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Reviews for What a wish can entail

By : Lisea18
  • From darkangel13091 on February 23, 2010
    ………WOW… gruesome, sad, heart wrenching, Wonderful, and depressing as they come that’s just a few of the words that describe this story… I almost started crying when Sasuke died… ~tear~ Very well written and… I LOVED it… Great job and thank you for writing it
    ~KiKi~
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  • From Softwelshrain on January 27, 2010
    Powerful stuff, and I get that Sasuke's chakra has been sealed or supressed by Sai when he is first captured, and that he is already half dead/chakra depleted from his fight with Danzo. Totally different from the more common storyline of Sasuke returning and everyone falling at his feet. Sad to see something so proud fall so low, but still try to fight it when staring death in the face. I do feel for Sasuke's character and all he has been put through (and I suppose there is more to come), and the current Naruto character grates, and yes I can see Naruto charging ahead without thinking of the consequences or considering what Sasuke wants. I would also take it that there would be very few people, probably being countable on one hand, in the village that actually know the truth of the Uchiha massacre, so understand their spiteful taunts. The little twist at the end where Naruto goes over the brink, giving a forboding ambience - takes the reader out of the comfort zone with his character. Gruesome, but well done!
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  • From ANON - ametlla on January 27, 2010
    my heart... I think it broke ;_;
    seriously, reading this teared my heart apart but I loved it! You did such an amazing job in portraying Sasuke's reactions. The way he remained his stubborn and proud self and didn't stop struggling till the end was perfect and heartbreaking.

    now excuse me while I go watching some kitten videos to try and mend my heart.
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  • From Repanse on January 26, 2010
    Uh...uhm, don't get me wrong, I don't mean to be hurtful, but I think it's so unlikely as a story it borders on the ridiculous. As if Sasuke would be so defenseless to allow to be treated in such a way. "Not proud, strong Sasuke": that's right. Sorry.
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