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Reviews for Undercurrents

By : Darkprism
  • From ANON - Nivell on February 18, 2010
    OH man, the last chapter was just delicious!! I wanted to see Neji get his beautiful skirt-wearing ass fucked by Shika and you provided it. Thank you!!
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  • From LadyWolf on February 17, 2010
    As always great chapter! I'm reading Gaara's story too and I think I've read the one when Sasuke come's to, I think Break and is suppose to sub for Kiba, but ends up subbing for both Kiba and Naruto...is that part of this world?

    I do love it when a good world comes together!!!

    Post soon!!

    P.S Neji/Shika are my #2 couple that I LOVE!!!!

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  • From Prism0467 on February 17, 2010
    I need a cigarette.
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  • From Carousel on February 17, 2010
    I loved this so much, like, it made my day. I wasn't expecting what Neji did and I thought it was fantastic. I'm thoroughly in love with this story.
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  • From ANON - qwerty on February 17, 2010
    That was amazing and certainly brighten up my day!
    Great chapter!
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  • From jessysuki on February 17, 2010
    Oh My God! I am officially addicted to your stories! All of them! The relationships and thw whole S&M, it's been a while since I first saw it so well writen! This chpater was amazing, just AMAZING! Can't wait to read the rest!
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  • From ANON - Shikeji on February 17, 2010
    I am so very intrigued by this. Its baffling and kinda off but interesting. I'm not used to Neji being the dominant one or Shikamaru being all issuey, yes its a word now, lol. And every once in awhile Neji's speech pattern is kinda ooc to me and I'm kinda against the over use of Shika for narration but so far those are the only things making me feel weird while reading. Not that it matters the story is written and can't be changed anyway other than those things so far and I'm on chapter 4, this is really interesting a keep me in my seat wanting more making me question whats next. I like it.
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  • From ANON - Tyra on February 17, 2010
    ''Neji-in-hot-outfit-semi-bottoming-to-Shika-while-he-says-THANKYOUSIR! ''
    Oh, that's just perfect!
    So hot! Shika acting all submissive and serving Neji, while still calling him Master and Sir,
    while Neji let himself be the dominant sub this time (and keeping control, even though he let Shika do as he pleased..
    And that was pleasing Neji. XD). That's just too hot.

    Awwww, the ending was so cute!
    By the way, ''Shut up, sir'' was a win.

    I hope you keep writing and update soon again!

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  • From ANON - Tarn Vedra 5 on February 15, 2010
    Chapter 15 was WOW :) I really didn't expect to target be Kabuto, I was surprised... but then in manga... well... he really likes to torment people but more mentally than physically,... and I really didn't expect Ibiki or Naruto to show up at all, and I really didn't expect that Naruto and Sasuke would interrogate Kabuto also,...

    I mean Naruto doesn't seem like that type at all to interrogate and torment people... I could imagine some other person like Gaara or Kiba or someone else to do so but Naruto and Sasuke who also doesn't seem a type to torment and interrogate at all... I am really sceptic about it.


    But nevertheless your talent of writing and portraying story is amazing without every doubt :)

    I enjoy every chapter :)

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  • From ANON - Tyra on February 15, 2010
    Haha, Naruto, Sasuke and Ibiki?
    Oh boy, that Kabuto bastard is in for a treat! ...a treat indeed.

    Anyways!
    Aww, I love it how ''shaken'' Neji is. He needs his Shika so much that he didn't even change??
    Oh yes, this is going to be awesome. But at the same time I worry how Shika would react if he found out exactly what Neji has been doing.
    And more importantly WHO.. That didn't come off right, but you see what I mean?

    And I have to say, the first time Neji stepped into his own car, in that particular outfit, I keep imagining him being pulled over by cops!!
    But what I really want to see, is Shikamaru's reaction!

    Keep writing and update soon again!
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  • From jordash00 on February 15, 2010
    So this is the chapter I was waiting for and it was not the "revenge" that I want to comment on here.

    Where I should have been focusing on Neji, once again Sasuke and Naruto stole the show for me here. And it all goes back to Sasuke's statement about Naruto having control over his ass and not his mind. Oh how wrong could Sasuke be!

    Your fics are like puzzle pieces and when one goes back to Breaking Point, which I am not sure where it fits in the timeline, and Breaking the Rules were I am sure is after Undercurrents, it is clear that Naruto does in fact OWN both Sasuke's ass and mind. I believe this assertation is perfectly clear in this chapter as well if one looks closely. And again, I give credit to you as a writer and the vivid images you create with your use of words. And once again, especially here, it's the "simple" gestures that make all the difference. Look at what occures with the knock on the door and Sasuke's immediate reaction. He moves away from Neji, where he was embracing another Dom and bows his head knowing his "master" is at the door. And what happens when his master enters? He is at his masters feet, eyes glazed, totally submissive, shivering, and holding onto the very instrument that Sasuke deemed his "most hated toy" in Breaking the Rules. Some can argue that Sasuke's reactions are merely trained physical ones and that the human body can be physically trained to have certain reactions to specific stimulus. Hmmm. I highly doubt that with Sasuke's genius brain that "that" scenario is valid here. His genius brain is "trained" to submit to "Master Naruto". It is just at this point in your world of Undercurrents that he has yet to realize that fact. Well, at least that is my interpretation of it. And that is the beauty of prose... it is up for the readers interpretation right?

    Now, I am a bit surprised at Neji though, but then maybe not. Everyone does have a tendency to "underestimate" Naruto's intelligence and I guess with Sasuke's behavior in the limo and Neji's state of mind, he was a bit thrown. I just get frustrated when everyone believes that Sasuke always one-ups Naru. So thank you again for that brief window into their relationship and showing us that Sasuke's mind and ass are indeed collard and leashed!
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  • From ANON - lo on February 15, 2010
    I love this story. I like the relationships you are weaving and how you develop character. The more I read the more I like this cast, nicely done.
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  • From Prism0467 on February 15, 2010
    This is the other chapter I hadn't had the intense pleasure of reading. Oh, Kabuto--reaping what you've sown has never been so profoundly painful! Ibiki?! I would have guessed that sending Gaara into the room would be bad, but Ibiki, Naruto and Sasuke?! I don't even want to know.

    LOL wouldn't it be funny if Neji were pulled over by a cop in that getup on his way to see Shikamaru?

    Excellent chapter as always, DP. ^_^


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  • From Carousel on February 15, 2010
    Another fantastic chapter in a fantastic story. I did kinda lol at the thought of Neji kicking the shit out of Kabuto in a skirt though. Xd
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  • From arabuzumaki on February 11, 2010
    I knew it XD I just had a strange feeling it was him. With him having Shika pretend to be a corpse >.> Total psycho bastard.
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