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Reviews for Rhythm & Bruise: Gaara's Story

By : Darkprism
  • From ANON - Emi on February 04, 2011
    The story is awesome. Loving the way you write the characters, the whole plot and your way of writing OCs into it. *_*
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  • From Prism0467 on January 22, 2011
    Thank God for Jody. I love that man to pieces.

    Here's to all of us having a Jody in our lives who keeps us from being consumed by the darkness.
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  • From ANON - Carousel on January 13, 2011
    This last chapter was rather confusing. But I did like that thing Kisuke said towards the end. Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Candy_Bar on January 11, 2011
    I have now read through all 16 chapters (so far), and I don't even know where to start. You are by far the best writer in here. Not just the way you use words and build sentences, but the way you build your stories, the way you portray the characters, the way you evoke emotion in the reader, well, I could just go on and on. And the psychology behind it all, it feels so real it scares me! I'm amazed, basically! Can't say it any better than that. =)

    And for this story, well... It's absolutely thrilling, on all levels! A freakin' masterpiece!

    I consider myself gifted with language and writing (though english is not my first language), and I bow to you. Raw talent, that's what this is! =D
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  • From ANON - Curry on January 09, 2011
    Seriously, that story just made me sad that you wrote only two NaruSasu pieces. You're an excellent author with great writing skills and you definitely can make the readers shiver in their chairs with excitement. I would like to compliment you on your choice of vocabulary - it's mature, and for once I don't feel like reading a story that some teenager wrote without care for more demanding audience. I also admire the cohesion that shines through the chapters - you're very consistent and that's not something that I see often.

    Anyway, thank you for the good read. I really hope to see more from you, hopefully with my favourite pairing.

    Have a good day!
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  • From nivell on January 09, 2011
    OOh, was that Grimm in the beginning of the chapter? Wonder who he gets paired up with in this universe..=)
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  • From ANON - Yuien on December 17, 2010
    Man, I love the last part this chapter. I love how he blow up and empted his clip into the air. Hope it didn't hit someone, through if it hit a dog, then nvm. LOL. Update soon, I want to read more relationship development between Gaara and Kiba. LOL
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  • From Prism0467 on December 11, 2010
    "What's wrong, sweetheart?" Kiba asked, coming closer, and when Gaara felt a hesitant touch on his shoulder -- felt Kiba's hand cooled by the crisp air -- Gaara hated that Kiba was outside and cold and suffering. Hated that Kiba's left shoe wasn't quite on his foot and that Kiba was out here instead of back in Gaara's bed; hated that he had to ask how Gaara was fucking doing when it was Kiba's damned car that took the brunt of the first assault wave.

    Gaara despised that Kiba was collateral damage, and for the first time, Gaara felt that damage like it happened to him. In a mean and cruel instant, Gaara wished someone would just shoot him; getting shot was nothing in comparison to the rage and the fear that felt like fire and ice in Gaara's veins.

    With a vicious twist, Gaara yanked away from Kiba's touch, reached into the waist of his jeans, and pulled out the nine. He aimed up into the air, thumbed off the safety, and fired into the night. The steady crack of weaponry soothed Gaara's frayed nerves, and he emptied the clip, the trigger clicking once before Gaara stopped squeezing. He didn't realize he was yelling until the silence invaded his senses again, and he clacked his teeth shut on the roaring wail coming from the bottom of his soul.

    YOU ARE A PHENOMENON, TAKE TWO...
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  • From bloodshound on December 02, 2010
    gunna be some serious hunting here... go gettem Gara
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  • From Prism0467 on December 02, 2010
    Aw, hell. Gaara went from busting a nut (or two or three) to firing off a few shots from his weapon in a pitifully short amount of time. The Dogs, as it were, are sitting ducks.

    I've read this about six times. I'll probably reading another half-dozen times and review again.

    I got my fix. I'm happy.
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  • From ANON - Carousel on December 02, 2010
    This last chapter was wonderful. Gaara is finally realizing he can have feelings for others and that makes me smile. I thought it was cute and funny that Gaara got worked up over Kiba's car being wrecked. Was it the fact that it was a car that first pissed Gaara off or that it was Kiba's?

    Please update soon. The smut you write is the best there ever was.
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  • From ANON - v on December 01, 2010
    Loved this chapter, even though Gaara's mostly crazy I just can't help but hope for the best for him and Kiba...I love all your stories but this one is fast becoming my favorite :)
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  • From cynaga on November 30, 2010
    So intense~! Lovin' it!
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  • From cynaga on November 14, 2010
    I read Chapter 14 twice... I'm just saying. WoW~~~!!!!
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  • From cynaga on November 13, 2010
    amazingly emotive!
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