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Reviews for Can you see my Heart?

By : loveusender

From ANON - Naomi on January 03, 2015
This is a really good story and I really can't wait to see what happens next! Please update soon!!!!
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From ANON - yumenohime-sama on June 29, 2014
Hi! I like this story of yours and i can't wait to read the continuation! So please, im begging you, update the story soon! TT^TT
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From ANON - Kyla on August 31, 2011
I just finished reading the latest chapter that came out and I can't wait for the next chapter.

This story has definitely pulled at my heart strings throughout it and I find myself desperately wanting to know what will happen next. Please, please, PLEASE! Write the next chapter when you have a chance too!
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From ANON - G on June 01, 2011
@evilchild666:

LOL! The plot of the fic was reminding me of a Korean drama, so it's funny to hear there's actually one out there that uses a similar storyline.

@loveusender:

I'm not really into soap operas, so like some other people, the blindness + amnesia (or even just the blindness in general), was not something I was real happy to see. It's too much drama for me. Still, I'll keep reading the fic because I really liked how Naruto and Sasuke were together in the flashbacks, and I really like stories about people trying to make amends and fix their mistakes. I'd like to see how Sasuke tries to get to know Naruto again and how he will figure out a way for them to move forward with their lives together.
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From ANON - evilchild666 on June 01, 2011
Do you know there's a korean drama with your same plot (not gay though)? It pretty much has the same title as well, except for 'see' they used 'hear'. I had almost thought you lifted the plot and fixed it to your liking until I saw you published this in january 2010, well before this drama even came out. You may want to check it out 'cause even though I only read the first chapter, from the summary and what I read of the reviews, that drama is pretty much this fic with a few changes
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From Hotanimeguysfan on June 01, 2011
We like lemons
Yes we do
We like lemons
How about you?

LOL :) ok I just woke up and am not awake lol
I just love this story!! Its AWSOME!!! I read each chap. up to ten last night and was up REALLLLLY Late....my eyes still feel like sandpaper...but for some reason evertime I tried to post my computer screen went completely blank ......stupid computer is a bucket of bolts and makes really strange sounds...ugh...so hopefully this will post....got my fingers crossed here.

I love how the characters are developing and the changes in the story line. (I am totally looking forward to the time Sakura is out of the picture....she will be right???? Begging here.....I just love Naruto and Sasuke together!!) You know ......wicked thought here Sasuke could go work out and get realllyyyyyy sweatyyyyy and then go near Naruto....would that bring to mind some very naughty thoughts for Naruto???? lol ok ya mind is totally in the gutter. LOVE THIS FICTION LOVE IT!!

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From Hotanimeguysfan on June 01, 2011
Chap. 4

So Naruto is keeping something else from Sasuke? Usually its always a good idea to listen to that little voice that tells you something else is wrong.....Poor Sasuke!! Worrie worrie
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From Hotanimeguysfan on June 01, 2011
Chap. 3
I feel so bad for Sasuke....Naruto was soooooo out of line and I am really surprised Sasuke didn't just take his head off for allowing it to happen. Naruto totally violated the trust they had in their relationship....its like he didn't even care....and the comment...he's not as good at it as you....he should be smacked upside the head again for that one......multiple times in fact....so wrong....poor Sasuke!!
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From moodysavage on May 31, 2011
I'm cheering for you Sasuke! I think he's been punished enough.
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From krissybear on May 31, 2011
SHUT UP JEN! GOD UR OVER THINKING IT JUST LET IT BE AND ENJOY THE STORY its not called fanFACTS its called fanFICTION meaning not truth could be completely and totally FUCKED UP and not make any type of sense whatsoever and it would still be a good story
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From ANON - Jen on May 30, 2011
Hmmm... So is Naruto's blindness the direct result of that accident he was in? I don't know, that just seems a little bit too much for Sasuke to overcome to me. People cheat, and mess up the relationships they are in, but then with time, a whole lot of effort, and a willingness to work and move forward, couples can get over bad things which have happened. But if Sasuke's actions were directly responsible for Naruto's condition, then that's not something they can ever get over. It'll be there every day, a glaring reminder of how badly things went in the past. How can Sasuke ever apologize or make up for it? And how can Sasuke, who already has a massive, massive guilt complex, ever forget about it either?

If Naruto's condition happened later on and didn't have anything to do with that accident, it would give Sasuke a tiny fighting chance, but if it was because of the accident, I don't know how they could get past it, certainly not with everything else they have to deal with. They have yet to have a proper conversation, Naruto doesn't seem to remember Sasuke, Naruto's memories of Sasuke (when he eventually gets them back) will be painful ones, Naruto currently has a girlfriend, AND all the people closest to Naruto (who have been there with him through all the difficult things he's gone through since the accident) don't approve of Sasuke and don't want him around. I just don't see how the two of them could overcome all of that--let alone overcome Sasuke's responsibility for Naruto's condition! It's almost better if instead of getting back together, if they just find a way to get closure on the past and say goodbye to one another once and for all. Some things really aren't meant to be, unfortunately, soul mate or not.
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From ANON - AJ on May 30, 2011
Truthfully, I've never had the experience of being deeply in love with someone, being forcibly separated from them, and then meeting them again after a long period of time, but even still, I'm having a hard time accepting the fervency of Sasuke's actions. Ten years--a whole decade--is a very, very long time. I don't really understand why he's so hell-bent on getting Naruto back now when he wasn't willing to do anything about it before. Feelings and situations change over time, and yet Sasuke is acting like everything just happened a few months ago, with his depression, his pronouncements to Tsunade and Kakashi, etc. I can understand that seeing Naruto rekindled some of his feelings, but if his feelings were so close to the surface all this time, and so barely-hidden that Itachi continues to walk on eggshells around him, it just seems hard to believe that he would have let things go for so long without trying to get Naruto back, no matter how hard everybody's families were interfering. (Sasuke certainly doesn't seem like he's going to let that get in his way *now*, but he let that get in his way before?)

I just think it would make more sense if Sasuke were a little more unsure about things. If he only wanted to reconnect with Naruto--in whatever way Naruto would be willing to accept--rather than insisting on reclaiming Naruto romantically. With so much time that's passed, I can't see Sasuke being so passionate about wanting Naruto back unless something were to happen which would REALLY rekindle all of his feelings (like spending time with Naruto and getting all those "old feelings" back). At this point, with them having barely spoken to one another, Sasuke can't be sure that he could still make Naruto happy (Naruto's current unhappiness may not have anything to do with the fact that Sasuke isn't in his life anymore! There's SO many different sources of unhappiness after all), or truthfully, that Naruto could still make him happy either. (People change, and after 10 years, both Naruto AND Sasuke have undoubtedly changed a lot.) If not that, then I think Sasuke's attitude would also make more sense if only a shorter period of time had passed since all of this originally happened, like 2-3 years maybe.

Well, besides that, I'm glad we finally got an explanation for why Sasuke acted the way he did in the past. It seems like he was put under so much pressure he didn't know how to cope with it? (And Naruto didn't know how to help him cope with it either?) I guess Sasuke now knows how to deal with stressful situations, or has Itachi carefully made sure that Sasuke would never have to be in that sort of situation again? I'm also glad that Sasuke has friends and people on HIS side--like Neji, Hinata, and Kiba--instead of everyone siding exclusively with Naruto. What Sasuke did to Naruto was bad very bad, but it's clear he's suffered as well, so no need to treat anybody in the story as 100% the bad guy.
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From missbri88 on May 30, 2011
You're welcomed to my 'boot camp voice' anytime. Lol. But I'm happy to see Sasuke standing up to Tsunade and her shielding/over protective demeanor. He better fight for what is his!
Don't worry about characters 'straying from the beaten path'. I believe that all authors have to make the characters their own in some way. And you've only tweaked them a little. I still love the story and I'm looking forward to more.
Are you getting physical therapy for your wrist? But get better and good luck with the job search; I'll be joining you in that endeavor sooner or later.
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From ANON - Anon on May 30, 2011
Personally, I could give a rats a** about how Sasuke feels right now. I'm surprised that he is managing to sway people to his side so-to-speak. What exactly is so bad about his life except that he realizes he screwed up, lost the best thing that ever happened to him and feels guilty. He basically stole the life that Naruto could have had with his self-centered attitude, which by the way, has not seemed to change. Soul mates don't treat one another the way that Sasuke treated Naruto. Even if he apologizes, what will that change? How in the world could Naruto ever trust him again? Not to mention the results of his betrayal are still present and has flipped Naruto's world. Sasuke couldn't give enough to a relationship with Naruto when things were better, why would Naruto believe that Sasuke could give even more of himself (genuinely and not as an obligation or because of guilt) now that Naruto is disabled? If Naruto took him back, what's to say that Sasuke wouldn't just say he was too stressed taking care of Naruto and cheats on him again as an escape? Naruto may be unhappy because he had hope for a life that never became reality, but that doesn't mean that Sasuke showing up in his life again with an "I'm sorry" will fix things. Some things that are broken, stay broken.

I find myself wondering what caused the accident that killed Naruto's parents. Was Naruto somehow involved? It's weird that his parents both died like that. Where was Naruto at the time?

Please update soon.
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From ANON - Krissybear on May 26, 2011
OMG WRITE MORE PLEASE! I CANT STAND IT ENDING THIS WAY SASUKE AND NARUTO HAVE TO HAVE A HAPPY ENDIIIIIIING!!!!!!!!! T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T
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