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Reviews for Undercurrents

By : Darkprism
  • From ANON - Tarn Vedra 5 on February 11, 2010
    Great chapter... It was so funny for me to read this chapter :) because it is so obvious that Neji can't put up with Sasuke ;) Sasuke is just too much for him, wild and manipulative, with the mind of his own... just like Sasuke said: Naruto owns his body but not mind hehehehe... Neji prefer more tamed and obeyed subs... but not Sasuke, he is just too much wild for him:) Sasuke is real challenge :)
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  • From ANON - Nivell on February 11, 2010
    Prima-donna Sasuke!! Oh man, I loved this chapter! And I love a submissive Neji although he's quite the seme in this story but damn, the boy is fiiine in a skirt. Too bad it's just pretend, lol. ;p Can't wait to see Kabuto get his ass kicked! Ooh and I would love to see more of Naruto and his slutty Sasuke!
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  • From Carousel on February 10, 2010
    Kabuto? =O I was surprised. I was expecting Hidan. Update again. I wanna know what happens. =]
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  • From LadyWolf on February 10, 2010
    You dress them up so gooD!!!! I would LOVE to see a picture of them!! They seem HOT!!!

    Post soon!!!
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  • From ANON - qwerty on February 10, 2010
    Ah! I cannot wait for Neji to exact his vengeance!
    Keep going!
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  • From ANON - Tyra on February 10, 2010
    Oh my God, I can't believe how delicious you made Sasuke and Neji look! Just awesome.
    Haha, If only Shika saw Neji now. In a slutty sub outfit. It seems dom AND sub seems fitting for Neji.

    Kakashi is of course hilarious. And very in control.
    It's so Sasuke and Neji to not get along with each other, but then again being able to wokr together.
    And also support each other when the need comes.

    After everything that man did to Shikamaru, I hope he will get what he deserves!
    Can't wait to read more! Keep writing and update soon again!
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  • From Prism0467 on February 10, 2010
    Chapter 14 was a separate story in itself.

    "Girls – don’t make daddy separate you two,” Kakashi said, breaking some of the tension. PRICELESS!

    Kakashi dressed as Cloud Strife is FTW.

    Neji calling Sasuke a bitch is ...I don't even know what that is.

    The scene in the club--unbelievable.

    They make pretty toys, alright.

    Someone PLEASE fanart Neji in a leather bandage-skirt and a leather/lace shrug. OMFG!
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  • From Prism0467 on February 07, 2010
    Damn DP, Carousel is so pissed she wants you to get Gaara's homocidal ass in on the shakedown! You have really stirred up something here!
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  • From Carousel on February 07, 2010
    I feel so bad for poor Shika. =[ I started crying...

    Please make the evil bastard's punishment awful. Get Gaara in on it. He doesn't give a fuck. Update soon, because this left me kind of violent.
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  • From ANON - Tarn Vedra 5 on February 06, 2010
    I must say that I can't wait what will happen next in chapter 14... Neji is furious :)
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  • From ANON - Nivell on February 06, 2010
    Ohmygosh, Darkprism, I wrote the wrong review under the wrong story! That previous review was meant for Leilita-chan. So sorry, please ignore this. *apologizes a thousand times*
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  • From HavocTellenoi on February 06, 2010
    Totally thrilled with this story so far, and the latest update has me curious as to who it was that damaged Shika and exactly how they're going to be punished for it. I cannot wait to see what else is in store for Shika and Neji. Keep up the excellent work and thank you for sharing this story with the rest of us. ^_^ N
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  • From Prism0467 on February 05, 2010
    Chapter 13 was one of two I didn't get to read before. I am very pleased to be able to read it here. I can't say I'm feeling much empathy for a sub who would exploit Shikamaru in that manner.

    And if Neji is in the mood to make breakfast, he can make a detour to my house sometime.

    One more thing: consider yourself honored that Gaia77 wants to draw you fan art. She is sensational. I wish I could do what she does.
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  • From ANON - lo on February 05, 2010
    Those last few chapters were intense. I like what you do with this relationship and how you are working it out. Nice job.
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  • From jordash00 on February 04, 2010
    Mmmhhh!

    But, there are a few things that just jumped at me here in these chapters and like I said before, it's so not the sex for me here. Although MIND BLOWING! Again you have such a talent for making the simplest things, well in this case "words" larger than life. Neji calling Shika "baby" in the midst of a "scene" and Shika relinquishing control of himself and calling Neji "Master" in the midst of a "scene".... I don't even think I have the words to describe the level of sheer intimacy that you achieved there. I think they were more "naked" in that sense than literally. In my mind, those moments overshadowed the actual sexual acts, because the acts equated to or climaxed (excuse the pun) in those moments. I am sure that many would disagree, but that is just my take.

    Neji and Shika through your words are simply beautiful!

    I cannot wait for the morning after. Those scenes are always my favorite!

    On a side note: cake and cookies are fabulous! And take your time on the note at ff.net... The fics are most important!
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