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Reviews for Can you see my Heart?

By : loveusender
  • From missbri88 on May 18, 2011
    So miss english major student... School should be letting out... I want a chapter and I wanna see it NOW! *speaking in Major boot camp voice*
    Please?
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  • From ANON - Kithicdame on May 07, 2011
    I nearly cried when i saw you updated! I hoped so bad for you to continue and finish this fic! I love it so much and my ultimate plot if i ever write a story! It may hurt that sasuke cheated but the pain he experience while trying to get naruto back makes up for it! I love it when it's sasuke who does the chasing this time instead of naruto like in cannon. Keep it up and more chapters soon!!!
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  • From ANON - mimi on April 21, 2011
    Hi! im so happy ur finaly back! when i first started reading this story my heart cryed 4 me forcing it to read this! this story makes my heart beat fast and painfuly...and i like it! Just please continue to write it, your one of the best writters out there! Thanks so much for contiueing the story!
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  • From moodysavage on April 13, 2011
    I am just now reading this story (where the heck have I been?) and it's really good. Sakura? *groan* I can't help it... I can't stand her. I can't even picture poor lee being saddled with her lol. This is going to be bittersweet though because even when they get together Naruto is still blind and they have wasted 10 years. But please keep writing... bittersweet is still good.
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  • From ANON - sooty99 on April 01, 2011
    woo keep this up, it's a good story and i wanna know what happens next :D
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  • From goodchaos on March 21, 2011
    ;_; AWWWW Poor Sasuke!!
    And is that what Sakura seriously saw or did she just lie her Ass Off!
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  • From ANON - rankin on March 18, 2011
    I'll spend 20 seconds *coz I type slooow!*
    The plot thickens, and I'm holding on to my seat. I hope you update again soon.
    This is really good! ^_^
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  • From alexxgalaxy on March 17, 2011
    I was a little confused who said what during Kakashi, Sakura and Naturo's conversation...

    When I first read the summary of this story, I thought Naturo somehow lost his memory. well, it might be the same to Sasuke. Being blind, Naturo's sense of smell should have developed more and yet he didn't recognize Sasuke's scent. I didn't feel bad for Sasuke, not at all. Plus, he's not in Naturo's life for so many years after all. What did he expect?
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  • From GlassesandWhatnot on March 17, 2011
    Great chapter. Poor Naruto!!! I'm excited, but also kind of dreading Naruto's and Sasuke's reunion, I hope it's not too heartbreaking.
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  • From Vidori on March 17, 2011
    Moooooooore!
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  • From ANON - Jen on March 17, 2011
    Glad you're continuing this. :) I'm a little confused over the current timeline. From what I understand, Sasuke saw Naruto at the concert and resolved to talk to him & get their relationship back in some form. Now he's been taken back to Konoha from Suna? Did Sasuke change his mind on talking to Naruto after the concert? Sasuke only plans to be in Konoha temporarily, right? (Depending on how long Neji wants to stay with Hinata.) It seems to me like he can't remain in Konoha permanently since he works in Suna, which it sounds like is 4 hours away? If that's the case, then why did Sakura also make the trip in the middle of the workday? (Surely her lunch with Naruto could have been pushed back later to a more convenient time.)

    I think Kakashi and Sakura's panic over Sasuke is a bit premature. They can't know if either guy wants to make contact with the other, and Naruto doesn't seem to have much memory of Sasuke. So why, after 10 years, would Sasuke suddenly be a threat?

    I'm also curious what happened after Naruto's accident that Sasuke would've had no clue he was blind. Did Sasuke drop him off at the hospital and then resolve never to see him again? That doesn't seem like something he would have done. But even if Kakashi & co. decided to bar Sasuke from the hospital after hearing why Naruto ran out into that street that night, I'd think *somebody* would've eventually told Sasuke what happened to Naruto, just because Sasuke would've been concerned about Naruto's recovery, right? (Seems to me it would make more sense if Naruto's eyesight problems occurred later on.)

    And I'm still curious from Sasuke's perspective, why things got as bad as they did after the two guys moved in together. How did Sasuke get so wrapped up in his job that he neglected Naruto like that? And what caused him to sleep with someone else when he was previously very big on monogamy? Maybe when they start talking again, we can finally hear Sasuke's explanation. It seems to me that no situation is black and white, that Sasuke may have made the biggest mistake in cheating on Naruto, but Naruto had to have contributed in some way to the deterioration of their past relationship.

    Looking forward to the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 17, 2011
    I didn't see that one coming. Sakura and Naruto? Poor kid had to up a loose his parents on top of everything. Usually ignorance is bliss, but in his case, it seems to only be partially so if he still manages to be so numb.

    Sasuke needs to get his butt kicked. Can't wait.
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  • From ANON - Tea on March 17, 2011
    Poor Sasuke... even though cheating on your boyfriend is terrible, he absolutely doesn't deserve this. Why are Sakura and Kakashi trying to keep Naruto in the proverbial dark about Sasuke anyway? It's cruel and selfish of them.
    This story is excellent so far! Keep it up=3
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  • From arabuzumaki on March 16, 2011
    I can't believe it's been 6 months lol. +1 for Kiba and Akamaru lol
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  • From tawanawelch on March 16, 2011
    Aww, that was a great make up but will Sasuke have Naruto make it up to him with embarassing treatment? LOL!!
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