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Reviews for Undercurrents

By : Darkprism
  • From Carousel on February 03, 2010
    I loved this. The after care scene was so sweet. =] I can't wait for more.
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  • From Prism0467 on February 02, 2010
    *raises hand enthusiastically* If I volunteer to bring the candle and the matches, can I join in? I'll even let Neji do the thing with the sandpaper if he wants...
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  • From ANON - Tarn Vedra 5 on February 02, 2010
    Gosh, this is such an amazing story. I can't wait to see what will be next. :) hehehe Neji is alarmed about every little thing which considers Shika, that is so cute, he really works hard in making Shika to feel comfortable and loved.
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  • From cynaga on February 02, 2010
    After reading chapter 12, I think I need after care~! Seriously, you are killing me with this. (I love it :) )
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  • From Carousel on February 02, 2010
    Not another cliffhanger! D:

    Aside from that, it's an amazing story. No such thing as too much smut.
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  • From Prism0467 on February 01, 2010
    Damn, I don't remember ever being this thirsty...
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  • From jordash00 on February 01, 2010
    Ughhhh, I wish I could have gotten the chance to review chapter 10 before you posted chapter 11, but since you posted the "smut" in two parts I will review those together.

    I really believe that I can honestly say that what occured in chapter 10 was one of, if not the HOTTEST scenes I have ever read. I cannot even call it "smut" because in my mind it was not smut. It was more of a deeper connection which involves trust on both parts of these men. I honestly felt like a "voyeur" being on the outskirts allowed in and almost out of place so to speak because of the actual act. As sensual as it was, Shikamaru turning and giving Neji, the driver, a birdseye view of his acts was such an act of trust for him. I felt like I should not have been there for it because it was such a private moment.

    And again, Neji trusting that Shikamaru would obey his every command without question even after learning a bit about his experiences. I also love Neji's control and his inner dialogue with himself has just the right bit of humor, which once again brings humaness to him. You let us know how conflicted he is with wanting to literally bend Shikamaru over the nearest surface and go to town, but his love for Shika prevents him form doing such.

    Please do not get me wrong. The actual acts themselves were so beyond hot, and I think this was the hottest I've EVER seen "uke" Shikamaru in solo action. The hottest moment for me was when his hand shot up to the roof of the car. Just like with the kiss in the club with Neji, such a small gesture, but you have such an ability to take the most "normal", "insignificant", "small", and possibly the most easiest gestures and movements that we take for granted and turn them into the biggest and most significant and sensual "things" depending upon the context in which you set them.

    Chapter 10 is my favorite chapter so far.
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  • From ANON - Tarn Vedra 5 on February 01, 2010
    You really adore to torture us slowly... :)
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  • From Carousel on January 31, 2010
    Need. More. Please update soon.
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  • From Carousel on January 31, 2010
    This chapter was brilliant, to say the least. Especially the part when Neji kissed Shikamaru's hand. I love it. I love it a lot.
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  • From Prism0467 on January 30, 2010
    Look, Neji was so good in that last chapter I was ready to get down on MY knees!
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  • From ANON - lo on January 30, 2010
    This is nicely written. You had a great set up and even at ch. 6 there is still a strong tension. Nice work.
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  • From jordash00 on January 29, 2010
    Once again, your attention to and eye for detail is nothing short of amazing. In both chapters your descriptions of Bliss placed me right in the club atmosphere. Also in chapter 8, the opening of the music set for the club- your descritpion of that left me speechless. I wonder was that something you made up or was that by experience? Either way, the ways in which you choose to depict your scenes are truly eloquent.


    Of course the interaction between Neji and Shika in chapter 9 took my breath away. I love how Shika seems almost unnerved and shaken by his desire for Neji. Seeing a genius let go is always brutally hot! Also, Neji's possessivess is a thing of beauty. And the scene where he is kissing Shika and looking at Kiba letting him know the way it IS! Mmmhmmm! For me, that was one of Neji's quintessential moments of honestly.

    Also, your last line of chapter 9 happens to be a derivitive of a line from one one of my favorite Prince songs from the Purple Rain sountrack. "Let's begin." The implications of the line after what occurred in the chapter can lead one's minds down so many roads. And the song Computer Blue, maybe not fitting for the chapter, but for Neji and Shika- yea!

    Oh yea, you've written side stories for Naru/Sasu, Gai/Lee, and now Gaara. I wonder, are you planning one for Kakashi and his partner?


    Definately looking forward to the upcoming chapter!


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  • From Prism0467 on January 29, 2010
    Neji x Kiba x Shikamaru= the sexiest threesome in the Naruto fandom.

    Holy f-ing shit.
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  • From cynaga on January 29, 2010
    you sure know how to tease us along . . . ;)

    waiting breathelessly
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