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Reviews for Can you see my Heart?

By : loveusender
  • From xenawp532 on September 05, 2010
    I love this story, and I would like to know if you can email me when the next chapter is ready. Thanks Tammy
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  • From ANON - Jen on September 05, 2010
    I found this chapter to be really confusing. How much time has passed between this chapter and the previous ones about Naruto & Sasuke's argument? Does this chapter, in fact, have anything to do with the argument? It feels totally separate from them. What is this mysterious ceremony they are talking about in the beginning? Where did this stuff about Sasuke's father & Sakura come from? There was no mention about his dad pressuring him to do anything before this, so what was he suddenly pressuring him to do now? I don't really understand about Sasuke sleeping with so many people. All the girls got him drunk at a party one night and took advantage of him? Where the heck was Naruto during all of this? And that's a ton of girls he slept with!!!! Was it a rape? So was that the first time he slept with Sakura? (If so, why would he continue to sleep with her after something like that?) I don't understand, in general, how Sasuke is supposed to be closeted, and yet for the fangirls to know he has a boyfriend. That's not being closeted, it's just hiding the identity of your lover. Also, I felt like it contradicted Sasuke's pervious characterization for him to suddenly be revealed as a man-whore when he was upset about Naruto getting a blowjob from someone else. If Sasuke was a hypocrite and sleeping around back then, I'd like to have known about it. If it's a recent thing, I'd like to know why he suddenly became OK with infidelity when he wasn't at all before.
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  • From missbri88 on March 28, 2010
    Oooooh! I like this o far! The grammar needs a little improving because some sentences are worded funny, but I want to see more of this as a whole soon.
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  • From JtheChosen1 on March 03, 2010
    Awesome chapter! I loved the two scenes, Sasuke throwing an absolute fit and then Itachi telling him to hurry up and figure things out! Excellent work!is
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  • From AutorZwei on March 03, 2010
    Bravo! I loved it! The bit of Gaa/Naru was fun, but I can't wait to see how you do the Sasu/Naru, keep up the writing! :]
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  • From Kerrisa on February 11, 2010
    LMAO What a bomb to drop!! WAHHH I'm so excited to read more!!! I hope you update soon! I may need to read over it again, but the first chapter left me with the impression that Naruto was blind =o And as he wasn't at this party ( a sports star no less!) I'm really curious and interested in seeing how he and Sasuke got from how they were in college to the 10 years later! Awesome story! I'm so looking forward to it =D
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  • From YojiKato on February 07, 2010
    Hehe, that was great, Naruto calling Sasuke's name like that. This is very well written with an interesting story line. I can't wait to see where you take it. I look forward to reading more. ^_^
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  • From arabuzumaki on February 07, 2010
    lol he said Sasu's name XD I look forward to more.
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  • From JtheChosen1 on February 07, 2010
    Oh WOW! This is a great start! I can't wait for more soon!
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  • From Prism0467 on February 06, 2010
    You know what? How f-ing jacked up is it that Naruto is getting blown by Gaara in front of a room full of people and he screams out Sasuke's name when he busts that nut? Un-freaking-believable.
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  • From Dorkchic on January 27, 2010
    Great start! Was Naruto blind before? Or had that happened since he and Sasuke parted ways? Please continue!
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  • From Shadowfox3163 on January 25, 2010
    I believe that this story has the potential to be great. Its not usual to see one of the characters be blind. The song and your summary pulled me in and I find myself really wanting to know the past and what happened. I can't wait to see how Naruto doesn't remember and how Sasuke broke his heart. Please continue this cause I really wanna know what happens!
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