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Reviews for Can you see my Heart?

By : loveusender
  • From alexxgalaxy on March 16, 2011
    I hope there is a good reason for Naturo and Sasuke to get back together. I believe in forgiving but forgiving doesn't mean forgetting. I don't buy that one should get back to their ex because "they belonged together", that's just crap and so forced. If Naturo really takes Sasuke back, I hope it's more than that he still loved Sasuke or I will find it hardly convincing.
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  • From kimmie47 on March 16, 2011
    I am ot good on giving reviews, but I am wanting to read more and see what happens.
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  • From ANON - Kithicdame on January 25, 2011
    Oooohhhhh it 's been a while since i found a story like this! I love it if sasuke messed up and naruto would be the one being chased!!!! I want sasuke to do everything for naruto to take him back. I would also prefer it if naruto have someone taking cate of him now. Someone that would make sasuke jealous and do everytbing he can to be even better than that person. Keep it up and i cannot wait for the next part! The present and future! I want sasuke to suffer first for breaking naruto's heart!!! More ideas for you to come!!!
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  • From LadyWolf on December 28, 2010
    Wow! I blame all that has happened on Sasuke! If it didn't matter why screw someone else...

    I hope Naruto is okay! :o(

    Post soon!
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  • From ANON - Jen on December 03, 2010
    Woah, that was pretty intense. I'm so glad this fic is from Sasuke's point of view because now I really want to hear his explanation for how things got to this point! How did he turn into a workaholic? Sounds like he was well on his way to alcoholism as well--how did THAT happen? Why did he start taking Naruto for granted so much--to the point that he didn't notice Naruto was about to leave him? And most of all, how did he end up in bed with someone else (and at his own apartment!)? I'm going to give Sasuke the benefit of the doubt here and assume that he wasn't regularly cheating on Naruto since he called what happened "his-disgustingly grotesque- act of idiocy," and that's not something someone who was used to cheating would say. So what happened? Well, I can't be as angry with Sasuke as I might normally be since Naruto beat him up (good job Naruto!), and since the first chapter of the fic makes it clear he's spent the past 10 years paying for his mistakes. Can't wait for the next chapter! :)
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  • From runoutofaname on November 28, 2010
    Awsome! I love it! Hurry with the next chapter =)
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  • From ZeroZoey on November 27, 2010
    Oh boy, poor Naruto. I wonder who the guy way that cheated with Sasuke was and what caused it to happen and if it was the first time that it did, seems that the answer is no that was not the first. I hope you update soon. We are finally going to the main story, see if they get back together and how. Well thanks for the update, glad we know Naruto is alive, If I did not know I would have be ticked off with how it ended. Well please update soon, do not leave us hanging so long. thanks
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  • From ANON - Nejislady on October 22, 2010
    I really love when Itachi so brotherly toward Sasuke and vice versa.
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  • From ANON - Nejislady on October 22, 2010
    LMAO!!! Leave it to Kiba to make a dare that outrageously hot. Poor Sasuke.
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  • From ANON - Nejislady on October 22, 2010
    I understand the title more than ever now. I'm really interested in how the story will progress and how he came to be this way.
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  • From Hotanimeguysfan on September 12, 2010
    Chap. 3
    I can't believe what Naruto said....he's completely wrong and thinks to just explain it away....Sasuke needs to beat some sense into him!!!
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  • From Hotanimeguysfan on September 12, 2010
    Chap. 2
    Sasuke's going to kill him!!! LOL....bet Gaara isn't so happy now....Naruto did call Sasuke's name instead!! LOL :) Too funny!!!
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  • From Hotanimeguysfan on September 11, 2010
    Chap. 1
    I cant wait to read more.....this is such an fresh idea for a story.....I just LOVE IT!! From what I can tell Naruto is blind which tells me something bad happened to him.....I am so looking forward to finding out what happened to him and how Sasuke plans to get him back!!! :)
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  • From ANON - Ajablue on September 06, 2010
    Ok, I have been enjoying this story fairly well. It has it's issues here and there, but overall it has been entertaining. This chapter though has completely thrown me off. It almost feels as if we missed a chapter or two in between or as if it belongs to another story. I think that you probably have everything worked out in your mind, but there isn't quite enough written down for the reader to truly following what is happening.

    As another reviewer stated, I don't understand the 'they got me drunk thing' followed by 'I've been seeing Sakura for a while.' It just leaves me completely confused and thrown out of the story. I do believe there is a lot of potential in this story (I am a complete angst whore), I just think it would help if a few things were more clearly explained. I can completely understand someone wanting to get a little revenge when they felt they've been wronged, but I am not sure if this had anything to do with Sasuke's mindset or not. Giving us more insight into what the characters are feeling/thinking might go a long way in this.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 05, 2010
    Wow. That was a jump. Before I got to chapter 5, I was thinking the best analogy Sasuke could give Naruto so that he could understand how much he hurt him was to have him imagine him in Naruto's place, while Sakura was in Gaara's place at the party. But now, it's gone even further on Sasuke's side with full-on cheating. Did the cheating start before or after Kiba's party? I ask because I wonder how someone who has be hurt could willingly hurt their beloved even worse. Was there some spitefulness involved?
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