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Reviews for Undercurrents

By : Darkprism
  • From Twiggies on January 23, 2010
    Well, isn't this mysterious.
    Quite some was revealed, but there is still much to discover.
    Poor Shika, whoever hurt him, left some deep marks.

    Can't wait to read more!
    Keep writing and update soon again!
    By the way, I love Naruto and Sasuke, such horndogs, haha.
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  • From jordash00 on January 22, 2010
    So, you could not imagine my surprise when I saw that you decided to post this fic here at AFF. I cannot express how excited I am that Undercurrents is HERE!

    You are truly a goddess among fanfic writers and I can only truly hope that all who read this story will come to realize that fact as you continue to post chapters to this story.

    Now onto the review...

    Though I've seen it been done before, I must say that your take on Neji as the pursuer is done with such as freshness because he is not the "arrogant" Hyuuga heir that we usually see. It has taken him two years to finally come to grips with his feelings and build up the courage to confess to Shika. Though subtle in these first two chapters, there is a vulnerability about your Neji that I do find alluring and the fact that Neji Hyuuga; rich and powerful Neji Hyuuga, got down and dirty in a tee-shirt and sneakers. Yes, a small detail, but a new and refreshing one!

    I eagerly await the up and coming chapters of this fic!
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  • From arabuzumaki on January 22, 2010
    ShikaNeji is always amazing.
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  • From ANON - Tyra on January 22, 2010
    Ohh, interesting!
    Hmm, Shika seems so uncomfortable. Maybe he IS hiding something..
    He also said “I…know some things, too,” I'm itching to know wha exactly that is..

    Hehe, it's so cute how Neji really plans on.. should I say, seduce Shikamaru.
    Well, to show him that he really does care about him.

    I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
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  • From ANON - qwerty on January 22, 2010
    Interesting start. Keep going!
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  • From YojiKato on January 21, 2010
    There are few things I love more than a well written and interesting Neji/Shika fic. I can't wait to see where this goes. ^_^
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