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Reviews for Undercurrents

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  • From ANON - Tarn Vedra 5 on March 12, 2010
    OH MY!!!!
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  • From ANON - Tyra on March 12, 2010
    Ooh, I really like this!
    Neji is such a gentle master, but definitely not a pussy. Wicked, should I say.
    I loved the scene with the wax and when Neji carved it off of Shika. Phew!
    And even though Shika screamed to stop, he didn't use the save words.

    Can't wait to see what else Neji has in store for Shikamaru. The punishment especially! Some spanking?
    I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
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  • From cynaga on March 12, 2010
    I wait for these chapters. I am never disappointed. Neji has unnatural self control!
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  • From ANON - HILDA on March 10, 2010
    i love your story even though i never see neji as seme much less dom.
    if you like this kind of stories the i bet you love to read enslaving heero it´s a gumdan wing fanfic by akuma
    you can find it here http://1x2x1.org/fiction.html
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  • From maybewhynot on March 10, 2010
    that was the hottest most twisted thing I ever read ... and I loved it :D

    I never cared for fetish & stuff but you sure caught my attention & left me up for more ... I almost felt sorry for being a female :s

    and seme Neji ... the - oh - so - hot - and - bossy - seme Neji ... I love him

    can't wait for the next chapter
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  • From ANON - qwerty on March 07, 2010
    I love this story! The anticipation keeps building and building! So good!
    Keep going!
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  • From ANON - Tarn Vedra 5 on March 07, 2010
    For chapter 20: WOW,... I mean... WOW. :)
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  • From Prism0467 on March 07, 2010
    Holy shit!
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  • From ANON - Tarn Vedra 5 on March 07, 2010
    This is such a great story that I had to read it again and I noticed something in chapter 8 and I have to ask: When Gaara said that he was irritated by humanity and about some person... Did he think about Kiba? Or is it just coincidence?
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  • From ANON - Shikeji on March 05, 2010
    OMG chapter 12 was wow! Brilliant and delicious like my favorite snack. Loved every minute of it especially the end with Neji listening to the sweet sounds of Shikamaru suffering I mean enjoying his release. With the whimpering the crying I loved it. But my favorite part was the very end with the bathtub and going to bed, Shikamaru waiting around because he didn't know what part of the bed to sleep in, so cute. Bravo you've made me a sadist.
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  • From Prism0467 on March 04, 2010
    God I love the way Neji handles his business!
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  • From Prism0467 on March 02, 2010
    Holy shit I've never wanted to be a fly on the wall so much!!

    They are in so much trouble...
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  • From ANON - Tarn Vedra 5 on March 02, 2010
    Amazing, just amazing chapter 19... I can't wait for next chapter. hehehe Shika's reaction on Neji's rules was so funny and so troublesome :)
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  • From Rianestorm on March 02, 2010
    Gah!!

    You tease!

    You.. you... It's not nice to get someone worked up and not give them anything. *pouts*
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  • From cynaga on March 02, 2010
    So nicely written~! You are particularly good at drawing out forplay/emotions of desire ... you probably are, or would make, a great Dom. ;)
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