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Reviews for Long Ago And Far Away

By : YamanashiOchinashiIminashi
  • From Mitsuki95351 on April 18, 2013
    This was oh so cute!
    Everything was just so amusing to read,
    Gramer was sometimes a little difficult to decipher, but all in all very lovely story.
    Though the ending was a bit of a let down,
    Anyways, good job, loved this story :3
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  • From DemonicTenshi on March 12, 2012
    Hi there I have really tried to read your story however I find it really hard to keep track and keep reading the same lines again and again because of the fate it all in one constant block with no paragraphs or anything like that. So sadly I was unable to finish your work even though it seemed very good. If you would like I could beta it for you if you can't or don't want to sort it yourself.

    DemonicTenshi

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  • From ANON - Andi on February 21, 2012
    I think there might be a formatting issue with your chapters. I really, really wanted to read your fic but it seems like all the chapters are one huge block of text without paragraphs or anything. I hope you can fix this somehow. I really would like to read your fic.
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  • From maegerakawaii on May 03, 2010
    OMG! Kakashi and Iruka are finally getting it on. And I love pervy Sasuke. Thank you for the update! Can't wait to see how hot and steamy Kakashi and Iruka get. I hope no one interrupts them this time around. There better not be another stray maid or Kakashi might just end up murdering someone.
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  • From maegerakawaii on April 11, 2010
    Kakashi and Iruka should just let go of all the sexual frustration and just get on with making out and more...AHEM! Thank you for the update!
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  • From maegerakawaii on April 04, 2010
    Oh, the misunderstandings. They just keep coming. Kakashi jumps to conclusions too fast. And he has no confidence in himself when it concerns Iruka. It is kind of cute, though.
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  • From maegerakawaii on March 27, 2010
    What a steamy confession. But will Naruto be swayed so easily? I can't wait to find out in the next chapter.
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  • From goodchaos on March 14, 2010
    Like the story, but it really bites that Sasuke can't remember a Damn Thing!
    I mean really! NOTHING! Nothing at all! ugh..
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  • From maegerakawaii on March 14, 2010
    NOOOOOO! Sasuke-baka better remember that it was Naruto who took care of him for five whole years. I wonder if Sakura will actually tell the truth if Naruto doesn't. Can't wait to find out what's next.
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  • From sexydarkcandytt on March 06, 2010
    love it so far cant wait for more. one chapter and i am hooked.hope u update often.
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