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Reviews for Rhythm & Bruise: Gaara's Story

By : Darkprism
  • From mannahpierce on August 05, 2010
    It took me a bit longer to get into this story than into the other Monoshizukanohi tales but the Gaara character had really grown on me. He's so complex. It is fascinating to read. Thank you for sharing it.
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  • From mistressofyaoi on August 05, 2010
    wow it sounds like kiba could be feeling just as empty as gaara,oh i wish i could writye them like you, this has inspred me to try and finish the new chapter for my fic by the weekend.

    awsome stuff cant wait for an update heck i even read the other naruto stories for this even though i'm not a sasuke naruto fan! oh and i wonder what the favour kiba is doing for haku ^_^
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  • From ANON - Critter on July 13, 2010
    Can't...words...sex...Kiba...Gaara...hot. More...ugh...
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  • From Carousel on July 13, 2010
    This last chapter was absolutely perfect and intense and delicious. The way Kiba had Gaara pinned an the and the and the.....I drooled a lot.
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  • From volaju66 on July 12, 2010
    I absolutely adore this story. Your writing is amazing and the storyline fantastic. And don't even get me started on the ahem more mature scenes. Fantastic and I can't wait till you update again.
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  • From jessysuki on July 12, 2010
    OMG! I never thought that I wolud like this couple, but they are becoming my favorite thanks to your wrinting. Can't wait for the next chapter
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  • From Prism0467 on July 12, 2010
    *sigh* Well, that settles it.

    Gaara is going to have to kill him.
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  • From Gaia77 on July 12, 2010
    I am officially, seriously in LUST with this story. You never cease to amaze. Normally the only sand Sib I can see with Kiba is Kankurou. In this case however, OMFG!!!! I cannot even begin to get enough. Lovely work as always and finally getting to the REAL good stuff.
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  • From ANON - qwerty on July 12, 2010
    Great chapter! Love this story!
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  • From mistressofyaoi on July 12, 2010
    woah that was awsome! oh if only i could write them like that, s it wrong that as a fellow writer i'm very jealous right now...
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  • From Prism0467 on July 12, 2010
    OMFG that hand job was so ridiculously hot that when Gaara came, so did I. Holy shit, Kiba is DANGEROUS.
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  • From ANON - Aislinn on July 02, 2010
    Please continue! I enjoy your style of writing very much, it is unique and very well done. It reminds of film noir, not a style I typically like, but you've surprised me on that end. I'll be waiting for more chapters; this story might well be my favorite.
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  • From Drauphner on June 27, 2010
    By far the most compelling story I've read in years. Your writing skills are very fluid and masterful. The universe you've created, the city, the sights, the sounds......the feeling. Is all too real. Your take on the characters is raw and creative and frankly enthralling to read. All the details of your story are coherent and never once contradict themselves. This is really my favorite fanfic and by far one of the most interesting things I've read in my life. You would do well to continue honing your writing skills for surely they can take you as far as you want them to. I'll be waiting to see what happens next. Best of luck.
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  • From ANON - AerieTigre on June 23, 2010
    Still love it. Follow it on LiveJournal, but saw your update in the lineup, so hey. Thumbs up? *wiggles them*
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  • From mistressofyaoi on June 22, 2010
    out of all these stories i am definatly enjoying this one the most, looking forward to an update soon and dont be surprised if mistress shows up on livejournal some time soon
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