Sakura straight over the edge). Maybe it would give Sasuke a little peace to have a sense of family again.
    I hope that Sasuke gets to really pound some people for treating his dobe that way and I also kind of hope that the jutsu wears off gradually so they get to interact on multiple levels. Either that or it wears off suddenly and they wake up in the morning wrapped around each other with Sasuke in his boxers and Naruto naked because his little kid clothes would have been destroyed when he went to full size.
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  • From LadyLaran on March 09, 2010
    Cute cute cute...I wonder what Iruka was going to say that he cut off when talking about Naruto's not speaking.
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  • From perfect_blue_rogue on March 09, 2010
    i've got to say, this is the cutest and most well written story with this type of plot i've ever read. it's a rare thing when u come across a story with this type of plot where one of the two or three of team 7 gets turned into a child again. three other stories like this that i recommend are "My Chibi Dobe" by Angelwings Sorrow, "Kakashi's Discovery and the Chibi Incident" by Tiro, and "Sasuke's a Baby" by xXxsailorstarxXx. The reason being is that when these things happen whether by plot or accident, it forces u to see the side of the characters involved as they learn things bout their charges that they never got to know bout or they hide from public view. so to see this story, i'm happy it's building a plot and hopefully will make sakura learn a thing or two bout her teammates and drop the act. but i don't see that happening anytime soon. but anyways i do love this story and Naruto's just too damn cute!
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