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Reviews for New York City Is Evil

By : yolotengo
  • From serenagold on February 01, 2010
    I had to read this. The title intrigued me. Now, as a New Yorker, I'm going to hate all over it before showering you with complements...

    "Naruto clung to Itachi’s waist as they zoomed through the streets of New York." ~ NO. Yeah, I dunno. You really can't zoom through the streets of Manhattan. Especially during the day. This just is not possible.

    "A lot of people didn’t know about this place; mainly those who lived around the area. It was a small beach on the coast just outside of the city. " ~ Where the hell are they? Jersey?? This is really the only option I can think of that's plausible. It wouldn't be the Bronx, since its on the Hudson. Brooklyn could be another option, but all its beaches are south shore. Although since you mentioned the rocky beach, I'm thinking the only places you could actually be referring to are along North Shore Long Island... although when it comes to surfing and waves and rocky shores, what you're really referring to is Montauk. However since any of these places would take you a hell of a while to get to from the city, its unlikely. I guess mystery beach X exists only in fiction. However, if you want to google some crazy shit, I do suggest checking out the Montauk surfing videos. When you watch it, keep in mind that if you fuck up while surfing, you're fucked. Underneath all those waves are jagged rock. It's crazy. Check it out! :D

    Anyway... now that all my nitpicking are out of the way... good story! I like the insecurities between Naruto and Itachi. When they finally go together in the end, I was cheering for them! Keep up the good work!
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  • From butterflies1974 on January 31, 2010
    I like this story and really it didn't need any sex...but I have to say that I almost got a tooth ache from it. Can't wait to read more from you.
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