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Reviews for Afterschool Snack

By : kakashisgf
  • From kakashisgf on February 27, 2010
    In response to Pisces, I'm sorry you didn't find my story stimulating, but everyone's sexual tastes are different--thus I have to disagree with your assessment that the story is geared more toward male satisfaction. I, the author, am in fact a woman, and I personally find it sexy as hell to get a man off (if I didn't, I wouldn't have written the story).

    Basically, while I have no problems receiving negative reviews, I believe it's silly to criticize a story for the particular sexual acts it describes. If you want to critique my style, grammar, structure, flow, etc., that's fine, but complaining about the sexual content itself is ridiculous and unnecessary (especially since the tags indicated the type of acts that would be taking place in the story); I'm going to write about what turns me on regardless of the fact that you think I'm promoting inequality in the bedroom. And as to that, actually, most of the het stories I read on here spend ample time discussing a man going down on a woman, so I'm not sure on what you are basing your "more than enough male satisfaction going on" statement. It seems to me that there's quite a bit of female satisfaction going on as well.

    To my other readers, I do apologize for utilizing a review to respond to Pisces, but since they didn't sign their name, I had no other way of responding. Of course, the chances of Pisces actually reading this are slim ... but I still had to try. At the very least, it should give everyone else an understanding of where I'm coming from when I write stuff like this.
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  • From ANON - Pisces on February 26, 2010
    to tell you the truth, this story wasnt much of a turn on. it seem geared more towards a man's satisfaction, than a woman's. And i believe there is more than enough male satisfying going on as it is. not to get into the theology of it or anything, but why is it supposed to be such a turn on to suck a man's dick. Where do they see the pleasure in it? Oh yeah, I just lust to the thought of having your hard, sweaty, salty flesh shoved down my throat on a first date. Nothing makes me wetter. Puh-leaze.
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  • From Prism0467 on February 22, 2010
    That was way hot.
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