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Reviews for Rhythm & Bruise: Gaara's Story

By : Darkprism
  • From ANON - okami_no_kage on June 04, 2010
    Again such a great chapter. I'm so glad I got to see all three of them in one room. It was so interesting. I kinda expected blood when I heard you say in the audio recording what was going to happen in this chapter. Can't wait to see the next chapter.
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  • From Carousel on June 02, 2010
    I love all of your stories and I really, really, really, really wish you would pretty please write a Kakashi/Iruka story. Please?
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  • From ANON - QueenofQuill on May 28, 2010
    I loved chapter 8. The story is unraveling slowly but at a good pace. I love the relationship between Gaara and Jody. It's a very touching relationship, if a little hard to define and it gives my heart strings a little tug.
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  • From Sheemashelin on May 19, 2010
    FUCK YES I WANTS MORE DIRTY GOODNESS. im in love with this fic and given the unique pairing im even more in love with it. also sweet jesus i think i got turned on right along with gaara when itachi got dominated. hellz yes! kiba is fantastically played cocky sure of himself fuckin smexy as hell... and gaara is to. i also like your writing style. the beginning of the story and how you drew the reader was unique and thr chapter where you introduced kiba was like who the fuck is it already!!! lol seriously i better see another chapter soon or i may go crazy... fuck kiba is a hotty... man... i think im a bit like gaara.... lol
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  • From ahmenet on May 13, 2010
    I rarely write reviews ( a failing I admit) but I felt I need to let you know how much I have enjoyed your writing and this world you've created. I've never been a big Bleach fan but I enjoyed seeing the characters in your world and how much they behave as the originals do. I look forward to seeing your updates and thank you for creating such a fascinating, indepth and magnifecent world ( I really don't spell well either). I will attempt to better my efforts with reviews. Looking forward to the next installment of Gaara's story. You have my undivided attention. Thank you.
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  • From nivell on May 13, 2010
    yay you updated!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 13, 2010
    one thing i didn't point out on my y gal review is that gaara gets all soft and cuddly after he climaxes.....kiba is gonna love him some of that....and he got off on being called bitch???? who knew.....yeah little red kiba gonna make you his biotch!
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  • From ANON - Carousel on May 12, 2010
    I'm ecstatic you updated. I love this story so much and I can't wait to know what happens between him and Kiba. The scene between Gaara and Jody was so sweet. =] Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Jeni on May 12, 2010
    THANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOU for updating!
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  • From jessysuki on May 12, 2010
    Oh! I was so glad when I saw the update! I just love this fic! Loved this chapter too! Looking foward to some more!
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  • From Prism0467 on May 12, 2010
    WOW.

    I don't think I even have it in me to write a scene like the one between Gaara and Jody. That was AMAZING! You pulled it off perfectly, I am impressed!

    Now I wonder if between Jody's support and Kiba's insistence Gaara might manage to find his way back to him?

    That would be sensational.
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  • From ANON - ygt on March 18, 2010
    really love the setting and mood you created in the first chapters,
    makes the story really interesting to read!
    great work!
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  • From ANON - Maya-Nara on March 17, 2010
    I just had to come back & read chapter 4 once more ... it was one of the greatest things I've ever heard ... it felt like watching not reading ... and I have it all in my eyes ... thank you for the amazing experince :D
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  • From Narcoleptic86 on March 17, 2010
    Have never been a Kiba/Gaara fan... though i think i am now!

    Please email me when you update: narcoleptic86@gmail.com
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  • From ANON - Maya-Nara on March 15, 2010
    the thing I love the most about your stories is that the chapters are intact ... you know exactly what you want to say & you say it without straying to side tracks ... the other thing I really like is the fact you tend to change subs into doms & the other way around ... I mean who thought Kakashi would be a sub?? although Neji is dom through & through the way I see it (although it seems that this opinion is mine only).

    any way I LOVED kiba's radio show ... I loved the way you ended the chapter after the show & I really liked his word "bite me" soooo-Kiba :)

    the one thing I somehow I don't like is that you tend to discribe scenery alittle bit too much ... I get lost & in the end I fail to imagine wha the place looks like :s but that doesn't make your stories less enjoyable ... I read every & eachone of them & loved tham all ... waiting for upcoming chapters in all the still going stories.
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