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By : ersatzbeta
  • From maybewhynot on October 29, 2010
    I'm really glad you hadn't dropped this story. Things are finally beginning to unfold and I would've really hated not knowing what actually happens in the end.

    I see Kakashi is getting sloppy with shoving away his feeling towards Sasuke, or those feelings are finally getting too much for him to ignore.

    I'm still looking forward to the Kakashi/Neji face-off. LOL

    and I'm quite glad you like my reviews. ^_^
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  • From maybewhynot on September 13, 2010
    it's been a while since I last reviewed, and for that I apologize, but that doesn't mean I haven't been following and enjoying the updates.

    I thought Sasuke's dream was intriguing, and I can't wait to find out more about what it implies.

    Shikamaru's offer was quite surprising even though it shouldn't, it was expected of him to do something like that to save someone two of his friends seem to care about.

    I can't wait to find out how Sasuke managed to stabilize his chakra, and I'm eager to know more about Kakashi's internal turmoils about his feelings towards Sasuke, and maybe a little more about how exactly Sasuke feels about Kakashi.

    hope we'll be reading more about Neji next chapter, I bet there is a lot he and Kakashi should talk about, and I'm still hoping for some NejiShika action. LOL

    good job as always.

    ~Maya
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  • From maybewhynot on August 05, 2010
    Sorry for the late review.

    I almost missed the update due to several updates in the same day, I didn't see it. that said, I agree to the idea of update notices, I believe it helps if one couldn't visit the site for a while for whatever reason.

    Anyway, Shikamaru & Neji. LOL

    Okay let me tell you first that these two are my OTP, so I tend to read too much between the lines. But I sure would love it if they turned out to be a couple ^_^

    can't wait for the next chapter to know how Kakashi will deal with Sasuke's bruises, and how Sasuke will counter, and more than anything what will happen between Neji and Kakashi the next time they meet.

    Keep up the good work. ^_^
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  • From morbidcuriosity on August 01, 2010
    love the story, looking forward to reading more. This is my first time using this forum, is there a way to book mark the story so that i am automatically sent the updates/links when more is added. Also can you see my email address?
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  • From maybewhynot on July 31, 2010
    OMG

    I need to know what exactly happened in that dream.

    waiting for the next update.
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  • From maybewhynot on July 16, 2010
    sorry for the late review.

    I thought this chapter was quite nice, it kinda hinted why Sasuke's chakra is being weird.
    I liked how Kakashi is trying to ignore thinking about how Sasuke makes him feel.
    And I would certainly love to know Sasuke's own motivations, is it love, trust, lust?? Can't wait to find out more.
    Keep up the good work ^_^
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  • From Yuliya2009 on July 14, 2010
    Yay you updated, finally!
    Really liked this chapter ^^ and the part about Sasuke's chakra or w/e he is containing is getting very interesting! Hope you updating soon ^_^
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  • From maybewhynot on July 10, 2010
    I was surprised you updated to soon. but I was glad about it :) the last thing I read before I went to bed last night.

    Kakashi's anger is starting to get the better of him. he's starting to lose his cool and act rashly, I like how the slip of control was gradual.
    and man do I love the idea of Neji landing a hit on the legendary nin. GO Nej! *cheers*

    waiting for what unfolds next ^_^
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  • From maybewhynot on July 08, 2010
    at laaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaast

    so happy you decided to update. to be honest I'm barely a Kakashi/Sasuke person, but your story intrigued me. Sasuke seems to have a lot to deal with and I can't wait to find out more about that.

    your choice for Neji being Sasuke's only friend was quite good and reasonable, and I'm a sucker for anything Neji-related even if he wasn't the central character. I liked the blocking tenketsu part to control the chakra disturbance. I'm seriously eager to read what Neji is going to tell Kakashi next chapter, and is the relationship between him and Sasuke is simply friendship or is there more to it than just that.
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  • From yaoiismyantidrug on April 15, 2010
    Eek, I haven't reviewed the last few chapters! I feel kinda bad ^^; Because I really do love this, you know. I'm always excited to see it updated :D

    Oh, I'm so glad Kakashi decided to cross the line! I loved the... the mood of their physical encounter, how it was like walking on eggshells sometimes, and others, it was just so good and easy and hot. Pf course it would be that way! Because even though Sasuke *wants* it, he's still Sasuke... And even though it's *Sasuke*, with all his neuroses and twitches and craziness - he still *wants* it. And that came across really well :D So did his effect on Kakashi - ha ha, I wonder for how much longer Kakashi can keep lying to himself.

    Especially with what's going on now! He's worried, and I love how different his concern is now than it was, say, when Kakashi came back from his mission chapters ago. I have to say, I'm really curious about what's going on!

    And the dream sequence - that was cool, and I liked the way Kakashi got sucked into it ^^ Very very dangerous, waking someone like Sasuke up from a nightmare XD And I wonder if, had it been months earlier, Kakashi would have considered that before he rushed to Sasuke's aid ♥

    I think you're doing a super job of showing the (very) gradual building of their relationship, and I look forward to more! Hope your computer troubles get sorted out!
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  • From Yuliya2009 on April 07, 2010
    poor Sasuke, nothing seems to work well for him, ever.
    at least he's got Neji ^^ The out of control Chakra was interesting. Hope we get some of Sasuke's oddities explained.
    Really like the chapter a bit back that was in Sasuke's POV, it was a nice change, and really made the chapter stand out.
    Hope the updates don't take to long!
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  • From maybewhynot on April 01, 2010
    mean mean Beta *growls*

    that was short ... well since we don't have a choice we'll have to wait for the update.

    I really like your story.

    poor Sasuke ... hope Kakashi can fix you up.
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  • From Yuliya2009 on March 31, 2010
    aww Poor Sasuke! and poor Kakashi I guess...
    Even if it was a bit short, it was a very interesting chapter.
    Update soon! I love reading this story. It's a one of a kind.
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  • From littletoshiro on March 25, 2010
    I liked that is stayed in character with the rest of the story. It wouldn't have felt right if they just jumped into something.
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  • From maybewhynot on March 25, 2010
    I don't understand ... Sasuke apparently has feelings for Kakashi ... Kakashi shouldn't sleep with him even after making it clear that he's not intrested in Sasuke that way ... it would only make things worse for someone as fragile as Sasuke ... or is it that Kakashi has feelings for him that he won't acknowledge??
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