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Reviews for Bite Me

By : Daydreamer79
  • From lara5170 on October 02, 2015
    I really enjoyed this
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  • From TheMadKatter13 on June 22, 2011
    Cute as hell.
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  • From ANON - Kat on March 07, 2010
    Hey. I loved "Do Hearses Count.." to bits! Vintage cars and funerals-what's not to love? "Accidentally in Love" was quite adorable as well. And, of course "Bite Me"! I would be very interested in seeing a sequel. Since the boys can't feed off of each other anymore,a handsome stranger might just do the trick, don't you think? Just think of potential threesome candidates! There is teasing but expressionless twinkie Sai, Neji with his frustrating attutude, and, of course, good ole' wild Gaaara. Hell, one could even throw a few ladies into the mix. And then there is Kyuubi with Itachi. thgese two could do with Deidara or Kisame thrown their way, what do you think?
    I happen to be full of ideas while being sub par at their execution. One very persistent one is a Ninjaverse story. If I had to write a summary, I'd say it was about Naruto growing up, coming of age, etc. Now what I find frustrating is that most writers explicitly state the shape form the get-go and hold onto it for dear life, if any and all competition demoted to episodic and stategic apprearances only while the reluctant lover is watching..Oh, and of course the encounter are always completely innocent with the other lover boy (usually Naruto) having no feelings or intentions for said "competition". But real life isn't like that. One usually goes through loves and heartbreaks multiple times. What I would like t osee written some day is an exploration of how Naruto discovered and came to terms with his bisexuality. The logic place to start with would be with Sai, what with his ridiculous accusations and challenges. Realistically speaking, I don't see naruto going past making out with Sai. At first, Naruto would be freaked out and weirded out. But I think Naruto could eventually make poeace with the fact that attractive men are attractive and that their attention (physical included) isn't necessarily unpleasant while Sai unfreezer a bit and learns to feel again. then I can see Naruto's adventure taking him to Suna. And there is Gaara there to address all that they had in common before and all that was lost and what is left over now. Matsuri is obssessed and overbearing. Naruto I can see taking the time to slowly coax Gaara out of his shell, getting him used to touching and being touched in return. To me, Naruto eventually being Gaara's first time makes sense. Only I think it would probably be oral only-because of how new and uncertain the whole thing would be for the both of them. Undoubtedly, Naruto would be questioning his masculinity-i see a nice intelude of Naruko with, say, Neji quite fitting. I think Neji would come around for seconds..this time for Naruto in his male form. Neji is a man of technique, which can be nicely reflected in how he gives head. There are quite a few techniques that go into it that are generally glossed over in most fanfics. And Neji has enough repressed sex drive to possibly go all the way. And then, of course, there is Sasuke with his bleeding emotional wounds. By that time, Naruto would have to learn how to take care of people, how to read them. Sasuke has so much grief, pain and regret stored deep inside of him - saving him involves so much more than bringing him back or saving him form jail. I am positive he would get very bristly at the idea of being intimate with Naruto. It would also be interesting to see a Sasuke who has had sexual encounters with women before. And I mean to see his encounters described. If nothing else, he is a man with a purpose and a plan and seeing how convincing a woman to bear a dozen kids is easier if sex is plesurable, practice would be required. Karin, maybe? Because the girl needs to be cured of her obsession big time, and nothing sex with Sasuke-mechanical, technical....or maybe plain bad..could drive this point home quite nicely.
    Shutting up now! Keep writing!
    ~Kat
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  • From GudenMulle on March 07, 2010
    Fantastic! :D . Typical romantic Naruto to wait for Sasuke XD. Love the Kyuubi-Itachi pairing, it's great.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 07, 2010
    Just totally glomped your page on ygal...*loves hugs kisses your head hugs again* Thank you for more!!!
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  • From ANON - Syren on March 07, 2010
    Hi, so I read this all last night, and I absolutely loved it....and then it stopped. I was not expecting it to stop I wanted it to go on for a longer period because this story has such amazing potential. Please consider continuing it.

    Syren
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  • From Shadowfox3163 on March 06, 2010
    I loved it! Is that the ending though? It would be okay but I really want it to continue a bit more cause I loved the change in this story. I wanna know what happens between Naruto and Sasuke some more and how Sasuke reached his decision and what happens after Naruto comes down from his "high"... continue please?
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  • From loveusender on March 04, 2010
    I cannot WAIT for the second part *licks lips* this is so yummy.. I wish it had more blood and sex stories..they are so separate mostly
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 04, 2010
    Great first chapter!! Please continue!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 03, 2010
    Hey Dreamer gotta give you love here too. You said on ygal that you were going to take some time with MM, but just I want you to know I don't care how long it takes all your fics are always worth the wait in my HO...great stuff once again...

    kanazerosukenaru
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  • From smint45 on March 03, 2010
    This is a really nice ficlet!!!! Can't wait for part two!!!! See you!!!
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  • From ANON - layzee@live.se on March 03, 2010
    wow...this was captivating from the very beginning, and I can tell its gonna be a goodie :)
    I'm not much of a 'kyuubi-naruto-brothers' fan, nor am I into many vampfics, but hey - you somehow...make it work. And make it work
    very well, mind you.

    I like the way you portrayed Naruto. While still in character, very different from normal. He seems to be smart, experienced, and he sure knows the art of seducing XD
    and that, I find very sexy. You know, instead of the dumb, whiny Naruto...
    also, I like the little brotherly bickering in the beginning, it just seems sooo like Kyuu to be speaking so rudely about Sasuke, knowing the fact that he means so much to his brother.

    Well all in all...I dont really know what to say...
    this seems to be a very...proffesinal fic, if you know what I mean XD
    not a B fic!
    kinda...If you compare Date Movie with... Eh, [insert awesome oscar winning movie], then your skills are like the oscar movie.
    (hm... That comparance was kinda suckish)

    Bye!
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  • From GudenMulle on March 03, 2010
    I like, I like, I like. Vampires! Long time since I've last read one of those..
    Love possesive seme Naruto, for some reason it's a rare thing. Please continue soon :)
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